I live in the U.S. I love slytherin/ Draco (Malfoy)/ Tom Felton. I like reading (Harry Potter),watching movies (Harry Potter) and listening to music(......Harry Potter). I like actin' and I am decent at singin'. I'm from Mississippi, but I'm an Army Brat (Actually I'm not a brat more like an angel ... Ha Ha Ha) I really enjoy facfiction and I'm most likely gonna make one of my on one day.
I love your stories write more your a great writer. I begin to loose interest when you don't write. The reason I didn't review be4 is because I just found out how I have been reading fiction for a couple of months now and I only chose peticular one I chose yours and I loose interest when nothing is there. Great story .......but you've taken to gonna havta take a point of for that.
Wow you are gifted you are so good . I love it please update soon! You are a genius
Yor very talented love reading 2nd favorite you have updated well no complaints.
Think i have grey hairs updated update update update update update update update
I think it has been a month since you have last updated. I've almost lost interest please update soon even if it is a short chapter. You're chapters are great , (10) but your updating in poor (4) so I give this a seven.
You should write more to make up for lose time. This chapter was great of couse of a Draco Malfoy fan (he is so hot!) so seeing hermione suffer is kinda fun.(sad to say)
Summary: Hermione Granger normally cannot stand perfection, having been mocked for being perfect her whole life. Matters become worse when a simple plan to prove her "wild side" turns into the romance of a life time. The problem: He is absolutely perfect. According to her, at least.
Things get out of control, and after one thing leads to another, Hermione is forced to choose between losing what she has and losing what she wants.
Ignores books 6 and 7, but takes place in year 7
Great twist OMG it rocks update or i'll go mad... okay not mad but i will be a very sad person (*tear tear*)
Author's Response: Did i mention how much i love reviews...they make me want to try to write more....i have a bit of the next chapter written.
Sorry I have been reading your fiction ever since you 1st wrote if but being the brillant person I am I just learned how to review you are a great author keep writing your stories are great probably because I'm a Draco fan nothing's better than his point of view. I also wanted to say you crack me up a whole bunch with that "Heh heh heh" thing in the 1st story. Detention is what i THINK is was called.
This was gr8 what is the name of the sequel?
Pretty sure you can't have Video Cameras because it is a muggle suptitute for magic and they go crazy on hogwarts ground. (Hint: hermione says in the forth book Draco can't be talking in a walkie talkie because it is for muggles.) Draco pov (of course
Author's Response: Got it.
Who rox you rock your grear without you there wouldn't be fanfiction. Okay maybe a little bit of a stretch but you rock more that a boulder. Ok that was kinda corny but you rock. your a great write...Oh no pineapples ahhhhhhh! to be continued.... well not really but I would compare you to J.K. Rowling herself the pineapples have now hurt me I won't be able you review for at least 5 minutes
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Yay! I rock! I rock! I rock! Lol, really? I rock more than a boulder? Lol :). I actually got the joke, and I'm usually slow at jokes. The pineapples hurt you? They're not cute? The pudding's not good? How did they hurt you?? Lol...I'm happy and I have a project do tomorrow that I barely started on. And I'm happy. I'm weird.
Author's Response: Oops! DUE not due...sorry... I had to correct myself. :)
Author's Response: Omg! I meant to write: "Ooops! DUE not do....sorry....I had to correct myself" Sorry, I had to correct myself. Lol! I feel like a broken record....I feel like a broken record....I feel like a broken record....I feel like a broken record....I feel like a broken record....
Great a little more action would have been greater but all in all it was awesome. Where do you keep coming across the mutant pineapples i have to stay away im allergic to regular pineapples. 9 of 10 bravo
Author's Response: Yay! 9/10! That's good! ....A reviewer threatened me that if I don't update soon, she'll send her mutant pineapples. :) Don't worry...there is more action in the next chapter.
Wonderful Wonderful Wonderful did I say Wonderful you have a talent. Sorry I haven't reviewed before I Just foung out how to review don't get mad. May I ask why there will be no Draco pov that kinda takes away from the story well I'm glad you told us. I would have probably had been dissapointed if i found out myself.
Author's Response: I'm not mad...it took me a while to figure out how to review too. Lol! I didn't want to put Draco's POV in cause it's too much work for me...I know...it's a stupid reason...just call me lazy. :) Since you're not the only person who asked me about Draco's POV, after I write ch 6, you guys can review and vote if you want Draco's POV or not. And if a lot of people want it, then...I guess I'll write it after chapter 6. :)
Author's Response: Oops! I fogot to thank you for reviewing! :)
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
will you at least tell y you haven't upd8ted yet whatever Totallyclueless has is getting contagious I think i'm hearing voices.... oh that's my mom callin' well I want you to upd8 soon anyway.... please .... pretty please..... pretty please with sugar on top and all the hp accesories (i didn't mean i'd give them to you, but i ..oooh nevermind please review.
Don't think its demented but that blood part (with the nipple) could have total been left of good story anyway
Haven't read other chapters after this but we are like sister from what i read on you Bio my name is corlesia mouth full. Great writing!!!!
Wow I love you work you are great. One thing I didn't like is you didn't have enough about Draco
Great chapter and I love the way to express my Draco's feelings ... Thanks!
It should be a girl grey eyes and curly hair and sweet. No actually it should be a cute little boy with brown eyes and hair like his (sexy) Daddy. No it should be twins and we all will find out that Hermione's real name is Purbluda and She wants to have 6 more children with Draco by the time she is 21, and if they can have children they can keep on trying (if you know what i mean)
Are you even going to make a sequel to this i would enjoy it.