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I love to write. I also love Harry Potter, so the two blend together beautifully, don't they?

My James/Lily fic, Never Too Late For Love, is up!

And now my chaptered project Al Potter, Chapter 1 is up as well. =)
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Dear Lily by chloish
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 219]

Summary:

Messrs. Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs -- These names are known by every person in Hogwarts. These names, and an envelope with a scarlet wax seal bearing the letters: MWPP.

The teachers dread it, the students revel in it...but who are these 'Marauders,' as they are called? That's just it. Nobody knows. Most every prank Hogwarts sees is at the hands of these mysterious Marauders, and the perpetrators always walk free. They could never be caught. You canít catch phantoms.

Lily Evans is just as curious as the next student as to who these Marauders are, but her curiosity is transformed into a hungry need, when she receives a letter herself from a certain Mr. Prongs. [This story is slightly AU, but more on that in the author's note at the end.]

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 12035 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/18/05 Updated: 01/28/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Prongs, indeed.

I liked it a lot! I can not wait to read the next chapter. But I do have one question- what does 'AU' stand for???

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: I do.

Well, it was good, but I kind of wish there was more to it, you know? A bit of a cliff-hanger. *sigh* But this was brilliant, I liked reading it a lot....good job!

 

From Abomination to Adoration by grape_2010
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 609]

Summary: What caused Lily to loathe James and James to loathe Lily? How did they come to fall in love? What bumps and bruises did they acquire along the way? From hexing to comforting, this is the way it all started. Endure dangers and hardships, perplexity and mind games, and matters of the heart.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66511 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/15/05 Updated: 12/06/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Multo Subvenio, Lily's Saving Grace

I'm a tad bit creeped- i hope James won't find out that Snivellus has the hots for Lily......hm. I hope not....:) good job!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 16: Life Goes On

HOW-DARE-SHE!!!! HOW DARE SHE!!! HOW DARE THAT SNEAKING LITTLE M- No, I will not say it! BUT SHE DESERVES TO BE CALLED A M- ahem. THAT SNEAKING LITTLE CHEATER! HOW-DARE-SHE! She cheated James! She cheated him full on! Lily was with James, she knew it well, and then she goes and KISSES his enemy, may I add, and does it full and well! THAT FILTHY MU- No, i will NOT say it.....how COULD she do that to James?!?! She doesn't deserve such a loyal, kind guy!!! How could she! FILTHY LITTLE MUD- I refuse to say it. Darn it, I want to.....filthy little cheater....I can't believe she did that to james! *fumes* FILTHY LITTLE MUDBLOOD! ohmygosh, I said it....urgh! and I MEAN it! FULTHY LITTLE MUDBLOODY CHEATER! I hope James ditches her for it!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 16: Life Goes On

HOW-DARE-SHE!!!! HOW DARE SHE!!! HOW DARE THAT SNEAKING LITTLE M- No, I will not say it! BUT SHE DESERVES TO BE CALLED A M- ahem. THAT SNEAKING LITTLE CHEATER! HOW-DARE-SHE! She cheated James! She cheated him full on! Lily was with James, she knew it well, and then she goes and KISSES his enemy, may I add, and does it full and well! THAT FILTHY MU- No, i will NOT say it.....how COULD she do that to James?!?! She doesn't deserve such a loyal, kind guy!!! How could she! FILTHY LITTLE MUD- I refuse to say it. Darn it, I want to.....filthy little cheater....I can't believe she did that to james! *fumes* FILTHY LITTLE MUDBLOOD! ohmygosh, I said it....urgh! and I MEAN it! FULTHY LITTLE MUDBLOODY CHEATER! I hope James ditches her for it!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 16: Life Goes On

