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"Please, I just need to talk to you," by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ron and Hermione have a heartfelt talk about what used to be when Ron discovers that she is dying. Will they get everything sorted out before the time comes? Or, will the time even come? The couple finally realises that a life and death situation needs love; no matter how hard the odds are of overcoming it.

This was written as an assignment for Roxy Black’s class, OWL-Level Romance, for the Spring Term of 2007. I am in Hufflepuff!
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

OMG, that was so sad. Poor Ronald! You are such a great writer! I'm going to see your name on a best-selling novel one day, seriously!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you SO very much! You don\'t even know how much that comment made my day or made me smile. :) *hugs reviewer to death* Thanks so much, and I\'m really glad that you enjoyed it. ~Lindsey :)

Back to Boston by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione Granger doesn't know where her life is taking her. She is married to someone she doesn't love, and she is the "bad person" in the Wizarding World, and is shunned for some of the horrible choices she has made in her life lately. She now has an occupation that she loathes, but that doesn't stop her from going through with it, and doing what her boss tells her.

When she comes upon a mysterious, decrepit house, she finds a man that is willing to help her out with her current task. But he has other plans for Hermione . . .

Hermione wakes up in a traditional-style dress, and tries to figure out where in the world she is. She eventually discovers that she has been placed in the Salem Witch Trials, and she is trying her best to get out of that time period - without being burned at the stake first.

This story was written in response to the Spring Challenge – this is Prompt, A Shift in Time. I am Ron x Hermione of Hufflepuff.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Ticking Time Bomb

I read the whole thing and I liked it! I just want to read more about her repairing her life.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Meh, the last chapter was blatantly rushed because I chose to put it on hold because of all my other ideas ofr stories, and then I realised that the challenge was due the next day. So, yeah. I\'m glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 04/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Ticking Time Bomb

Yay! First review! That was awesome! Very unique. Poor Ronald, though. Keep on it, I like.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~Lindsey :)

Mortality by dashofmagic

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Everything was fine. There was pain and hurt at the death of their headmaster, but they were all okay. And then, he fell in love with her. And their romance would spark a betrayal unlike anything Harry had ever known. But it isn't just lost friendship Harry must worry about. There is an epidemic sweeping through Hogwarts and threatening to destroy the Wizarding World. And as his own health begins to deteriorate, will he have the strength to defeat the man behind it all? Or will the betrayal of his friend, in essence, destroy him?

This fic has not been abandoned!! I'm having a bit of writer's block in reference to the ending, but it is NOT abandoned.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 04/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Bell Tolls Seven

Wow, very angsty, but I love it. It seems very clean cut, though in a good way. Spectacular writing. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Harry seems a little too morbid, but I suppose it works.

Killer Instincts by Ginny Weasley Potter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.

Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harry’s ‘schoolboy crush’; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. What’s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.

Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?

Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?

Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsession… a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 5: Rebecca Palmer

Coolio. An update. Write more and post it. Pretty intruiging plot. I like very much. Wow. Randomness.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I like random people! :)

The Pursuit by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny are happily married with a baby on the way. When they manipulate Ron and Hermione into both meeting them for lunch, the last thing anyone expected was for Harry and Ginny to be kidnapped.

Suddenly Ron and Hermione are left with nothing more than a note and the realization it’s up to them to follow the clues and rescue the couple they both love and adore. If only the clues weren't nonsense. If only they knew who could possibly have taken Harry and Ginny. If only they didn’t hate each other. If only they hadn’t once loved each other.

Life just got a whole lot more complicated for Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.


"Harry was right: there was no such thing as understanding girls, no matter how old a bloke got."
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: The Man

Whoa! That was really good. You had me hooked in the first chapter. Now I just want to finish it! The first thing I thought at the end of this chapter was Madam Rosmerta when you said "curvy". Then I thought, Lavender! But, now, does that make sense!? Wow, I have no idea. But... great job, I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks! Being hooked is a good thing! :) You're not the first to suggest Lavender Brown, but Madam Rosmerta is a new guess! Alas, you'll just have to wait and see. . . .

