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I love to write. I also love Harry Potter, so the two blend together beautifully, don't they?

My James/Lily fic, Never Too Late For Love, is up!

And now my chaptered project Al Potter, Chapter 1 is up as well. =)
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Taxicab Conversations by cto10121
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 103]

Summary: James Potter is about to give up his pursuit of his six-year crush, Lily Evans. But will he change his mind after an enlightening conversation with an understanding taxicab driver? One-shot, R&R!!



Excerpt:



“Have you ever fallen in love?” James asked hesitantly.



“Yep.”



“Have you ever loved her with all your heart and soul?”



“Yep.”



“Have they never requited your love?”



“Yep.”



“Have you ever thought of giving them up?”



“Yep. Did it too. Was without a doubt the worse mistake I’ve made in me bloody life.”




Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2978 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/08/07 Updated: 08/08/07


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: Taxicab Conversations

so much for 'only two reviews!' this is one of my favourite fanfics ever lol. i like it a lot. no kidding, i'll be looking into your work often. :)

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Taxicab Conversations

Hahaha this is awesome! I love this! hehehe siriusly, this was really original, i liked it a whole lot. Good job!!!

Author's Response: Everyone in favor of sending this story to J.K. Rowling? Like I said before: EVERYONE seems to like this one-shot.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 08/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Taxicab Conversations

Awwwe, that is sooo sweet!!! I was like, wow how is she gonna end this? you know, at the point where James left the taxicab. Then i saw that...thats so sweet! good job!!

 

Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 37701 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
09/27/07 Updated: 06/18/11


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Silver Lynx

ooooooooooooooohhhhh yay! cool!!! i like it! its funny!!!! its... its.... funniful!!!
you better update soon!!!! or else!
this message will self destruct

Author's Response: Well, self destruction would be anti-progressive as far as updates go, since the next chapter\'s on my computer. ; ) Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Septum Aperio

wait wait wait, JKR uses latin with wizarding spells??? oooooh cool xD lol
looooooved it :D:D:D totally going in the favourites
its really original, i like the plot outline
how long will it be? cause once again, I've allowed myself to hook on a story that might not be finished till 2011. sigh. i'm not very smart. lol although my username begs to differ :D :D yay! great story! *imploring, worshipful look* i can only hope i write as good as you one day lol lol xD keep going! update lots!

Author's Response: She uses latin with some spells, like sectumsempra (sectum=to cut, hurt; sempra=always) so I\'ve used that here a bit.
I\'m not exactly sure how long it will be, but it will certainly be over long before 2011. xD Thanks for R&R!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Rice Krispies and Comic Strips

*bursts out into fresh peals of laughter* that is HILARIOUS!!! nice lol I can see why it is in the humor section xD xD lol it was gooood. I so can't wait for the next chapter, I am itching to click 'next'!!! UPDATE SOON! lol lol its good I was laughing all during it. hahahaa. see? still laughing. Now I've got the giggles. Ghosts in Pajamas, you have a steady reader. lol. yay! good job! update lots!!!! k, i'll shut up. xD

Author's Response: haha. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: été ŕ Paris

oooooh its good its good I LIKE IT!!! lol lol seriously, its really original how its from Dudley's point of view. I like how he's going good. next thing you'll know, he'll start losing weight and start waving a wand. lol lol its good, i didn't laugh so much but I like it :D:D lol
"because he would, of course, be a Beater" lol he would, wouldn't he lol xD
right next chappie! Go you! UPDATE!

Author's Response: Thanks

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/31/08 Title: Chapter 5: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

*practically on all fours* hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! man is it worth it, every time i trip over to the humor section i find something hilarious!!! hahahaha!!! i love how dedalus and hestia were all arguing about it, neither really getting it right- hahahaha, i love that. i wish harry WOULD write a biography of his life- It's not his style, but it would clear a lot of stuff up. lol. sadly, the series' is over (unless, to quote JKR, "We [can] try an eighth in about ten years") lol yeah it was funneh!!! good job!!!!! please please please update, i am so glad to know you're not abandoning your story xD good job!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it and thanks for reviewing. Harry doesn\'t seem the type to print his story, though it would definitely sell. Maybe Ron could write it. lol. But don\'t worry, this story won\'t be abandoned. (I like it too much!) Real life just gets in the way of updates sometimes.

 

Summary: James Sirius Potter is a mischievous little six-year-old and is rather like his grandfather, James Potter, and also his namesake, Sirius Black. When he has an idea, he is determined to fulfil it to the best of his ability. He drags his siblings Albus and Lily as well as his cousins Hugo and Rose Weasley into his plan while a twelve-year-old Teddy Remus Lupin watches on, amused.