HOW-DARE-SHE!!!! HOW DARE SHE!!! HOW DARE THAT SNEAKING LITTLE M- No, I will not say it! BUT SHE DESERVES TO BE CALLED A M- ahem. THAT SNEAKING LITTLE CHEATER! HOW-DARE-SHE! She cheated James! She cheated him full on! Lily was with James, she knew it well, and then she goes and KISSES his enemy, may I add, and does it full and well! THAT FILTHY MU- No, i will NOT say it.....how COULD she do that to James?!?! She doesn't deserve such a loyal, kind guy!!! How could she! FILTHY LITTLE MUD- I refuse to say it. Darn it, I want to.....filthy little cheater....I can't believe she did that to james! *fumes* FILTHY LITTLE MUDBLOOD! ohmygosh, I said it....urgh! and I MEAN it! FULTHY LITTLE MUDBLOODY CHEATER! I hope James ditches her for it!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 17: Shifted Winds, Turned Sails: A Changed Direction

I'm still miffed about Lily cheating on james at severas, and now I hope that lily won't ever get back with James again. urgh, and I also hope that sirius and james will beat jessica flanning up. oh, and that lily and james won't get back together. Sadly, and far too predictably, James will come to the rescue, hold Lily in his arms, she'll take him back in a wink of the eye, and then jessica flanning will be forgotten and ignored, and no longer part of the story, and then you'll end it somehow with the birth of harry or the death of the couple. *sigh* things are far too predictable. now, if I dare hope to complicate things by adding a rescuing Severus Snape, whom betrays the Dark Lord, aids Lily in her escape, then James runs in, scowls at Sev and takes Lily back. I think I fancy that waay better. :) i like predicting.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 18: Taken Hostage

ooh, angsty. Hm. Well, for some wacked up reason, I always hate it when things work out. I mean, Lily totally blew off James for 'cheating' and I think James is....in need of it. I dunno, but she shouldn't just take him back. Actually, I'm still stinging from the fanfic 'Someone to Watch Over Me, by MagEd' because...well, read it yourself then. But really, James probably can and will dump her- Lily is sort of just his challenge, hm? I hope they straighten it out and Heroic Snape makes an appearance. I'm growing attacged to your story, grape_2010! Good job!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 20: Separated from Some, Reunited with Others

Lovin' it! I suddenly like it a lot all of the abrupt sudden! Pete's a rat! Charlie and Sirius sadly won't last! Yaay! The mirror might just work! Now this next chap: lemme guess, james and lily are torn apart, watch the other get tortured, or the mirror is smashed and its just luck they all escape. OR: The mirror thingy works, they cook up a plan, dumbledore and co. help and everyone gets away happy. :) I'm soo good eh? =)

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 24: No Happy Endings Here

That is what I absolutely hate and love about all the lily/james fanfiction. It always ends miserable- and it always makes me cry. Well, Ms. or Mr. grape_2010, you did a fabulous job at this. I liked it so much- and you managed to get a good storyline without succumibng to my predictions......hehe......great job, anyhow! Every time i read a lily/james fic, I'm inspired to write one. Now really, I have to say, I think I finally have the motivation to actually write it. Well.....so be it! Great job, I knew you were good.

Author's Response: I know what you mean about being disappointed with the way it ends. It was tempting to make up my own ending, but I just couldn\'t. Some readers don\'t like the way I ended it, but that\'s the way it was. I\'m very glad you liked my story, and I appreciate the long reviews. Thanx!

 

Summary: Consumed by her thoughts, Lily pours them out to a friend, only to find the wrong person hear them. Or is it the right one? One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1027 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/05 Updated: 02/26/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Yeah, here it is, July 7, 2007, and a lot of info in this isn't perfectly adequate. But it's a sweet story, and you follow it closer than one might. Good job, it's sweet.

 

A Lesson In Charms by midnight_me
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: Lily is in the common room studying, when James walks in and starts being, well, James. Heís taking her things, and interrupting her work. Eventually, the two have a civil conversation, and Lily decides maybe she could teach James something, after all. Set in their sixth year, this is a fluffy Lily/James one-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 937 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/13/05 Updated: 12/13/05


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Lesson In Charms

Awwe, I like it a lot! i really like fluffy Lily/James fics....aren't I weird? Well, good job!

