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Taken by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: Lily felt her heart jump into her throat. In fact, all she heard was her heart beating steadily throughout her body. ...Any minute, James Potter is going to walk through that door and sit down. At my table. By me...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4509 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/22/06 Updated: 10/22/06


Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Taken

Awww! That was sooo cute. I think you summed up the feelings of a teenage girl VERY well. That trick was soo mean though, and it made me want to cry for Lily. But you made it all better in the end. James was so sweet. Again, like your other story, this was fantastic. Fresh and different. I love it! Brilliant story. I really can't wait for you to write more!

 

Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1510]

Summary: Past Featured Story2008 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry married Ginny. Harry and Ginny had five children. Harry disappeared. My name is Lily Potter, and this is the story of what happened when my father returned after six years missing to find my mother about to re-marry. This is the story of myself, my crazy family, and most of all, this is the story of my parents and the man who tried to come between them. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

"Oh, I can so die happy now!" -Sirius Potter

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 67532 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/04/06 Updated: 05/01/07


Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 02/22/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Grandma Says Talking is the Trick

Haha! I love the sarcastic teenager! And what is this idea? I'm really curious now....Awesome as usual. Can't wait for more!

P.S. Sorry for the short review

Author's Response: Sarcasm is the true talent of a teenager! Thanks for the review, short or no.

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Uncle Ron Never Laughs

......WOW. that's.....honestly..it's just....amazing. I'm honestly speechless. SOOOOOOO good. This plot is definitely new and exciting and something I've never read before. Great job! I love it. Now I'm going to go read the next chapter. Expect another review! heehee.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! Some plot lines get over used, so I\'m glad this one is something to mix it up a little. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Aunt Hermione Knows It All

....aww......once again...im speechless. It made me want to cry! but GAH. I HATE DICK. argh...hes such a...a...a..piece of...argh. a son of a gun. thats what he is. I'd use stronger words but I don't want my review to be deleted. I love it. It's awesome. The emotion you get across is awesome. You do it so well. And I love the characters you created. They are amazing. Wow. Amazing. Very good. *sigh* I wish i could write as well as you. You have fantastic writing skills. I love all your stories! Anyways..I can't wait for update. on this one and "Someone to Watch Over Me". You know..anytime soon would be great. :P;)

Author's Response: I\'m glad to know my story has inspired you to review with colourful language . . . thank you for the review! I\'ve already started writing the third chapter, and the next chapter of \"Someone To Watch Over Me\" is in the quene. Thanks again.

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Dad Would Have Loved Her Forever

AHHHHHHHHH!!! This is so amazing. I was on two-month hiatus from reading fan fiction, but i have come back and I have to say I am extremely impressed. The last chapter made me cry. And this chapter made me laugh. I can't wait to see Dick receive his just reward. It shall be grand.
Favourite quote from this chapter "Then I caught sight of my mother's brown eyes. It's all in the eyes."
AHHH. It made me burst with excitement!!!!!!!! This story really boosted my moral/spirit because I am home sick today, and so reading this made me feel better. YAY.
It's so awesome. I CANNOT wait for the next chapter. Sad as it may be, being the last one, I am still uber-excited. You did an amazing job! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m sorry you\'re home sick, but I\'m glad you got the chance to read this and it boosted your spirit :)

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Aunt Hannah is One Smart Muggle

Yay! Ginny is finally back!! The real Ginny. This was a good chapter. It got me really excited for the next chapter. Seeing Dick get his ass kicked (or something to that effect) is gonna be great. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yup, FINALLY, Ginny is coming back. The next chapter will be a lot of explaining and hopefully I\'ll be able to get it up sooner than this one! Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 06/16/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending




Wow. That was awesome. A amazing ending to an amazing story. Everything came together so well. But you really had me on edge there. When Dick was getting angry and when Draco came out. And..the 'and then there was nothing line"...ya. You really had me fooled. I was like.....WHAT????? THAT'S THE DUMBEST ENDING EVER! But then you fixed it, and I felt stupid..cause duh, of course you wouldn't end it like that. Your characters were so well written, and everything seemed very plausible. You really stuck to the tone of the series (or what the tone would be if the series would have continued to this point), or.. at least that's my opinion. I also agree with you that writing a sequel would be a rip-off. Or at least ending with the "and then there was nothing line" would be a cheap rip-off. People want closure so this was jsut perfect. This is, BY FAR, one of the best fan fictions I've ever read, and I just want to congratulate you for doing so well. So..congratualations and..farewell. For now, at least. I'll probably comment on your other writings as I also "Someone to Watch Over Me". So..anyways.. great job and..toodles!