Written for the September Challenge by FlightofthePhoenix of Hufflepuff



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1730 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/17/07 Updated: 10/22/07


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: James Potter = Mischievous

Good job!! this had me cracking up, its real funny lol :D i love humor, its so deliciously ...... humorous :D:D good job again!

 

Out of the Darkness by Tim the Enchanter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary: The war against Voldemort is not going well. The Ministry of Magic has fallen and the Order of the Phoenix is scattered. Harry Potter and his friends are ruthlessly hunted by Voldemort and his Death Eaters. There is no end in sight for our heroes…

BUT SUDDENLY, OUT OF THE DARKNESS, ABSURDITY INTERVENES!

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Nominated for QSQ 2008 Best Humour Story!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 13978 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/07/08 Updated: 07/24/08


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 09/23/08 Title: Chapter 4: Epic Ephemeral Epilogue

this isn't a very funny humor fic. Try a little more for funny than mock-sad. just doesn't work. sorry

Author's Response:

The ending is not supposed to be funny – the story starts out very dark, and similarly ends the same way. I do understand that though Out of the Darkness is a humour story, it is certainly not funny through-and-through, and that was my intention. It is a comedic tragedy or a tragic comedy, depending on how you want to word it.

Before I ran Voldemort over with the cement mixer in Chapter One, I had killed off Hermione for no better reason than to accentuate how dire Harry’s situation was. The end of the fourth and last chapter was written to remind the reader of the rather depressing consequences of such an eventuality, and to introduce the premise of much more serious sequel.

At any rate, thank you for reviewing, and I hope you have a better understanding of the intended point of the story.

Tim the Enchanter

 

The Light of His Life by The Scribbler
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: The Marauders seventh year at Hogwarts is about to begin and everyone is excited, but for James, something—or rather someone—weighs heavily on his mind. All summer he had worked to change into a better person… all for Lily Evans. The only question now is if she’ll give him the second chance he needs to change her mind.

The sequel to The Beginning and Unexpected Hope.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3708 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/27/08 Updated: 02/12/08


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh, good, good, very good!! made me laugh. quite cute too. especially with the vivid image i'm getting of james and the marauders pacing and going through 1001 things he must not do around lily....hahahahaha! nice. i often prefer it when lily/james stories are in james' POV. i like the name james. haha. random, i know. i really liked this! i wish you could've continued and wrote about the date. lol this was very good :)

Author's Response: One question: have you had sugar recently? Ha, ha! I don\'t mind if your review is a little random. You still reviewed and that\'s what I love. Any feedback is good to have! Sorry about the date, though. I want to leave that open for you to imagine. At least you enjoyed what I DID write! Thank you so much!

 

Summary: Lily chose her path, and Severus chose his. However, sometimes paths run together.

Categories: Severus/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 3314 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/20/08 Updated: 03/20/08


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 04/28/10 Title: Chapter 1: -- - --

That made me tear up :'( So good :'(

 

A Different Kind of Love by Nymphea
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: James gives Lily a letter on the last day of sixth year:
I’m going to be perfectly honest with you—I’m not that good with feelings. I usually just ask Remus; he’s pretty good with that sort of thing. But I can’t ask Remus to write this letter for me, so you’re just going to have to bear with me while I set the record straight before the school year ends and I forget how to describe my feelings about things between us. [2000 reads! thanks guys!]

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1136 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/30/08 Updated: 04/21/08


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind of Love

Beautifully written and touching. The persona of James was illustrated magnificently and I really loved this. Excellent job. :)

 

One-Way Street by Nymphea
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: Sequel to A Different Kind of Love: Lily's response to James' letter saying he loves her.
Part of me wants to say, please, let’s just be friends and forget what we’ve written to each other—these moments are too precious to risk spoiling them. But I know enough of the world to know that time is a one-way street. Forward is the only direction we can go.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1142 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/07/08 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: One-Way Street

That was great... I liked how Lily was less clear about her feelings and more unsure, which makes sense for her character. Wonderfully written.

 

Summary: Fred and George Weasley get an idea for a prank from doing something they thought they would never do—their Potions homework. Follow them on their journey through pranker’s block, powdered bicorn horn, Muggle food coloring, a random fish, a suction cup, Harry with a toothpick, a very dry avocado, and much too much flour. What happens when this seemingly innocent prank turns wacky? One-shot.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5916 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/13/08 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 12/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Oh man... hahahahahahahahahahaahahahahaha.......! WOW that was really funny!

Author's Response: Hey, thank! I'm really glad that I can make people laugh. Oddly enough, it is sometimes difficult in real life.

