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I love to write. I also love Harry Potter, so the two blend together beautifully, don't they?

My James/Lily fic, Never Too Late For Love, is up!

And now my chaptered project Al Potter, Chapter 1 is up as well. =)
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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1663]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Soap Suds and Back Rubs

I can hear the death toll calling. lol i'm exaggerating! i loved the suspense. I can hardly wait to get to the next chapter. you've no idea how much i enjoy this, please please finish it soon!

Author's Response: Well I\'m glad you like the suspense, I like suspense too! Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild

i LOVE this!!!! Write lots more!! and write fast!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'ll try!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild

i LOVE this!!!! Write lots more!! and write fast!!!!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild

i LOVE this!!!! Write lots more!! and write fast!!!!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: What Makes Life Worth Living

Love it!! you've no idea, keep writing lots and post them fast!!!

Author's Response: I try to, I really do. I\'m glad you like the story!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Cooties

I love this!! You should do a series! It's reaaaaally good! It's soo cute!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: The First Day

I love it! WRITE QUICK WRITE FAST WRITE LOTS!!! I'm your no. 1 fan!!!

Author's Response: Good to know, good to know ;) Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

See this? See it? I'm reviewing! Ha!
Anyway, I loved this chapter, I'd hoped that Julie would be busted, Lily and James got back together, and Andy busted too....but I don't think I w ould have accepted the fact James said he'd kiss some random girl- I mean, wth, who does that?! Urgh. But it was a fairly good chapter and even though I slightly disapprove, I liked it, good job, update really fast!

Author's Response: Good job reviewing! Andy does need to be busted, and you will get to see that. As for James simply saying he\'d kissed a girl . . . well, there\'s more to that too, but you\'ll see.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

Love it, love it, and love it more!! WRITE LOTS WRITE FAST WRITE OFTEN!!! I'm your no. 1 fan!! THIS ROCKS

Author's Response: Now this is the second time you\'ve told me you\'re my biggest fan -- you\'re beginning to inflate my ego! ;)

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

I-Have-Been-Checking-This-EVERY-SINGLE-DAY!!!! And, and, and like, when I try to read it, it, like, it- I'VE BEEN CHECKING THIS DAILY, PPL! Ooh, It better come out pretty darn fast!! OR ELSE! Oh, and when it does come out, it very well better be worth it.......I've been soo mad at James, and searching for an explanation, reading this over......and over......and over......just hoping to pick up a clue. Now, if it turns out "James was really just helping Daisy feel better from losing her doggy" then I will do my nut!

Author's Response: Hmm, you\'re making me nervous that you won\'t like the explanation -- though I think it\'s pretty good! It shouldn\'t be too much longer before it\'s validated, though previous chapters have taken as much as nine, ten days to get accepted.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Peanut and Prongs

I love this!!! Honestly, I don't know what I'll do if I arrive at the end and I haven't any more to read!!! GREAT JOB!! WROTE LOTS WRITE SOON WRITE FAST!! no. 1 fan!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! All these reviews are great!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

Oh, and you know what, next time you decide to do a story, have it finished BEFOREHAND so that we all won't have to wait a MONTH for a short chapter update!! Thanks. Good job, this has all my favourite James-Lily situations and stuff. Except the cheating thing.

Author's Response: So should I just stop updating this story until I have it all finished, and then give you all the updates? ;)

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand

I loved all of it!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *note that i am screaming at you to update
I really want petunia defied- of course I can't do much about that. she seems like such a snob to Lily, urgh, just stick her down a notch!
oh, and more fluff. i like it :D james and lily are a really sweet couple.

Author's Response: They are a sweet couple, and sadly, the fluff will be coming in shorter and shorter doses soon. Petunia does need to be defied! Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers

I love it.......I hate it! I wanna read the next chapter!

Author's Response: It does have that effect, doesn\'t it?

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave

I've seen Lost. I hate it....and I would never ever think of missing an episode.
I definitely want you to update! I will die if I haven't anything good to read! Update a day and maybe I'll live....

Author's Response: Update a day, eh? I wish I could! I know what you mean about Lost ;) Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Put on Your Poker Face

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! If you don't I'll drop dead!!!!! UPDAAAAAAAATTE!!!

Author's Response: Haha, I\'ll try!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: What Happened?

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!
you know i've gotten like six emails saying there's been an update when there's not. Care to explain that to me?? thx bye UPDATE SOONNNN!!!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in queue -- and has been for a quite a while, actually. If you're getting e-mails telling you it's been updated, that probably means that it'll be accepted and updated soon! Keep an eye out!

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

wheres the updateee??! Update update update!!!!!

Author's Response: I update as fast as I can! (Which hopefully means soon!) :)

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 03/24/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

you know i've changed my thoughts about emma. i don't like her much. ugh. this chapter was kind of uneventful... update soon? pretty please?

 
Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

argh well not meaning to be insulting or whatever but I don't like Emma
she's so nasty.... and fake and lying-ish. i don't know. she just seems like some sort of quiet, blunt snake......sorry. i just don't like her. Let Lily live her life happy! lol.
yay!!! updates!!! onto the next chapter :D :D
otherwise, very good

Author's Response: You don\'t have to like her! This chapter does portray her in a less than attractive light in certain passages, and I completely understand your feelings. Thanks for the review!

 
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