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Real name: Maddy
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I love to write. I also love Harry Potter, so the two blend together beautifully, don't they?

My James/Lily fic, Never Too Late For Love, is up!

And now my chaptered project Al Potter, Chapter 1 is up as well. =)
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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1664]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

Oh, and you know what, next time you decide to do a story, have it finished BEFOREHAND so that we all won't have to wait a MONTH for a short chapter update!! Thanks. Good job, this has all my favourite James-Lily situations and stuff. Except the cheating thing.

Author's Response: So should I just stop updating this story until I have it all finished, and then give you all the updates? ;)

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand

I loved all of it!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *note that i am screaming at you to update
I really want petunia defied- of course I can't do much about that. she seems like such a snob to Lily, urgh, just stick her down a notch!
oh, and more fluff. i like it :D james and lily are a really sweet couple.

Author's Response: They are a sweet couple, and sadly, the fluff will be coming in shorter and shorter doses soon. Petunia does need to be defied! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers

I love it.......I hate it! I wanna read the next chapter!

Author's Response: It does have that effect, doesn\'t it?

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave

I've seen Lost. I hate it....and I would never ever think of missing an episode.
I definitely want you to update! I will die if I haven't anything good to read! Update a day and maybe I'll live....

Author's Response: Update a day, eh? I wish I could! I know what you mean about Lost ;) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Put on Your Poker Face

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! If you don't I'll drop dead!!!!! UPDAAAAAAAATTE!!!

Author's Response: Haha, I\'ll try!

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: What Happened?

you know i've gotten like six emails saying there's been an update when there's not. Care to explain that to me?? thx bye UPDATE SOONNNN!!!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in queue -- and has been for a quite a while, actually. If you're getting e-mails telling you it's been updated, that probably means that it'll be accepted and updated soon! Keep an eye out!

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

wheres the updateee??! Update update update!!!!!

Author's Response: I update as fast as I can! (Which hopefully means soon!) :)

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 03/24/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

you know i've changed my thoughts about emma. i don't like her much. ugh. this chapter was kind of uneventful... update soon? pretty please?

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

argh well not meaning to be insulting or whatever but I don't like Emma
she's so nasty.... and fake and lying-ish. i don't know. she just seems like some sort of quiet, blunt snake......sorry. i just don't like her. Let Lily live her life happy! lol.
yay!!! updates!!! onto the next chapter :D :D
otherwise, very good

Author's Response: You don\'t have to like her! This chapter does portray her in a less than attractive light in certain passages, and I completely understand your feelings. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/04/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Put on Your Poker Face

Urgh, update this PLEASE!!! I hate it when i'm left hanging......and I'm ready to smash the computer with the axe, as I promised......alright, if you don't update in the next week i WILL smash the computer with an axe. Oh, and watch for my story, The Way the Wind Blows, it's coming up soon.

Author's Response: Don\'t smash your computer with an axe! I promise to update soon! :)


Summary: "Strutting around the place with his friends and admirers..." ~Professor Snape, PoA

There may be some reason behind Snape's words.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1471 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
10/06/06 Updated: 10/13/06

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Particularly Good Day

haha thats really funny.
"Prongs, are you strutting?"
" Yes, I suppose I am."
Haha thats hilarious. Too bad James didn't raise harry, really. if james is half of what these fanfic ppl make out, he'd be one helluva dad. good jobs!

Author's Response: ^^ I can\'t help but play James up a bit. He\'d have been an interesting father, that\'s for sure.\r\nBut even more, can you imagine if Harry had him for a father AND Sirius, Remus and Peter as uncles? Madness, I tell you!


Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 46326 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
11/29/06 Updated: 09/18/11

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/04/07 Title: Chapter 8: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

I really want you to update soon, it's such a relief to read fanfic, yours is one of my favourites. Hurry and write more, because I for one will definitely be around to read it!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!

Author's Response: I\'m typing part of the next chapter right now! I hope it won\'t take long.

