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Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 02/11/07 Title: None

OK. ya. I love it. And i read this chapter when it was updated however long ago. And i've been reading this story since May! It was the first one i read on this site, and i'm desparate for it to finally end! Please hurry up. I'm sick of waiting. And seeing how many reviews you have, I think a lot of people are too. Sorry if this seems slightly negative, but I'm can't wait any longer!!

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: None

GAH!!!!!!!! Update soon please! This is driving me nuts. This is the first fanfiction I EVER read and i want to finish it! PLEASE Don't make us wait much longer!

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/11/06 Title: None

Arghh!!! When are you going to update? I've been checking on this story EVERYDAY for the past ...like...two months. Hurry!! Please!!

The Pigeon and the Phoenix by Marauder by Midnight

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Consumed by her thoughts, Lily pours them out to a friend, only to find the wrong person hear them. Or is it the right one? One-shot.
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Wow! That was amazing. Very, very, very well-written. It's soo..capturing. I think that sums up both Lily and James' exact feelings. Perfect!! I love it!

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Wow! That was amazing. Very, very, very well-written. It's soo..capturing. I think that sums up both Lily and James' exact feelings. Perfect!! I love it!

Turning Saints Into the Sea by miss patil

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: James Potter is running out of time to win the heart of Lily Evans. In a last attempt to make her his, he formulates a secret plan.

Will the whole thing blow up in his face? . . . Or will Lily have some secrets of her own?

Warnings: Excessive amounts of romance, jealousy, and PMS.

I'm a'comin with the newest chapter!!
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 08/22/06 Title: Chapter 9: Hogsmeade Fun

Heehee. This is getting REALLY good. This fanfic is BY FAR my favourite one out of all that I've read, and trust me, ive read lots. Everything is soo interesting. Very very well-written. Can't wait for chp. 10!

Happy Birthday, Lily Evans by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Lily's eighteenth birthday is approaching fast. Will one of her friends figure out to do with a long-neglected organ?
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 01/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Well..good job on this one! It's something different that what I normally read, but i have to say I quite enjoyed it. I like Snape's self-scoring game. Very funny. And it looks like you have written many other fics, so I'm gonna go check those out now!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy the other ones too!

Letters by Sarah Kavanagh

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily thought she was in for a boring summer... but James Potter had other ideas. Love Letters, with a rather bizarre twist.
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 11/18/06 Title: Chapter 3: Firbeglass, a fun torture device

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I love this story SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much! YOu have done such an amazing job! It's hilarious and i can't stop laughing! I love the twist at the end. James is gonna get the other letter! BAHAHAHA. poor lily *evil smile*. Can't wait for more! I'm adding this to my favourites.

Scary Beautiful by Eve

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: If you're looking for the same old James loves Lily but Lily hates James story, than you're in the wrong place. The story is about confusion, heartbreak, and yea okay, there's a little fluff here and there. The story starts off with Lily and James becoming friends in their 7th year. But seriously, how long can that last? With fueding friends, jealousy, and secrets, Lily and James have quite a few things standing in their way. Does this stop their famous love? No WAY! But why believe me? Read and Review!

Sorry I haven't updated in so long. I'm a horrible person. All I can say is that every other time i tried to post the last chapter, it didn't feel right. Now it does. I like how it turned out.

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 09/05/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Talking Dogs and Misunderstandings

YAYAY! This one is soooooo goood! It's totally different from all the normal james/lily fics. This one is like a breath of fresh air! yay!! I love all the inter-connected relationship stuff. Really good! CAN NOT wait for more! yay!

Author's Response: that was like the best review ever! lol I feel so great now! Hey i think i\'ll submit the next chapter. see what good reviews do!

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Busted!

0o0o0o0o0o0! Yay! I love it. FINALLY. Allie doesn't deserve James. So glad he got rid of her. Now we just have to wait for James and Lily. YAY. Fantastic. Can't wait for me!

Author's Response: well, next chapt everything kinda goes nuts, so Lily and James don\'t get together right away. Nicki and Remus get more involved in the story, and trust me, nicki\'s a MILLION times worse than Allie.

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Busted!

Oops! I meant can't wait for more. lol. Oops.

A Change of View by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James sees Lily at the beginning of their fifth year and decides it's time to stop treating her like an annoying little sister.
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Change of View

Wow! i really like this story. you kind of put a new spin on the whole lily/james story instead of doing the regular james obessesion with lily-ever-since-he-saw-her thing. can't wait for your next story!

Author's Response: THANKS! I\'m really excited by the response for this story. I most certainly plan on writing many more stories.

