The Snake and the Eagle by Alessandra_C
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 70]
Summary: It's Harry Potter’s sixth school year and the world is under the impending menace of Lord Voldemort and his pitiless Death Eaters. A new teacher arrives to Hogwarts. Will it be another candidate for the DADA post? New friendships and love affairs sprang up under Albus Dumbledore’s benevolent gaze. A private Yule Ball. More bloody writing on the wall and a Muggle-born involved. Snape’s life is in great danger. The Second War begins. Who will be the winner?
Ship: Snape/OC
Glad to see you updated. Enjoying.
Ah yes, The Crisis. Miss the kissing...
I was excited to see a new chapter. I'm glad you haven't forgotten about your faithful readers... :)
This story really grew on me. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
I loved the Valentine's Day floating petal charm! And the kiss was very steamy. : )
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Keep on writing. Waiting to see what comes next. But, ewwww, Draco! Yuck. However, i think you wrote him just right, he would be a sleeze and a slimeball.
Rapture: L'Esprits Tortueux by Dana Marie
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 84]
Summary: On the eve of his Dementor's Kiss, Patrick Essex wrote a letter to his captor:
“Your wife will bear you a child – a girl with hair the color of butter, skin the color of milk. A girl whose veins pulse with an unbridled passion. I will leave this place, and I will slaughter her. She will die a death so gruesome that Satan himself will pity her, Gabriel Lee. Of this, you may be certain.”
But I refuse to die.
Great idea for a story. I think you also did a good job at keeping the characters close to form. Keep on writing.
Born the Day You Kissed Me by CLee
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1262]
Summary: I was born the day you kissed me...I died inside the night you left me...But oh how I lived while you loved me. . . .
The sequel Agapanthus is up!
Your writing is very good and so is the story. I read this b/c i read Torn and liked it so much. Finish up this one, then post Torn SEQUEL! Thanks. Good work.
Traditional Socks by Angharad
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Why does Professor Dumbledore tell Harry that he sees himself holding a pair of socks in the Mirror of Erised?
Sooo Cute! Very clever mind too. The SOCKS!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
In the Infirmary by JoWannabe
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 31]
Summary: One-shot. While reading OotP, I noticed that only Ron and Hermione were still staying in the infirmary when Harry visited them; Neville's nose and Ginny's ankle had been mended, and Luna was back to normal, whatever normal means for her. So, from this knowledge, this fic emerged. It's my version of what could have happened that night after Harry, Ginny, Neville, and Luna had gone.
CUTE! It really seemed like "our" Hermoine and Ron too. Good writing.
CUTE! It really seemed like "our" Hermoine and Ron too. Good writing.
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Well, I’m happy to have the privilege of being the first to review. I think your name really suits your writing "Spazy." This is not a criticism. Everyone’s writing style is different. You're story is very interesting and i love how you are stretching out the tension between Hr and D. So many stories have them hate each other and then in the next paragraph they're desperately in love. Good writing takes time and revision and good for you because this chapter seemed much better (as far as little mistakes go) than the previous ones and i believe the following chapters will be even better. You're story is really good, take the time to make the writing great. And don't put yourself down about your writing.
Author's Response: thank so much for your review it is very encouraging. lol i'm glad u like my name it does rather fit me good LOL! i really noticed all the little things that needed revised when i took the extra time to look it over this time. i will definately to the same in the future! i'll try not to put my writting down, it is kinda a habit, i do it in school when i grade myself, everyone else gives me way higher grades than i do myself! thanks again!
Good story. I really like the long build up between Draco and Hermoine. Just a suggestion (because i like your story so much, or else i wouldn't bother) find someone to proofread for you so they can catch the small mistakes that you, as the author, miss.
Author's Response: thanks for the review and thanks as well for the suggestion it does getting boring after awhile when people constantly tell you that your story is just so great! (not that that bad or ne thang lol) but i like to hear constructive criticism! i will look intot that!
Glad to see you posting again
Author's Response: haha yea sry bout that!
Never Been Kissed by emaleth
Rated: [Reviews - 57]
Summary: Hermione decides to stop being such an old fuddy-duddy! Love ensues!
Mmmmm, very steamy! Good Job. I liked it a lot.
Summary: Hermione has been kidnapped in the post OotP summer by the Dark Side in order to lure Harry Potter away from safety. Hermione is alone and afraid; no one yet knows where she is (or even that she's gone) except Severus Snape...
Hermione/Snape pairing (not as gross as it sounds, promise!)
Please write more, this is very good.
Civility by SecretKeeper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 341]
Summary: THE LAST CHAPTER IS IN! Read, review and enjoy!
The first battle of the second War- Dementors illegally issuing the Kiss on Death Eaters- A murder in the Weasley family- Voldemort's plans- Dumbledore's and Harry's struggle.
In the midst of this chaos and hardship, Hermione is left feeling slightly disheartened. When Harry and Ron are temporarily unavailable to befriend her, an ironic and seemingly platonic relationship is born. Will it ease the pain of the War's influence, or will it only create further turmoil for a girl that needs anything but?
And in the end, a terrible decision is left to be made; one that no natural person would envy.
Angsty. Innocent. Highly Enjoyable.
Put me in the mood for some good kissing, shame my husband is out of town...
Author's Response: LOL!! Yes, it is a shame! Hopefully he's back by now! Thanks so much for the review; I'm glad you liked it!!
Very good story, The pace is also very good. Please update soon.
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I really like how you are telling this story with the aid of flashbacks. Cool idea.
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I read all 8 chapters in one shot. A really good story.
