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Watch Over Me: When an accident leaves Hermione without magic, Draco is hired to protect her. But what happens when instead of protecting her, he falls in love with her?

Status: Chapter 13 is finally up!

Secrets Entwined : *coming soon* Draco and Hermione are hired to go undercover as a married couple to solve a Wizard murder in a Muggle village. With every mystery they solve, another emerges and they soon find out that everyone has something to hide.

Note: I've decided to completely finish writing this story before posting it chapter by chapter.

StatusCurrently writing chapter 1

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Black Rose by Black Pearl

Rated: Professors •
Summary: He saw her letters and became jealous. Passion turned to obsession, then he did something horrible to her. But if she was his, would she stay for sunrise to pass over her face, just so he'd know it wasn't a dream? Rated 'R'.

The sequel, Black Rose: The Lost Chapters, is now up!
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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 5: Playing with Posion

sooooo happy their together now great chap.

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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 6: Forbidden Vengeance

ugh! the suspence kills

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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 7: Repentance

NOOO!!!! how cud u do that!! poor hermione! there better be sumthing to make up for this

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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 8: Legacy

that was sad and cute. i absolutly loved it

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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

that was a WONDERFUL story. im soo happy he rly didnt die. this last chapter was soo sad and im still crying. that was one great story. i rly loved it. great job on it

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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Riddles in the Dark

nice chapter. that was a great first chapter and awesome introduction. i love the jealousy part

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Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 2: Forget to Remember

*sniffle* that was soooo sad, but still awesome chapter *goes bac to crying*

A Stab At Where The Heart Should Be by rita_skeeter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go. Herman Hesse

A saviour in a desolate place; redemption given to a former enemy. For beauty shines through the darkest despair...

This story has undergone major editing.
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Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 2: Fate Leads To Mysterious Places

that was a cute chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 3: Darling, Can't You Hear Me?

"For who can ever heal this wound inside me that runs so deep?" love that quote

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it!

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Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 4: Forever's Gonna Start Tonight

sad. very very sad

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you felt what was intended!

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Date: 12/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Is This What They Call Life?

wow thats rlllyy deep. loved it

Author's Response: Thank you!

A Conversation Between Lovers by Canis Contentis

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Three days after the final battle, two lovers share news, laughs, feelings, and more. Rated R for some language and sexual situations.
Reviewer: padfoot_returns Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

that was a great one-shot plz rite a sequel

Who Has to Know? by annie

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Draco has a secret, one that he would never admit to anyone...including himself. One-shot songfic to "Dirty Little Secret" by All-American Rejects.
Reviewer: padfoot_returns Signed
Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Who Has to Know?

Amazing. I loved the way you incorporated the lyrics into the fic. But even without the lyrics, the story is great. I loved it, especially this quote:

“It’s now my turn to understand. She isn’t the one enslaved.

I am.”

Beautifully written!

Addicted by ice witch

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione is addicted to Draco. He is all she thinks about, all she lives for. She knows she must escape his control but is she in too deep? Based on the song Addicted by Kelly Clarkson.
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Date: 12/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Addicted

great one-shot. the song rly did correspond with the story. good job on it

Puzzled Silence by Caren H

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: As the kiss grew deeper she didnít analyze what was happening to her, why she was kissing him back, and why he was kissing her. For once she didnít think at all. And she was okay with not knowing all the answers.

This piece is a seventh year, One-shot concerning Hermione and Draco that will either puzzle you, or intrigue you. I might warn you of slight AU, it depends on your take on this piece. We already know that this couple wouldn't exist in canon anyway, so please bare with. This was my very first HG/DM pairing and I did my best to avoid any...cliche's with this complex couple. And really, let my know your opinions. Criticism, flames, well hopefully not, or kind words are deeply appreciated.

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Date: 12/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Puzzled Silence

Aw...thats so cute. its nice how that all happened by one look. great one-shot

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Date: 06/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Puzzled Silence

Hello again!

I reviewed this story once a LONG time ago but it was a one-liner and this story needs more than that =]

I would like to start off by saying how I simply loved the fact that you were able to pull off such a wonderful one-shot with no dialogue whatsoever. It’s not something seen often and gave the story a special effect. Very original idea. Really liked it ;)

The one-shot itself was very short and sweet. I really liked the flow and the progression of the whole thing. I liked how at the beginning, they were forced together, like most Dramione stories start out, but by the end they stay together by their own choice.

The characterisation of Draco and Hermione was also very good. In a lot of Dramiones, you just see them both, all of a sudden, in love with each other but the pace of this was gradual and done very subtly.

I enjoyed the ending so much, especially the part where Hermione gave in into not knowing the answer to every single in life. Nice ending touch.

The only thing I could say about this one-shot is that my eye caught a few mistakes here and there. For example, here:

“…As the kiss grew deeper she didn’t analyzed what was happening to her…”

That should be anaylze. If you get a beta to quickly look over it. Other than that, great one-shot. You really illustrated Dramione nicely. =D

Curse of the Graveyard by lunagirl824

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Draco remembers the night when he accidently set an ancient magic of which he knew nothing on the girl he loved. He realizes what consequences have happened. Now that he knows why and how the accident happened, he can stop it from spreading farther. This is a story of love affected by family and what consequences it takes in Draco's world. Slightly AU because the pairing would never happen in the books. My first fanfic so please read and review and tell me exactly what you think of it. :P Thanks! Chapter 3 is up, working on the sequel. :)
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Date: 01/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Curse of the Graveyard

nice chapter. poor draco

Author's Response: thank you!

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Date: 01/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Back to the Graveyard

the galleon thing is prety sad. good chapter.

Author's Response: thanks, glad you liked it!

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Date: 01/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again

*tear* i think this was a really good chapter. very cute. loved how you incorperated the song into the chap. good job.

Author's Response: thank you so much. I\'m so glad you liked this fic!

Draco's Big Day by professor mary

Summary: Over the course of a day, Draco comes to understand the level of his commitment to his relationship with Hermione. (Draco/Hermione established relationship, also features one Slytherin!Pansy, a snarky Narcissa, and an obnoxious jewelry shop owner).
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Date: 01/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Draco's Big Day

nice one-shot. very cute and i loved wen draco talking to pansy. although i didnt like the idea of pansy being married to neville, still it was a rly good one-shot