So pretty much I just like reading fanfiction. I haven't written any-but I might!
I also signed up to be a BETA reader! YAY for me! I love proof reading things, I used to proof read my senior friend's scholarship essays and such.
So this was really good- some of it was a little choppy, but I reread the few paragraphs that were and it cleared up. But it has a really good plot and you have Harry's personality pretty much down! I really liked the whole "ring" thing-that was pretty cool!
Too Far Gone by Gemmika
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1174]
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
I love it. I stayed up to un ungodly hour reading it. (12:36 am on a school night- thanks!!) lol.
It made me sad, but it was so good that it made up for it!!!
Loathing or Love? by Miss Radcliffe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 406]
Summary: Lily Evans loathes James Potter. She loathes him with a passion everyone in Hogwarts knows about. But during her 7th year, Lily begins to ask herself, is it loathing, or is it something else? Read as feelings and the lives of Lily, James, and their friends unfold.
SEE NOTE ON AUTHOR'S BIO REGARDING THE NEXT CHAPTER.
So this was a pretty good chapter....although I guessed he was going to by the necklace for her as soon as she read the price!
But I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter.....
The suspense is pretty unbearable!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know exactly how you feel. I\'ll update as soon as I can, probably tomorrow.
Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 957]
Summary:
Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?
OMG. this was so good. and so incredibly sad. I loved it!!!
OMG. this was so good. and so incredibly sad. I loved it!!!
wow- this is really good. keep writing! it's out there, but it keeps you wondering.
sad that you had to kill off Ron and Harry......
But it's pretty aswesome stuff!
AAAAAAHHHHHHHH
this is just SO great!!!!
I can barely hold it in.....I don't know how I'll survive until the next chapter!!!!
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH
IT'S SO GOOD!!
Must.......have............next.........chapter.......to......survive!!!
:)
In Nomine Amoris by suckr4romance
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 290]
Summary: A Book Seven fan fiction. Harry Potter embarks on his journey after completing some unfinished business, and receives some unexpected help from an old mentor. Disembodied Voices, Unrequited Love, a Missing Person, a Lovely Wedding, and a Secret Room. Many surprises and unexpected twists lie ahead... Debts are repaid. Revenge transpires. Emotions run high. The hunt is on.
'In Nomine Amoris' is Latin for 'In the Name of Love.'
Follows Post-HBP canon.
Nominated for the Quick Silver Quills: Best General Fiction
Discontinued.
AAARGHH!!!!!!
cliffhangers are very frustrating!!!!!! but it's good, so keep it up!! :)
Author's Response: Fortunately, the next chapter is waiting for judgment in the queue--it won\'t be too long from now that the cliffhanger is reconciled!