Watch Over Me: When an accident leaves Hermione without magic, Draco is hired to protect her. But what happens when instead of protecting her, he falls in love with her?
Status: Chapter 13 is finally up!
Secrets Entwined : *coming soon* Draco and Hermione are hired to go undercover as a married couple to solve a Wizard murder in a Muggle village. With every mystery they solve, another emerges and they soon find out that everyone has something to hide.
Note: I've decided to completely finish writing this story before posting it chapter by chapter.
StatusCurrently writing chapter 1
simply love twists
sooooo happy their together now great chap.
ugh! the suspence kills
NOOO!!!! how cud u do that!! poor hermione! there better be sumthing to make up for this
that was sad and cute. i absolutly loved it
that was a WONDERFUL story. im soo happy he rly didnt die. this last chapter was soo sad and im still crying. that was one great story. i rly loved it. great job on it
nice chapter. that was a great first chapter and awesome introduction. i love the jealousy part
*sniffle* that was soooo sad, but still awesome chapter *goes bac to crying*
that was a cute chapter
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"For who can ever heal this wound inside me that runs so deep?" love that quote
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sad. very very sad
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wow thats rlllyy deep. loved it
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that was a great one-shot plz rite a sequel
Amazing. I loved the way you incorporated the lyrics into the fic. But even without the lyrics, the story is great. I loved it, especially this quote:
“It’s now my turn to understand. She isn’t the one enslaved.
great one-shot. the song rly did correspond with the story. good job on it
This piece is a seventh year, One-shot concerning Hermione and Draco that will either puzzle you, or intrigue you. I might warn you of slight AU, it depends on your take on this piece. We already know that this couple wouldn't exist in canon anyway, so please bare with. This was my very first HG/DM pairing and I did my best to avoid any...cliche's with this complex couple. And really, let my know your opinions. Criticism, flames, well hopefully not, or kind words are deeply appreciated.
Aw...thats so cute. its nice how that all happened by one look. great one-shot
I reviewed this story once a LONG time ago but it was a one-liner and this story needs more than that =]
I would like to start off by saying how I simply loved the fact that you were able to pull off such a wonderful one-shot with no dialogue whatsoever. It’s not something seen often and gave the story a special effect. Very original idea. Really liked it ;)
The one-shot itself was very short and sweet. I really liked the flow and the progression of the whole thing. I liked how at the beginning, they were forced together, like most Dramione stories start out, but by the end they stay together by their own choice.
The characterisation of Draco and Hermione was also very good. In a lot of Dramiones, you just see them both, all of a sudden, in love with each other but the pace of this was gradual and done very subtly.
I enjoyed the ending so much, especially the part where Hermione gave in into not knowing the answer to every single in life. Nice ending touch.
The only thing I could say about this one-shot is that my eye caught a few mistakes here and there. For example, here:
“…As the kiss grew deeper she didn’t analyzed what was happening to her…”
That should be anaylze. If you get a beta to quickly look over it. Other than that, great one-shot. You really illustrated Dramione nicely. =D
nice chapter. poor draco
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the galleon thing is prety sad. good chapter.
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*tear* i think this was a really good chapter. very cute. loved how you incorperated the song into the chap. good job.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I\'m so glad you liked this fic!