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

I really loved this!! I can tell they'll get together eventually, and I know it'll be wonderful! And by the way, thx for the 'white box' hint. i couldn't get how to review, until i realized i wasn't signed in! this is really good, I'm inspired to do a Lily/James thing like this......great job! I can hardly stop to review in my rush to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Lol, glad I could help. When I first found MNFF I didn\'t know how to review either. Thanks for the lovely review! I\'m glad you took the time to review!

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/27/07 Title: Chapter 10: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Greaaaaat job! That last line, the tear-wiping, was soo cute. *crumples* It made me laugh. :) I love this story!! Please update really fast!

Author's Response: Thanks. Lol, I loved that line too.

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 12: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

.....*strangles author* How dare you make me wait so long! it was pretty well worth it, though. lol.
its kind of sad that james doesn't appear to be moaning after lily anymore. we all know he probably still likes her, right, but its still a bit disappointing. the grapes made me laugh though....haha!

Author's Response: *is strangled* Goodness, can\'t do that anymore. Sorry. You\'ll see what happens... *deserves some more strangling*\r\n

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

lol sophie and sirius are totally lovers, duh lol :D
very very very good, I laughed all the way through!!!!
right now this story is practically the only one I'm reading
i will be checking the draco/cho one lol :D:D keep going! good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This was a particularly enjoyable chapter to write. And thanks for the support!

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/11/10 Title: Chapter 13: 37th Detention... and my confession under duress

I am sooo glad you're continuing this!!! I really love this story, it's hilarious, cute, amazing, It makes me laugh and go "awweee" and it's just really great and please please pleeaaaassseeeeee don't abandon it again!!! :)


"It Unscrews The Other Way" by Pussycat123
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 112]

Summary: The line that probably best describes the legacy that the Weasley twins left behind after their Great Escape, during Umbridge’s brief rein at Hogwarts. Their legend lasted years afterwards ... but eventually, the only permanent physical reminder was the roped off corner of one corridor, containing a small part of swamp. The mystery of its origins is merely smiled at reminiscently by teachers, and the students can do nothing but spread rumours of how it came to be. When little Janey Weasley starts life at Hogwarts, the mystery is still unsolved. On a whim, and desperate for recognition, she writes home to her father, asking how it came to be. When Ron replies with the true story, a chain of events begins that might just be the making of the next true Hogwarts mischief legend ...

**One-Shot, Post Hogwarts** Now available as AudioFiction Episode #95!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 3302 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/07/06 Updated: 12/08/06

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 10/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: "It Unscrews The Other Way"

your series is AWESOME. *solemn* I LOVE them. I'm also very impressed you wrote so many and never quit. good job! You're original. Fantastic! Yay! GO YOU! WHOOOOOOT you rock!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. *Blushes*. What can I say? I love to write, I love Harry Potter ... this is what happens! Seriously though, thanks for the review, it was really encouraging. =D


A Christmas Gift by Hallie Black
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 45]

Summary: Sometimes, the most simple and unexpected gifts are the ones we appreciate the most.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2239 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/16/06 Updated: 12/29/06

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: (one-shot)

That- that-.......That was soo sweet and cute! I read it over, and over, and over- it was written incredibly well (just like the rest of your works!) and the moral was very right. I laughed myself into hysterics- don't ask- when Sirius 'fainted'......*starts laughing self into hysterics again* but it was sweet and cute enough to almost tear my eyes up...great job! I've been meaning to for ages, I'm adding you to my fav. author list!


Summary: Lily Evans has a secret admirer, but there's no way in hell he'll come any closer with James Potter hanging around. Finally, he convinces her to meet him in Hogsmeade, but Lily still isn't too sure of his character...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4071 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/02/07 Updated: 01/03/07

Reviewer: thesmart1 Signed
Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: I say, to be led blindly

Well, it's sweet, but rather unusual....good job, i liked reading this.

Author's Response: Unusual? That\'s always good!

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