Lily and James: Their Story of Love by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 3878]
Summary:
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
Is it Cole!? WOW! You've got me hooked!
OMG! You're gonna kill Katy aren't you!
Quote: With all the tears flowing, it was a surprise that not one person in that room was sad.
JKR Character: Lily
Other: Katy, Halle
Villain: Venus, Peter
Part/Chapter: When Halle woke.
Couple: Halle/Sirius so sweet!
Very good fluff! Very nice work!
10/10 so far!
I kinda understand how Peter is feeling. Not empathy, but, yes, sympathy.
YAY! I knew Halle would come back! I'm phsycic! No. Wow! Very good. I was shocked when she was hit! Halle is too improtant of a character! Anyways, very nicely done!
10/10 so far.
by
Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Life Goes On by scarlet phoenix feathers
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 581]
Summary: The war is over and the Weasley's along with Harry and Hermione try to get on with their lives. Harry and Ron leave to fulfill their childhood dreams. Hermione, with the assistance of the new Minister of Magic, opens a new department in the Ministry, and Ginny finishes her last year at Hogwarts and then begins a career of her own.
You're a good writer and I love the story, but I really didn't like how you had all of the women stay behind. You made them seem incapable which is quite the contrary. Fleur was in the TriWizard Tournament and I thought it was out of character for them, especially Angelina, Fleur, and Cho.
Midnight Chills by Narcissa
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 67]
Summary: Severus Snape had just suffered the most humiliating moment of his life... or had he? The nickname Harry should have seen, worse than Snivellus. (language warning!)
It was definately interesting. I do think the cursing made it highly unpleasant to read though. The 'f' word is not a nice word at all, and you really shouldn't say it that much like that. Perhaps you have Tourette's? I feels forced, like you thought it would be funny to call him 'Shrivellus' and wrote the fic purely for that reason. I would suggest placing it in a different category, as I did not find it all too funny, besides the ending, which I stated my thoughts on. I like your writing style, but there was just no point to this story. Try again.
4/10
A Cinderella Story - In the Universe of Harry Potter by Powerful_Quill
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 308]
Summary: What if, in the 1300s, Hogwarts was a kingdom?
Follow the story of the young Prince of Hogwarts, a fair maiden, and one, not-so-orthodox fairy godmother. (AU)
That was cool! I loved the quote: "..."Divorce is something they only do at Durmstrang"..."! Good plot ideas!
Why Hermione Is Different Than All The Other Girls by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 72]
Summary: If Hermione hadn't met the boys on the train that first day, things would most certainly be different. Featuring Metro!Ron, Loser!Harry, Stalker!Hermione, and Smoker!Ginny.
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
October thirty first by padfootprongs
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]
Summary: A poem in which tells the tale of the night Voldemort killed Harry's parents. It's lots better than it sounds. EXCERPT: As James drew his wand as his enemy cried
"Avada Kedavra!" and then poor James died Please, Let me know you care! You reveiw my fic, and I'll reveiw yours!
That was a pretty good ryhming poem. It couldn't pass for sensory, but it was still good!
The Secret Files of Ronald Weasley by Ronsbiggestfan09
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 125]
Summary: This is basically Ron's diary. It doesn't really get funny until part two. This takes place sometime after fourth year. This is just Ron writing down...well whatever you write in a diary! Oh there is a little bit of language and a little bit of crude humor. I hope you like it!
OMG! That was hysterical! Write more!
Strictly Ballroom by goldenprincess
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 185]
Summary: Hermione takes a drastic decision to leave the wizarding world behind in favour of her dream of becoming a dancer. Her departure has a drastic effect on Ron's life, and when they are unexpectedly thrown together years later, there's sure to be fireworks once more. Based on the UK TV show 'Strictly Come Dancing'.
Love it! Really unique and I like how you've portrayed your characters. Particularly Ginny. Very believable. Please, please update soon!
10/10
Hehe! I actually like it! I LOVE R/Hr! This is pretty good so far. I'll have to read the rest tomorrow! The only thing that quirks me is that Hermione isn't really the dancing type. Its still good though!
9/10