Lily's Fancy by norarobertsfan

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Lily Evan's life is just the way she likes it. Nothing much happens unexpected, and she has all she needs: loving parents, loyal friends, a place to call home. So what if she and her older sister don't get along? So what if there are people who hate her for the blood that runs in her veins?

She's on her way to her seventh year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and there the rising danger that casts the Wizarding World in shadow, putting every Muggle, witch and wizard alike in mortal peril.

When disaster and tragedy hit too close to home, and Lily starts to close off from her friends, one man takes a stand and pulls her back out. He's been in love with her since youth, and this year is his last chance to win her heart.
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

fantastic! can't wait for the rest of the story!

The Ultimate Trust by Celestial Melody

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Hazel bored into emerald, igniting the magic fire of love that cannot be explained but is felt only once in a lifetime."
Witness the marriage of two of the most beloved (though little-known) characters in the world of magic.
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Roses

That was fantastic! Your descriptions of everything were amazing. I love it!

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so very much! I\'m overjoyed that you liked it, :) Reviews make me *squee!* ~Julia~

Their Journeys Entwined by The Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ever wondered how Lily and James came to be the bickering pair Harry espied in the Pensieve? And how they had then become the happy and loving couple Harry has heard about?

Of course she didn't hate him upon seeing him, and clearly he hadn't merely walked up to her, an irritatingly smooth talking eleven-year-old. No, this is their real journey -- from their very first encounter to their very first kiss.

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

wow! That was amazing! I really really liked it. It was really well-written and I don't know exactly what it was, but there was capturing and unique about your story. good job!

Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


“I’ll always protect you.”
Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: What Makes Life Worth Living

Wowee! Another fantastic chapter. great job! I love the part where Emma and Lily are talking back and forth and teasing each other. You made flow very well. It seemed so natural and it reminded me of me and my friends. Amazing job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: High compliments! I\'m glad you liked it; thank you very much for the review.

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 12/18/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: The First Day

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I love it! MY favourite lines.."YOU HAVEN'T HEARD AN APOLOGOY UNTIL YOU'VE HEARD JAMES POTTER APOLOGIZE!" and.."Now do you want a spring or summer wedding?" HA. I laughed out loud on that one. Fantastic job. I love it so much. Somehow you managed to keep my attention and you made the story really believable or plausible or whatever word you want to use. Some stories you read make you think "right. Cause that's TOTALLY how it happened...NOT." I hate stories like that. But this one is amazing. It's really gripping and it really puts you in the story with the characters. I love it. It's like an early christmas gift. BY FAR one of the best I've ever read. And as I've said before, my favourite. Anyways. can't wait for an update. Keep up the great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love reviews like this. I know when you mean when it comes to stories that, as good writing as they might be, just don\'t seem realistic enough, or feature characters that aren\'t true to canon. Therefore, such praise means a lot to me!

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild

OH MY GOSH!!! I absolutely LOVE your story. By far one of the best I have read, and i have read a lot. You put such a different spin on this story. It's not just the same ole same ole james and lily story. This is absolutely FANTASTIC! Andy is such a jerk. man i hate him. i'm glad you got rid of him. James is such a sweetheart! i LOVE it. he's so dreamy, and romantic. It's awesome. Can't Wait for the rest of the story! YAY!

Author's Response: Wow, it makes my day to read reviews like this. Thank so you much and I hope you continue to enjoy it. I\'m almost finished writing the next chapter. . . .

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Yay! Finally. Very good. so sweet. and just in time for valentine's day too! One of my favourite lines was "You'll finally get your girl." from Remus. I don't know what I like about that line, it strikes me as a REALLY good line. I love it. but i have to say, you had me worried there when Lily asked James to stop his friendship with Sirius. I was like... WHAT? She can't actually expect him to! But you fixed it, so it's all good. Very good. great. amazing. awesome. wonderful. magnificent. fantastic. You know, all the usual stuff i have to say about your writing. This chapter blew me away. It was awesome. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know, if Lily had really been asking that to James, it would have been awful. I never thought of that, but you\'re right, it is right in time for Valentines day!

Reviewer: sweet4potter Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: A Natural Phenomenon

Yay! another chapter! ..I'm running out of new things to say. They're always awesome. and I totally got the Beatles references! It was funny. And the whole part about the nicknames was really funny. and the 'Peanut" thing is awesome!! "A lot of fluff" was fun to read! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you got the Beatles references and enjoyed the whole chapter, nicknames, fluff and all! Thanks for the review.