 

Puzzled Silence by Caren H
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 95]

Summary: As the kiss grew deeper she didnít analyze what was happening to her, why she was kissing him back, and why he was kissing her. For once she didnít think at all. And she was okay with not knowing all the answers.

This piece is a seventh year, One-shot concerning Hermione and Draco that will either puzzle you, or intrigue you. I might warn you of slight AU, it depends on your take on this piece. We already know that this couple wouldn't exist in canon anyway, so please bare with. This was my very first HG/DM pairing and I did my best to avoid any...cliche's with this complex couple. And really, let my know your opinions. Criticism, flames, well hopefully not, or kind words are deeply appreciated.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1383 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/06 Updated: 01/02/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 11/21/10 Title: Chapter 1: Puzzled Silence

Definitely an excellent start, but why on earth didn't you finish it? It seems to me that Hermione and Draco's story has just started.

 

Everywhere by harry_potter_star
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 61]

Summary:

Lily Evans has never particularily liked James Potter, but when she decides to look at him in a different light, she may change her mind... One shot song-fic, based on the song Everywhere by Michelle Branch.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2059 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/09/06 Updated: 01/23/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Everywhere

Awwe, that was so sweet!!! I liked it a lot!!

 

Potions by Soap
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 763]

Summary: Hermione and Draco - an unlikely pair - go from intense dislike to true love in this story.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 49002 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/19/06 Updated: 01/11/07


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 11/21/10 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue - Hogwart's

I love your story!!!!! It was magnificently written from start to finish and I must say I love the ending. And the beginning. And the middle. I was sad when Malfoy went bad, but thrilled when he turned good =P the whole thing is awesome overall.
P.S. The Ravenclaw thing, and Luna, was epically hilarious !!
P.P.S. Favoriting the story, and gonna look up your other stories. Your writing's really excellent!

 

All In Eight Seconds by Chellaei
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: All it took was eight seconds. Eight seconds for two people to decide two very different things. This is a one shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1006 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/02/06 Updated: 02/02/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just Eight Seconds

Oh, wow, this is soo sweet!! i reaaally like it! Good job!

 

Summary: Eleven-year-old James meets Lily in Diagon Ally, about a week before school starts. Snippets of James's feeble attempts to make Lily come to her senses, from first year to seventh. Nice and fluffy one shot. James's POV.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3181 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/26/06 Updated: 02/26/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Awwe, that was so sweet!! I reaaally liked that!! Good job!

Author's Response: =) Thanks a bunch! Glad you enjoyed it!

 

A Battle Of Laughter by onmyway
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 89]

Summary: Fred and George have an unexpected customer who has seriously underestimated their dueling skills...

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 988 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/15/06 Updated: 04/18/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 09/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

not very long but its still hilarious!

 

Always by MissPriss86
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 34]

Summary: One night Lily Evans has a run in with James Potter. Well, you can imagine the rest of it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 825 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/16/06 Updated: 04/22/06


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Always

I looooooove this!!!! It is sooooo sweet!! Omigosh, good job, I love it......

 

Innocence Found by Accio_Brain
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 497]

Summary: What happens when the Order's most valuable spy loses his memory? Severus Snape fights to survive in a world he can no longer remember and in the process rediscovers the love of his life.





Severus Snape/Original Character.




~~NOW COMPLETE!~~


Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 96821 Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/15/06 Updated: 10/19/07


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/19/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hey, I dunno, but I guess that was OK. Snape sounds more considerate and his wife is really concerned. That's pretty good, I can see what's coming a bit clearer now- a great peice. Keep it up!

Author's Response: This isn\'t my favorite chapter, either. But, you get to see that Snape is beginning to remember some things and has to come to terms with the man he is, the good and the bad. He may not like what he sees when he starts to remember... I\'m glad you like the relationship between Snape and Camilla so far and that the story seems to be coming together for you. Thanks for reviewing! : )

 
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