Ron, I've Got Something To Tell You, But I Can't Say It by MrsRuebeusHagridDursley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In the purely fluff fic, Ron and Hermione are married, and expecting! But there's one problem. Hermione has lost her voice, and she needs to tell Ron about the pregnancy!
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ron, I've Got Something To Tell You, But I Can't Say It

I like your fluff.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Just For Fun by PeaceLovePotter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

When most of your teenage years are spent defeating dark wizards, or saving loved ones there’s not a lot of time to party. But if you’re Ginny Weasley there’s always a way, or a scheming plan. So for one glorious night, Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny are breaking all the rules. Beware this story includes best friends, crazy clubs, deserted beaches, margaritas, a horny hotel clerk, confused feelings and massive amounts of wild, outrageous fun!

This is my take on what should have happened between the summer before Harry’s (nonexistent) seventh year. It takes place on couple of nights before the wedding. So there is some AU, obviously being that they didn’t go out partying before Bill and Fleur’s wedding. But otherwise it flows with the series.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: Gin is an Alcoholic Muggle Drink

I like it! I'm really excited to read the rest. Update soon and good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The second chapter is already in the queue.

Pained Love by theworldonlyknows

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Many believe Tom Riddle was incapable of emotion, never mind love. Everyone at Hogwarts believed that Tom had only one goal, to succeed, and nothing else mattered. However, in the eyes of a squirrel an acorn is more beautiful than the sun, and in the eyes of Tom Riddle, Acenith was his acorn. But, it took him almost seven years to finally realise his true feelings; was he too late?

Tom Riddle loved once; after that he never loved again.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one: Eye's

I think that your story has a very good beginning idea. The start of this chapter was very very good. You had good choice of words and the style was very nice. However, when you started a new format in the sixth paragraph it got very rough. I'm nearly halfway through the first chapter, but there's some issues with clarity. You should try adding more detail about what is happening currently in your story right that second. The first misunderstanding I had was when you described Acenith wearing the long coat. Tom doesn't notice Acenith until a few paragraphs after that, and we really have no idea who Acenith is. I think your comment on her clothing would have been a good introduction to her character, but instead you went on to talk about the platform, and I felt kind of abandoned and left in the dark. The next part I noticed was the woman knocking over the boy's trolley. You said that Tom's trolley had less than half of the boy's belongings, and it took me a minute to figure that out. Then, when you started the next part in the Great Hall, I think you have some point of view errors, maybe you could check that out? I do, however, think that you have some excellent ideas and have made a nice start. I'm excited to read the rest, but I do think that you could work on making everything more clear.

Author's Response: Thank you for this, I will go and look through and adjust. Thank you. Nik x

Touching The Stars by Adeyla

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ginny stands in a meadow near her house, telling the wind how she feels about Harry, when something a bit out of the ordinary happens...
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/30/08 Title: Chapter 1: Touching the stars

That was definitely different. I really liked it a lot, though. I think you really captured the emotions very well. Great job. It made me think.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! its great to get feedback, good or bad!

My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg

Rated: Professors • Past Featured Story
Summary: Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...

"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."

This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!

Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/29/09 Title: Chapter 3: Warrior

I really like this so far, especially in this chapter. You portrayed Tom perfectly, especially at the end with his quick anger. I laughed out loud for "the moment that Dumbledore had been waiting for... and he was there to see it..." All in all, I'm positively itching to read more, so I'll give you a review at the end! Great beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you muchly. I think Dumbledore would find the whole thing amusing

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/29/09 Title: Chapter 22: Learn To Be Lonely

I promised I would review, so here it goes! First off, I wan to say that this is a great idea! And you have conveyed it very well. Tom is perfect; ridiculously intelligent, emotionally anguished, hopelessly in love, and hating himself for all of it. Keedie is the perfect character to throw in with him. Points for you, especially since you have developed her character so well! Good job. I really like how their relationship has grown, and I think the break-up was amazing; not everything can be a fairytale. All the same, I'm glad that they're back together. It's very intriguing, this story of yours. I think the couple of memories about the two of them meeting in the past have been very nice touches. All I can say is: keep it up! And hurry up with the next post, I'm dying!

Author's Response: Hi there! Nice to have a calm and normal review amongst the rabble, let me tell you! Next chapter´s in the queue, please keep up the R&R ing. =D

It Must Be Love by jenny b

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
There are many great and wonderful things in the world, but the greatest of all is perhaps love. And there is certainly no shortage of it within the Wizarding World.

For Elle.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: It Must Be Love

Magical. Beautiful. Charming. Gorgeous. Enchanting. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D