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I love to write. I also love Harry Potter, so the two blend together beautifully, don't they?

My James/Lily fic, Never Too Late For Love, is up!

And now my chaptered project Al Potter, Chapter 1 is up as well. =)
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Summary:

 

Rose used a blank journal to list practical information about the boy she intended to bring home for holiday and pass off as her boyfriend: Scorpius’ favourite colour, his favourite food. As their pretend relationship became real, the entries became longer and more intimate. And then one day—to her horror—she misplaced the journal.

 


 



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1264 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/18/09 Updated: 09/18/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Lessons Learned

Awwe, this was sweet :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Some people may think Slytherin and sweet are contradictions in terms, but when it's the right guy and girl, romance is sweet. :)

 

Summary: For those of you who won't be reading the sequel, or for those of you who are but don't like it, or maybe even for those reading the sequel and enjoying it, but interested to see what else I came up with.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Strong Profanity

Word count: 7580 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/03/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 12/21/10 Title: Chapter 1: An Aversion to Change - Alternate Ending

Okay, I don't hate you anymore. Why didn't you use this ending? It would have spared me a lot of rage and tears.

Author's Response: Ah, because this wouldn't have allowed for such a fun sequel! :)

 

"This Magic Moment" by type-n-shadow
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: [He] walked a little taller that day. We had to tip our hats to him. He was lucky she hadn't beat the crap out of him. We wouldn't have blamed her. What he'd done was sneaky, rotten and low... and cool. Not another one among us would've ever in a million years... even for a million dollars had the guts to put the move on the lifeguard. He did. He had kissed a woman, and he had kissed her long and good. - The Sandlot

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Student/Teacher Romance

Word count: 2277 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/14/09 Updated: 12/14/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/16/10 Title: Chapter 1: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

Eh, your urge to get me to write a review was enough. Well! that was funny haha =] I quite liked it. Good job

 

A Tale of Six Perspectives by hestiajones
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: The whoosh of a speeding Bludger was followed by the scream of a female voice.

Slytherin Chaser Armis Berkley was knocked off her broom, and she fell through the air.

James Potter, Gryffindor Chaser, gripped his broom and sped towards the falling body, even though he knew he’d never reach her in time.

Severus Snape blanched. Berkley always pestered him in the common room, asking him to help her with Charms homework.

Sirius Orion Black jumped up from his seat as the rest of the spectators did. A single obscene curse escaped his lips.

Peter Pettigrew prayed. Dear God, please don’t…no…no…

Lily Evans gasped as an odd monotonous sound rang in her ears.

Remus John Lupin shuddered involuntarily. DUMBLEDORE!



This is hestiajones of Hufflepuff writing for the final in the MWPP class on the Beta Boards. This story has just been nominated for a QSQ in the Best Marauder Era category. :D Thanks!

DISCLAIMER: So not J.K.Rowling.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 3400 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/20/09 Updated: 12/22/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Six Perspectives

That was good! It captured the personalities of all the characters perfectly, except maybe Remus. I thought the ending was quite abrupt, although that's just my reaction. It seemed to me Remus was in the middle of his revelation when you wrapped it up. It was really good, don't get me wrong, but if I had to pick something to nitpick, that would be it.

Author's Response: Ahhh...Remus. See, that's exactly how I feel about his part. I was aware of it while writing it, too, but there is no other way I could have written it. I didn't want to explain Remus' tragedy in detail.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

~Natalie

 

Dust in the Wind by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

Dominique Weasley took a summer job at Weasleys Wizarding Wheezes with the hope to stake her first claim of independence. All she really wanted was to be able to pay for her Yule Ball gown on her own, but one fateful day, someone strolled into the shop and turned her world upside down.

Scorpius Malfoy was sweet, confident, and completely gorgeous, but Dominique knew that he was off-limits as her cousin’s ex-boyfriend. The more she tried to push him away, though, the more she questioned her resolve to do the right thing.

This is ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor of Ravenclaw House, and this is my submission for the Fiction Junction ‘I Challenge Thee’ prompt



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 4933 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/08/10 Updated: 02/14/10


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dust in the Wind

Amazing. *tear

Author's Response:

Thank you. :D

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Have a lovely day. 

~Jess

 

A Little Late by OkiBlossom
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Remus has a one-on-one conversation with Lily on her wedding day. He experiences a moment of realisation. He walks through a sudden epiphany.

For my beautiful, youthful Julia, who held my hand through hell. Words will never be enough.

I am Kuri (Okiblossom) of Ravenclaw, and this is my entry for the February Love Challenge - in the Surprise Love category - in the Great Hall. This is in the MNFF Beta Boards Forum. NOTE: I have no talent that compares to JKR or any other author for that matter.

Liked it? Hated it? Please read and review.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2410 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/10 Updated: 02/28/10


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 12/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Little Late

Aweh, thats so sweet :)

 

Summary:

Certain rules exist between friends and family, one of which is never dating someone’s ex-boyfriend. However, unfortunately for Dominique Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy has seen fit to test her resolve to not cross that line. Could she bring herself to break that taboo?

Lily Potter was nice, but she just couldn’t hold a candle to her vixen of a cousin, Dominique. Scorpius knew who he wanted, but did he have what it took to go and get her?

This story is written as a parallel to my fic, Dust in the Wind. All events from that story are written in the opposing point of view, plus more of the back story and after story are explored.



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 7972 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/23/10 Updated: 02/25/10


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dansons

Aweh! *sniffle* I love it! When I discovered this after reading Dust in the Wind it was like a surprise gift! Very good job and did I say I love it :-)

Author's Response:

Why thank you. After I had written Dust in the Wind, my reviewers demanded that I somehow vindicate Scorpius of being a cad and not worthy of Dom. This is how it came out.

Thank you for the review, and have a lovely day. :D

~Jess

 

Cut by hestiajones
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: She thought having her hair cut would make a difference. Unfortunately, she was right.



Warning: This story is originally rated 6th-7th year for language and sexual situations. The rating has been changed temporarily only because we're having some technical problem with stories that have higher ratings. So, please click at your own discretion.

Thanks to Carole for her excellent Brit-picking, sentences (heehee), and summary. Thanks also to Gina for agreeing to read through this, for all her suggestions and comments. And finally, to Kara and Lea for their support and encouragement.



DISCLAIMER: This isn’t J.K Rowling. This is a fanfic writer on a mission to submit to every category available on the archives.



Nominated for a QSQ in the Same Sex Pairing category.

Categories: Femmeslash Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 4062 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/28/10 Updated: 10/03/10


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Cut

Well written!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

 

Catharsis by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary:

A war had raged; everyone had felt alone and afraid at some point. And when it was over, most people went back to business as usual, but two of those haunted souls found respite from the most unlikely of sources.

After all, who doesn't need a little bit of catharsis?



Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1620 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/17/10 Updated: 12/17/10


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 12/18/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Any pairing with Draco I tend to like but I really like this one. I'm utterly furious you didn't get them together at the end though! *tear* :)

Author's Response:

You know, I really don't think they could have ever worked as a pairing. Certainly, Draco marrying a friend of the wizard world's saviour would have bought his family a lot of good will, but I don't think the Malfoys would have ever allowed him to 'stoop that low'. Not that I think Katie's low, since she's one of my favourite characters, but that she fought on the other side woiuld really stick in their craw.

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it. :D

~Jess

 
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