That One Crazy Night by Gryffindorgirl54321
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Very Fluffy! you are warned.
OMG! LEANNA! How'd you get that in! It's too short! YAY!
Author's Response: Hey Alicen i didn\'t even count the words!
Sequel Of Suggestion! by FriendsOfSnape
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 325]
Summary: It's baaaaaack...........
As the name implies, the ever-wacky, ever-evil Power Of Suggestion has returned to Hogwarts! What insanity will occur this time?
Note that this is a sequel (duh), so it's strongly advised to read the first part first. Just check my author page for a link!
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Chappie nine is UP! Enjoy!
Ha, you said Weezer. Good job on everything!
Author's Response: Why yes, yes I did.
It Takes Love to Live by Lil Red
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 22]
Summary: This is the story of a girl, who falls in love with a boy. Sadly, this boy has to save the world. He refuses to love the girl until she's safe.
Ginny Weasley thought it couldn't get worse after her boyfriend, Harry Poter broke up with her. Little did she know, Harry was coming back to the Burrow, but not to see Ginny. He refuses to yield to her pleas of love, but love may be the only thing he has to help him survive.
Will Harry discover it takes love to live?
Prequel to Hero and Fortune Favors the Brave.
Rating for later chapters.
Written pre-book 7, so Book 7 Disregarded
Ok, mayve I worded that wrong. I should have said I could guess your age. I think it would be a good idea to extend your vocabulary. I really liked it though. Don't take it the wrong way. It was good, but we can improve everything :-) !
Author's Response: I\'m a perfectionist, so your commen will not only make me crazy trying to improve my writing, but it\'ll actually help me improve my writing!
Hey, I liked it, but I could tell you're a beginner.Try putting in more descriptions. I still like it though!
9/10!
Author's Response: Note to self: Finish next chappy. Anyway, yeah, in the original chapter, there were more descriptions and all that good stuff, but when I was typing and editing, I couldn\'t put them in because I always ended up on a different track than I wanted to be on.
A Stolen Past by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 428]
Summary:
Fifteen-year-old Harry Potter wakes up in his cupboard under the stairs at number four, Privet Drive with no memory of the past five years of his life. What happened to his memory? What do his strange dreams mean? And most importantly, how will he survive in a school for incurably criminal boys?
This is primarily a mystery, with a bit of shippiness thrown in here and there. Of course, if I told you WHO is involved in the shippiness, that would ruin part of the mystery, wouldn’t it?
This story takes place immediately after OotP (and thus disregards HBP).
Hmmm. This is interesting. I really want to read more. Good job for the opening chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks very much.
Sleeping With The Enemy by SnorkackCatcher
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 34]
Summary: "I can't see her -- Her! -- in the next bed, not through the hangings -- but I can hear her ... She's lying there peacefully, not a care in the world, while I'm lying here crying on my pillow ... After all, it seems She's the one Ron wants." Hermione/Ron/Lavender triangulation, set during HBP.
That was very nicely written. The thoughts were played out good and making everyone think it's Hermione talking was just so foolishly crafty and cunning! Very good.
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad the cunning plan worked. :)
Teacups are the Nemesis of Small Furry Animals by InkandPaper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]
Summary: During the first scene in HBP, Fudge turned a teacup into a gerbil, and the Prime Minister 'gave the gerbil to his delighted niece'. Here is the tale of the girl Annabel, and the rather unfortunate gerbil named Teacup...it's canon!
Intriuging.
Author's Response: Was it? Interesting perspective :)
An Unclear Past by Winged Artemis
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 52]
Summary: It's years after the trio is out of Hogwarts, Harry's found all of the Horcruxes, Voldemort's dying slowly and the Death Eaters are receding. All of the trio are married, and life is swell. But with one last flourish, Voldemort attacks Harry and Ron. The two defeat Voldemort, but lose their memories of their past since their first year, along with You-Know-Who, leaving Hermione, Ginny, the Weasleys and Harry and Ron's kids help nurse them back to sanity.
Author's Note: The Violence is mild in the first and fourth chapter, there is a bit, so I added a Violence warning. It's not graphic, though.
Currently on hiatus. See profile for more information.
Again, I loved it! Update soon, great plot, it did clear a lot of things up. I LOVE that you made Draco good, I don't believe that he's really as bad as he seems.
Love,
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'ll try to update... er... relatively soon!
This sounds really interesting! Maybe I should read it...?
Author's Response: Haha.
Author's Response: maybe you should!
Oooooh! I like it so far! I'll definately read on! Better do that, now.... Also, I found one place that you might want to revise:
She pulled out a book and started to read, but she couldn't digest the scribbles of ink on the pages. To her, it was a blank page with black scribbles on it.
It's the second paragraph. You used scribbles twice. I don't know if you wanted it to be like that or not, but it sounded weird to me. Otherwise, I loved it!
Author's Response: I realized that - I waas rereading it to a friend and I was like, \"uggggh. That sounds bad.\" I\'m working on another fic at the same time as the third chapter, so I don\'t really have time to fix errors. But thanks, I\'ll get around to it....someday.
