Welcome to the realm of the wonderful Isis *has a bit of an ego*. Here’s where I'll try and post my fanfiction on that wonderful rare occasion when I manage to have enough time to write it. Don't expect frequent updates, but expect me to try and put forth my best quality work.
-In the beginning, there was One, my first fic. Even though I haven't even got to the D/Hr part, I'm sorry to say I'm going to have to abandon it as I have lost all inspiration and will to write it. Yes, I have a plot, but that doesn't mean a thing when I have no creative urges. Yeah...I don't think I've ever actually finished a story, but most make it farther then two chapters lol.
-Am working on a fic featuring a particular "vivacious" Slytherin girl, so watch out for it.
-Could possibly put up another D/Hr fic soon (were D/Hr actually get together), but it has to compete with my R/Hr one...we'll see.
My favorite Pairings
~I like reading D/Hr despite the fact that I know it will never happen.
~R/Hr is so what it’s going to be in canon *thwacks pumpkin pie shippers with trees*
~I think R/S is canon, get over your homophobia and think about what makes sense!
~Occasionally Star Wars
~Musicals (“Wicked” and "Rent" and "Spamalot" being my current obsessions)
~Music in general
~And much more I don’t feel like writing now.
This is probably one of my favorite pices of literature, let alone favorite fanfic. I like the many other reviews here strongly urge you to write more. You look at things from just a new perspective and I don't think I could have ever written anything half as creative as this. In short, brilliant!
The poem was beautiful and honestly written. It had a ring of truth about it; I could really believe and relate to the feelings. I would suggest, this is rather nitpicky but I can't help it, that you keep the structure and pattern consistent. At some points, the rhyming would go ABCB, then AABC. There was no rhyme (no pun intended) or reason to it. Also, at some places it didn't quite flow right. Like I said, that stuff is nit-picky, it really was brilliant :)!
This story was just...phoenomenal. You are just such a talented writer. I saw no spelling/grammar mistakes nor did I find anything else to complain about. It was all interwoven beautifully to create this very beleivable episode. I can't wait to read some of your other work.
Author's Response: You will be pleased to know that I will (hopefully) have another fic up soon. It is not a romance fic, but romance does feature in it, behind the plot. I won't give any more away, but I'm hoping to have it done soon. I am about half way through, but then I will be editing before I submit to the site. I'm looking forward to getting everyone's opinions on more of my work though, as it comes out :D
Original. Very. This is wicked cool! I will be checking back *adds story to favorites and rates as 10*
Author's Response: Aww... thanks! I'm glad you like it.
YAY! Another chappie! Good job, I saw no errors though...it could use more description *is about to slap herself for saying that again*
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this chappie does lack description, the next one kinda does too. But I promise that the ones after the 5th chapter have tons of description (especially the 6th)!
And so it countinues...very convincing and funny. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Overall I thought that was a good first chapter. You just might want to pay attention to little things though. I think you said "There was a girl whom they had never seen before, who was sitting by the window." You have a couple more akward sentences, just try to catch those you know? Otherwise I liked it, I'll be checking back for updates!
Oh do countinue! I love parodies and this one is espicially good!
HAHAHAHAA!!! That was incredibly hillariuos! I love it! *adds to favorites and rates ten* Soooo...Ummm...can I have my air now?
Author's Response: *gives lots of air* YAY 10 AND FAVORITES? it can't get much better...
You countinue to make me laugh! Great job! If I don't die of laughing, I'll die with anticipation of waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Awesome! It's you again too! I must be getting good at this 'be yourself but pretend it's humor' stuff
YAY *celebrates since there is another chapter, then gets slightly depressed as she is done reading and there are not ten more chapters waiting*!! Needless to say I'm waiting for an update... and some air.
Author's Response: *gives air* yay!
Wow. It was wonderful! The detail was unmatched and the feelings were described perfectly. The only problem I have with it is that I don't think Harry and Cho will wnd up together, but I love your style and can't wait to read more of this! *rates at ten and adds to favorites*
Author's Response: As soon as I have a bit of time I'll finish posting this story on this site. I'm just a bit behind at the moment.
I very much enjoyed it! Hermione was a little OOC, but that fits with your story. Great Job!
Good job! I enjoyed it! I still feel like there is something missing though...not sure what.
Amusing. You create a scenario I could actually believe happening… very good. The way you are setting up Malfoy and Hermione is a little cliché, but, I guess there are only so many ways to bring to enemies together. I'm writing a D/HG fic too and I'm not entirely sure how that’s going to happen so I admire the way that despite the predictability of it all, it's believable, and well written
I liked this chapter even better! You're not having Malfoy and Hermione just fall in Love the instant they see each (other which is what has happened in many a fics I've read), you’re developing. Everything continues to seem real and the plot thickens. One bit of con/crit. This is tiny and nitpicky, but, well, I noticed it so I thought I might as well tell you. You said "spat" quit a few times during Malfoy and Hermione's conversation. Try to very it a little to prevent it from becoming just as overused as "said".
Author's Response: Personally, I can't stand the stories that throw the two characters into a relationship right from the beginning. That's not how it would work in a real setting, so I'm trying to keep it as realistic as possible. You know, I noticed the whole "spat" bit last night when I was reading over it before hitting the submit button. I had thought the same thing but didn't want to change it. Well spotted and I'll do my best to use a more wide variety of verbs when the characters are speaking. Thanks once again for reviewing! I've submitted chapter three and am awaiting approval!
Oooooohhh...very good! You hooked me at the begining! I actually wasn't sure if would like this one, I was just trying to make my way through all the D/HG fics (as I am writing one myself, it's called "One"), but you surprised me. It was well written and beleivable and I can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad I hooked you and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :D You should be happy to know that the next chapter is about three times longer! This first one is just short because I was trying to introduce everything. Good luck on your story. I'll be sure to take a look at it when it's on the site!! The next chapter has been submitted and is waiting for approval. :) Thank you so much for reviewing.
Okay, I was just about to say that, but as someone already pointed it out, there isn't a need. Anyway, great conclusion! Besides the distance, everytinh is beleivable and skillfully written, great job!
Author's Response: I wonder if perhaps I could edit it and somehow put a portkey... I'm not sure. I wrote this a long time ago and my beta and I read over it, and she didn't catch it until two chapters later. It'll be hard to integrate something in there that will allow it all to fit together. I'll see if I can do that as it seems this site is more aware of details -which is a good thing!!!
Oh my gosh...that is just so touching...and beautiful! A good deal sad mind you, but beautiful. It is wonderfully written and the emotions just jump off the screen. Your talent really shines through, countinue to write! I have absolutely no complaints (that could very well be a first)...it was...brilliant *rates a ten and adds to favorites...you are one of the chosen few*
Author's Response: Aww... thank you so much! You're so sweet. I'm really honored by what you said. Thank you! ::runs and gives you hug:: You rock!!!
Ahhhhhh!! Why must you frustrate me so by ending a one shot with a cliffie?! Really though, it was very good. I enjoyed it alot and I really have no complaints. Great Job!