Yes, those are my real initials.
Birthday: April fourteenth. Age: Early twenties
Pets: Two Great Danes and an Iguana
HP books: Goblet of Fire and Half-Blood Prince
HP movies: Philosopher's Stone, Chamber of Secrets and Goblet of Fire
other book favorites: Lord of the Rings Trilogy; any Star Wars book
other movie favorites: Star Wars movies; Lord of the Rings trilogy; Star Trek: First Contact; Coneheads; True Lies; Judge Dread; Terminater trilogy; Dracula: Dead and Loving It; and many, many more
videogames: ALL Zelda games; Final Fantasy series; Mario games; Star Wars: Rogue Squadren series; Star Fox: Assualt; too many more to mention
You really captured the essence of harry's and Snape's characters, good job. Please continue soon.
I think you should keep the story the way it is. I think it is hilarious. Personally, randomness only distracts from the story, and is not funny. And that Monkey thing is disturbing, not funny.
This story is pretty good, so far. The first chapter was shaky, but the rest is good. As for a solution for Mrs. Weasley, it's real simple. The healer even said it. That is, treat him as he is acting, and seeking attention. Mrs. weasley is out shopping already, so she should buy Harry some diapers. He's acting like a baby, so treat him like one. Diaper him, feed him, dress him, bathe him, all of it.
Author's Response: . . . . . .?? I appreciate the good review. I'd be more shocked about your solution, but I have already had two e-mails with the same idea. It is just odd, I think. ????
I like it. It has humor and heart. Though Harry rarely cries in the books, I think any eleven-year-old boy would cry in that situation. You have good character development, keep going.
Very good. You have a talent for fan songs.
Author's Response: I do? I mean, yes, I do! Well, I never really thought I would be good at this kind of stuff, but in came to me in the car ride home from picking up a Christmas tree. There was a song on the radio called "The Twelve Pains of Christmas," and I thought it would be funny to make "The twelve Pains of FanFics." It's mine and my friend's new favorite Christmas song ^_^
I am so glad my reviewers recommended your story to me. I really like the details you write into your story. I don't know if you take reader suggestions seriously or not, but I do think Harry and Leilani getting into a tinsy bit of trouble together over the holidays would be good. Keep up the good writing and update when you can.
This is an amazing and complex story. This chapter was very sad, but now Harry will never want to leave his idea world. The story is so descriptive and realistic. Harry really sounded like somebody who would use drugs and then like somebody who is using drugs. If he does wake up he will definantly feel worse, like going through withdrawl.
I'm sorry to hear you had such trouble posting your story. I just finished it on the other site. It is really good, though it ended differently than I expected. I'll say no more, as not to ruin it for others. I really enjoyed all the detail you put into EVERY character. You really put some thought into their behavior, where others might have only done so with Harry, maybe Leilani. I only hope I have done as good a job with my own fanfiction. Though it is humor, I would appreciate your thoughts, if you ever have time to read and review; just look in my profile for the longer story.. I know how busy college is though, so don't worry if you can't.
I just realized I wrote "long lovers" instead of "young lovers." Just wanted to clarify. Please update soon, or if it was a one shot, please mark as complete.
Thuroughly enjoyable. I do wish we had seen what was on each valentine. Please post the "dates" soon. Actually a date can be like punishment for long lovers.
This is absolutely incredible. The characters are so well written and it seems so real. I especially like the vivid attention to detail. Hoping you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks man. Means a lot as this is my maiden effort. Any suggestions for improvement?
I thought it was a very good chapter. You have a nice grasp of Dumbledore's exentricities. I really cannot wait to see how Serena teaches and if Harry gets in trouble in her class, he always gets in trouble. Anyway, I am waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Your story is very well written. The character's personality quirks are still in tact, as far as I have read anyway. I only disagree with one thing, though it seems the rest of the story depends upon it. I got the impression from book six that Harry would not want to be an Auror if Scrimgeour was still Minister. All in all, very compelling first chapter. I will deffinently read more.
Author's Response: Hmmm, I see where you\'re coming from. You have a very good point but Harry just wants revenge on the Death Eaters at the moment (you\'ll find out why in chapter 6!) and so became an Auror to track them down.