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"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06

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Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 51: A New Friend

Is it Cole!? WOW! You've got me hooked!

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Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 54: She Speaks

Yeah, I REALLY hate him!

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Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 55: A Visit To Azkaban

OMG! You're gonna kill Katy aren't you!

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Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 60: Moving On

Quote: With all the tears flowing, it was a surprise that not one person in that room was sad.

JKR Character: Lily

Other: Katy, Halle

Villain: Venus, Peter

Part/Chapter: When Halle woke.

Couple: Halle/Sirius so sweet!

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Date: 09/13/06 Title: Chapter 34: Fall To Pieces

OMG! Eloping teens!

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Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 15: Wisdom of Dumbledore

Very good fluff! Very nice work!

10/10 so far!

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Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 18: A Friend's Betrayal

I kinda understand how Peter is feeling. Not empathy, but, yes, sympathy.

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Date: 09/12/06 Title: Chapter 31: She Returns

YAY! I knew Halle would come back! I'm phsycic! No. Wow! Very good. I was shocked when she was hit! Halle is too improtant of a character! Anyways, very nicely done!

10/10 so far.


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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/08/06 Title: None

It was good, but short! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!


Life Goes On by scarlet phoenix feathers
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 581]

Summary: The war is over and the Weasley's along with Harry and Hermione try to get on with their lives. Harry and Ron leave to fulfill their childhood dreams. Hermione, with the assistance of the new Minister of Magic, opens a new department in the Ministry, and Ginny finishes her last year at Hogwarts and then begins a career of her own.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 46670 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
11/06/04 Updated: 01/29/05

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 21: Anger Unleased

You're a good writer and I love the story, but I really didn't like how you had all of the women stay behind. You made them seem incapable which is quite the contrary. Fleur was in the TriWizard Tournament and I thought it was out of character for them, especially Angelina, Fleur, and Cho.


Midnight Chills by Narcissa
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 67]

Summary: Severus Snape had just suffered the most humiliating moment of his life... or had he? The nickname Harry should have seen, worse than Snivellus. (language warning!)

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 903 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Chills

It was definately interesting. I do think the cursing made it highly unpleasant to read though. The 'f' word is not a nice word at all, and you really shouldn't say it that much like that. Perhaps you have Tourette's? I feels forced, like you thought it would be funny to call him 'Shrivellus' and wrote the fic purely for that reason. I would suggest placing it in a different category, as I did not find it all too funny, besides the ending, which I stated my thoughts on. I like your writing style, but there was just no point to this story. Try again.


Summary: What if, in the 1300s, Hogwarts was a kingdom? Follow the story of the young Prince of Hogwarts, a fair maiden, and one, not-so-orthodox fairy godmother. (AU)

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17118 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
11/18/04 Updated: 07/03/05

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Negotiations

That was cool! I loved the quote: "..."Divorce is something they only do at Durmstrang"..."! Good plot ideas!


Summary: If Hermione hadn't met the boys on the train that first day, things would most certainly be different. Featuring Metro!Ron, Loser!Harry, Stalker!Hermione, and Smoker!Ginny.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4502 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
11/24/04 Updated: 11/24/04

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls



October thirty first by padfootprongs
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: A poem in which tells the tale of the night Voldemort killed Harry's parents. It's lots better than it sounds. EXCERPT: As James drew his wand as his enemy cried "Avada Kedavra!" and then poor James died Please, Let me know you care! You reveiw my fic, and I'll reveiw yours!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 281 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/05/04 Updated: 12/05/04

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: October thirty first

That was a pretty good ryhming poem. It couldn't pass for sensory, but it was still good!


Summary: This is basically Ron's diary. It doesn't really get funny until part two. This takes place sometime after fourth year. This is just Ron writing down...well whatever you write in a diary! Oh there is a little bit of language and a little bit of crude humor. I hope you like it!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3915 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
12/12/04 Updated: 02/17/05

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: Chapter 4: PART FOUR

OMG! That was hysterical! Write more!


Strictly Ballroom by goldenprincess
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 185]

Summary: Hermione takes a drastic decision to leave the wizarding world behind in favour of her dream of becoming a dancer. Her departure has a drastic effect on Ron's life, and when they are unexpectedly thrown together years later, there's sure to be fireworks once more. Based on the UK TV show 'Strictly Come Dancing'.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 46762 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
12/28/04 Updated: 09/25/07

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

This is getting good!

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Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11


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Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 08/15/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Love it! Really unique and I like how you've portrayed your characters. Particularly Ginny. Very believable. Please, please update soon!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/14/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Hehe! I actually like it! I LOVE R/Hr! This is pretty good so far. I'll have to read the rest tomorrow! The only thing that quirks me is that Hermione isn't really the dancing type. Its still good though!

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