Author's Response: Hey, thank! I'm really glad that I can make people laugh. Oddly enough, it is sometimes difficult in real life.

 

A Proper Goodbye by coolh5000
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: Past Featured StoryOn Christmas Day of Teddy Lupin's seventh year at Hogwarts, his godfather gives him a present he will never forget - the chance to meet his parents.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5100 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/26/09 Updated: 03/26/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, first off this wasn't canon. Harry would never have gone to find the Stone because it's too much of a temptation. He promised Dumbledore he wouldn't and I don't believe he would have.

On the other hand, you wrote this beautifully and actually made me cry. The ability to draw emotions from readers is infinitely more impressive then sticking to canon. This was touching, and you are certainly a good writer.

 

Summary: In 2017, the Wizarding World seems peaceful and safe. Voldemort is long dead and the Death Eaters wiped out or imprisoned.

Albus Potter is eleven and just beginning his first year at Hogwarts. With the help of his big extended family, he navigates the new and exciting world of magic.

But there are challenges on the horizon and the most dangerous is coming from a shadowy group that is hunting something called the Flamel File. . . .

Year One begins.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 31852 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
04/06/09 Updated: 11/27/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Sorting

Overall, I enjoyed the first chapter.

I think you may have introduced a few too many characters because I couldn't really keep track of everyone around. A slightly unrealistic number of names recognizable to the original series.

On the other hand, I liked how you included new things like the circle for where Voldemort was killed, and the hat having burn marks.

I am wary that this is going to be almost exactly like the first Harry Potter book, but it's only the first chapter. Your writing, spelling and grammar was flawless.

I am also wary that your characters are going to be just like their predecessors- Al just like Harry, Rosie just like Hermione. I hope the characters develop original personalities. I also hope Al gets himself a friend apart from Rose.

Anyway, I'm going to keep reading and I'll let you know what I think as I go along.

Author's Response: Wow, thesmart1, it's so cool that you''ve put so much effort in these reviews. I really appreciate an honest opinion! Looking back (I think I wrote this chapter at least three years ago), the structure and characters probably ARE too close to SS. As a fan, I just love writing about the existing universe, so it's sometimes easy to forget to do new things. And you're absolutely right, it takes a while for the kids to stop being carbon copies of their parents.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/01/11 Title: Chapter 2: First Day

I like the dialogue between the cousins, although I'd like it if a non-related person was included in the circle of friends. Someone of your own making. I'd like to see how you would put that in. I haven't read it all yet, so maybe you will.

I also enjoyed the parts with Scorpius in them. I'm really hoping he starts talking soon, because his vow of silence thing is a little tedious. I thought it was so funny when his white-blond hair was turned black, well done with some symbolism there. Or you might've just done that for contrast. Either way, I liked it.

You seem to have a thing for two-sentence paragraphs. It's not really bad, it's just a little difficult to read. 

You've made Rose a distinct character, just like Hermione, which is understandable but I do hopes he develops some of her own traits.

Overall, I liked it, but I'm really hoping for some unpredictable action for the next chapter. I'll let you know. 



Author's Response: It's funny that you should point out my propensity for short paragraphs, because it's something I've always been told. I do tend to like snappier paragraphs. Scorpius's hair is definitely a piece of (fairly obvious) symbolism. I wanted to make him physically different from Draco, partly because there were already too many "clone" characters, partly because I wanted to set him apart from his family and partly because I just thought it seemed cool. :)

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/02/11 Title: Chapter 3: The Runaway

That was great! I'm glad to hear some plot thickening. I was very pleased with the development of Al and Scorpius' relationship. You also keep up a good camaraderie with the cousins. This was an enjoyable read, well paced and kept me interested throughout. Well done indeed.

Author's Response: I swear, as I sit here right now, I cannot remember what happens in this chapter! :) Glad you liked it, though.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 06/02/11 Title: Chapter 4: Generations

Well, alright chapter, but i'm not thrilled with restarting the DA. That's old stuff, you're not coming up with new things to happen. Not to mention very different circumstances; they haven't got someone brilliant to teach them, nor do they have a reason to learn defense (such as Voldemort being back). It just didn't sit right wig me. However, I still like reading this for aforementioned reasons, and you are a good writer.

Author's Response: My rationale for the New DA was A) I thought it would be a handy plot device and a good way to bring the characters together for something other than typical classes, sports, meals, etc, B) because I thought that, having heard stories of their parents' past glories, the kids would logically want to follow in their footsteps and C) I anticipated a time when they would actually need defensive skills, and figured that I should give them a little help preparing. :)

 
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