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 06/16/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending




Wow. That was awesome. A amazing ending to an amazing story. Everything came together so well. But you really had me on edge there. When Dick was getting angry and when Draco came out. And..the 'and then there was nothing line"...ya. You really had me fooled. I was like.....WHAT????? THAT'S THE DUMBEST ENDING EVER! But then you fixed it, and I felt stupid..cause duh, of course you wouldn't end it like that. Your characters were so well written, and everything seemed very plausible. You really stuck to the tone of the series (or what the tone would be if the series would have continued to this point), or.. at least that's my opinion. I also agree with you that writing a sequel would be a rip-off. Or at least ending with the "and then there was nothing line" would be a cheap rip-off. People want closure so this was just perfect. This is, BY FAR, one of the best fan fictions I've ever read, and I just want to congratulate you for doing so well. So..congratualations and..farewell. For now, at least. I'll probably comment on your other writings as I also read "Someone to Watch Over Me". So..anyways.. great job and..toodles!

Author's Response: Thanks! That would have been a terrible ending, you\'re right. I much prefer the one I did write! I\'m glad you thought it followed the same tune as the series, that\'s something I strive for in my writing.

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 06/16/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Lily's Perfect Ending

AHHH. Sorry. My review was posted twice. Oops. *blush*

Author's Response: Happens all the time, don\'t worry about it :)

 
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aunt Angie Said He Was Handsome

.....Why are you such a damn good writer? I've read all your fictions except for one, and you never cease to amaze. Amazing job. And I LOVE this one. It's sooooo......I don't know the right word for it. It just really grabs you and pulls you and makes you feel like you are Lily. Man...Dick is such...a dick. You make him the perfect hate-able character. And I'm so glad Harry is back. The flower was perfect and his line was even better! I laughed so hard. Ginny is really beginning to annoy..but I know she'll come back. Can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response: Yup, Dick is like Darth Vadar -- you just love to hate him! Ginny is being annoying, I know, but hopefully soon. . . . Thanks for the review!

 

Up To Speed by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 40]

Summary: Lily and James used to be best friends, hanging out in their neighborhood with each other. But once they were accepted into Hogwarts, they went their separate ways - James, the popular prankster, and Lily, the know-it-all bystander. But will their past be able to bring them back together?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6294 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/06 Updated: 11/12/06


Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Up To Speed

Wow! I can honestly tell you, that was one of the best stories I've read, and by far, one of my favourites. It's so different from all the regular james/lily stories, and I love it! It's like a breath of fresh air! It's new and exciting, and I love it! I love the whole treehouse idea. It was pretty awesome. And the dialogue between Sirius and Mr. Potter was hilarious! And I like how you made Lily's personality the outdoorsy type and not the regular old bookworm stereotype of her. Fantastic, amazing great job! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Author's Response: ::blushes:: Thank you so much for the review! You\'re making me want to write a whole bunch of other Lily/James one-shots... One\'s in the progress, but not quite finished - but thank you SO much for the support!!! Yous truly, Amelia Bedelia

 

Funeral For a Friend by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 33]

Summary: A tragic accident occurs in Lily's life, causing her to turn to the only friend she has left.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2942 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/12/06 Updated: 11/22/06


Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Funeral For a Friend

...Oh wow. That was amazing. It made me cry. Your portrayal of James is really accurate in my opinion, and is exactly how I envision James to be. Very moving. I Love the part with the marauders at the end and how they try to make things better for Lily. True Gryffindor spirit I tell you. Very, very good. Fantastic as usual. Can't wait for more or your stuff!

 

Worth Having by stelladarcy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: The steady thrum of her heart sustains her as all the words she wishes she were brave enough to say crowd about on the tip of her tongue. All left unspoken. She is a charlatan, a liar, and most of all, a coward. Oh yes, she is a very clever girl, too clever by far. But afraid by more. Ron/Hermione

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1759 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/18/06 Updated: 12/29/06


Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 01/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww! It's sooo cute. At first I thought it was too melodramatic but then I got into it. It's really cute! and sweet. and happy. I love it. It's added to my favourites.

 

Blind by pheonixflame
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: What really happened on that fateful Halloween night in 1981?

Songfic to "Blind" by Lifehouse.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2242 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/21/07 Updated: 01/29/07


Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 01/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Night, 1981

Great job! It was really good. I especially liked all their memories. Very sweet and sad.

Author's Response: I\'m very glad you liked it! Thanks for the review! :]

 
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