I don't think they wer really out of character. I liked it. I'm going ot put it on my favorites! Yes I am! I can't believe you killed Ronald, though! WAHHH!
9/10
Author's Response: lol, thank you.
HUHA! Ron's not dead! I was reading the reveiws. Yeah. I was kind of wondering because it sounded like they were both alive in the summary. YAY! He's not dead! He's not DEAD! Coolness.
Author's Response: Yes, Ron will be alive....eventually! *dun dun dun* and the plot THICKENS!
Beeping Boxes by Wand_Waver2006
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Ron, kicked out of the Leaky Cauldron for the day, goes in search of a thing Neville calls a "micawave". Is looking at Muggle-made objects really as interesting as his dad makes it out to be?
The One-Shot challenge--Muggle Artifacts by Wand_Waver2006 of Ravenclaw House.
That was kinda funny. You should extend it. Write another chapter or a sequal or something.
Author's Response: Hmm, I\'ll think about it, thanks for the review!
The Man in the Box by the_evenstar
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]
Summary: What happens when Ron gets a midnight visit from a strange man in a glowing box?
One of five finalists in The One-Shot Challenge – Muggle Artifacts.
O-M-G! That was so FUNNY! And so very well written! I AH-DORE IT! 10/10!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I\'m so glad you enjoyed it! :D <3
Summary: Dudley Dursley never hated Harry Potter, but he did want what was in his room. Humour, one shot - post GOF.
HAHA! That was interesting, in a good way! YAY for interestin'! Okay, I'm done. I et very giddy sometimes, don't worry I'm normal. However, some people call me weird. Have you ever thought that maybe they're the weird ones and I'm just normal? Okay, back to the reveiw. I liked it. It was simple and enjoyable to read. It was pleasantly easy to understand. It was somewhat funny, though not to the extent to where I would giggle. Trust me, I giggle a lot. The one time when I got my friends underwear, we were at a sleepover, stuck on the ceiling.... Whoa! I probably woke up the whole neighborhood! Trust me! Anyways, I'm babbling. I think I'm gonna go ahead and stop it here. I liked it though.
10/10 Love it!
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Thanks - I think :)
Draco's Trick-or-Treat by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 88]
Summary: Three-year-old Draco goes trick-or-treating for the first time. His mother takes the opportunity to teach him some lessons and Malfoy family values that she believes will be important to her son later in life. This depiction of Draco is VASTLY different from the version of him that I write in "The Dark Lord's Blog."
Ridiculously short one-shot.
Oh, that poor little girl! It justs goes to show that people end up how they are because of their parents. Very nicely done.
9/10
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I\'m glad you got the message in the piece! ^_^
Harry Potter and the Wicked Dream by Ron x Hermione
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 24]
Summary: When Harry Potter is battling the Dark Lord, Voldemort, will he sacrifice everything so there will be peace in the Wizarding World for his friends and more generations to come? Yes.
But what will happen... If Harry realizes that it has all be a dream?
All reviews will be responded to. Thanks for reading and enjoy!
That was a really nice, cute one-shot! I loved it! I always thought of it something like that if J.K. Rowling was going to have fun with our minds! LOL! I really did like it though! Gr8 job!
9/10
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for your review! I\'m glad that you liked it so much!
After the Rain by JC_Cainstone
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Tonks is pregnant with Remus' baby, but Remus was killed in the Final Battle. Trying to escape her world of misery, who can she turn to?
This story was OK, but it was kinda fluffy. It went fast and it seemed a lot of things depended on luck and chance. It wasn't BAD, though. Try spacing the events out, and putting in more details.
6/10
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time for reading it. I know it went kind of fast and I was trying to avoid that, but at the same time I didn\'t want to linger too much on one emotion or scene, so I\'m sorry you picked up on it. Thank you so much again for reviewing, and next time I\'ll try harder!
When Did You Fall In Love With Me? by CantLetItGo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 31]
Summary: Secret love is revealed for two people battling with their own demons, causing them to take a step back and ask some important questions...
Tonks put her hands on the sides of his face, turning it towards her, forcing him to look at her. She took a deep breath as Remus gently placed one of his hands over hers. He could feel her hand shaking under his own. She looked into his eyes.
“But do you love me?”
*Set HBP*
Check out the sequel "What Is Love?"
Wow, I liked it! OH! I', reveiwer! YAY! I get to be special! It was really good, and I hope you write more. I think the grammer, spelling, writing and vocabulary were all up to standards. I hope you write more and keep up the good work! :-)o
10/10
~AliKt716~
Author's Response: Thanks very much!! I should be submitting the next chapter later today *crosses fingers it gets through OK* Thanks for your lovely review!
HEY! I looked at my reveiw and the sentence is corupted! AUGH! The sentence that says "I', reveiwer!" is supposed to say "I'm the first reveiwer!" ha. haha. hahahahahahaha!
Still love it! I'm gonna go read your other story!
Author's Response: Lol, the gremlins corrupted the review! I don\'t mind, it means I get a double review for this chapter! ;) Thankyou so much, it\'s brilliant to hear people like it!