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The Daughter of Light by Magical Maeve
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 587]

Summary: An Irish witch languishes in the darkness of her family home, confined by her father and circumstances. What will it take to bring her out of this exile? The chance to return to Hogwarts? The opportunity to participate in the fight against Voldemort and his Death Eaters? Or will it be Severus Snape, a man she did not expect to see again in her lifetime?



This is canon compliant to OoTP but written pre-HBP.



Reviews and constructive criticism are most welcome, and thanks go to Ashwinder who kindly beta read the chapters for me. :-)


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 302838 Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 05/23/06


Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 02/24/05 Title: Chapter 24: An Auror of Mystery

This is the best chapter yet! Not only was Remus alive and well, possibly cured of Lycanthropey(I don't know why, but I love that word...) but Maeve and Snape kiss(awww!!!)! Whats going on with the droobles best blowing gum? Does it have to do with serverus's mum like Nevilles? Whats between Lupin and Maeve? Are they related? Only a few of the many questions I have to wait to find out! 10 :-)

Author's Response: No Maeve and Lupin aren't related. In the early chapters they formed a close bond when they had to act as brother and sister and they have become attached in that way despite not being blood relatives. You'll have to wait and see if the gum is significant. :-) And Remus' Lycanthropy...my lips are sealed. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 03/22/05 Title: Chapter 29: A Firm Hand

It's a pathetic reveiw, but...AWESOME CHAPPIE! lol im such a dork. 10!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 05/31/05 Title: Chapter 32: A Proposal

I haven't been here for a while! Excellent chapter! 10!

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 02/14/05 Title: Chapter 23: Abbeylara.

He's ALIVE! *Dances even more than last time.* Lets celebrate by...er...reveiwing nicely? GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!10 :-)

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the review, Lily.

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 03/08/05 Title: Chapter 25: Alice

Poor Alice and Remus. Where is he going? Will he be okay? Augh! even more ?s. I still dont know about the gum...Great chapter, sorry for slight randomness...10

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 02/04/05 Title: Chapter 21: Remus Removed

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY WHY WHY?!?!?!?!? PLEASE let her have just killed a wolf and remus is still alive!!!PLEASE*sobs* I'm Actually CRYING! HOW COULD you????*gasps*please??? Nice story any way...BRING HIM BACK!!!

Author's Response: *Hands out another Kleenex* All I can say is you will have to wait and see...there will be more suspense in the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 03/11/05 Title: Chapter 28: Why Didn't They Ask Snape?

I love how Neville acted when he heard the curse. Will you write chapter from Remus's POV? Brilliant chapter, 10!

Author's Response: I don't really write whole chapters from any one person's POV but you have just given me an idea for a one-shot or small chaptered fic based on what Remus gets up to when he goes to Paris! Thank-you so much for a great idea. :-)

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 02/10/05 Title: Chapter 22: A Journey Home

He may still be alive?! *dances around hugging everyone she sees* Great chapter, then!!!!10

Author's Response: Thanks for the 10 Lily!

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 03/08/05 Title: Chapter 26: Weaselling In and Out

Great chapter! If Snape's not a morning person, than what is he? 10

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 03/08/05 Title: Chapter 27: Drooble's Best Blowing Gum

Nice chapter! Glad to know the answer to the gum question! I love how everything in your story fits into canon, especially snape. 10! :-)

Author's Response: Snape has been giving me a few headaches over the past few chapters because he is getting romantically involved with our heroine and it's proving really difficult to keep him IC...nice to know I'm amanaging it! Thank you for all your reviews...they are very welcome. :-)

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 03/25/05 Title: Chapter 30: Is He or Isn't He?

Awesome chapter! I like how Snape acted in this, it was perfect. 10!

Author's Response: Thanks, Lily

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 06/02/05 Title: Chapter 33: A Detour

hello! sorry i dissapeared, forgot i wasnt supposed to have an actual life...lol. nice chapter! pitiful reveiw....oh well. 10!

Author's Response: Hey, a review's a reviews...especially with all the log in problems...so thank you for leaving one!

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 01/20/05 Title: Chapter 18: Sleepers

Brilliant story, i liked how you got the idea of using neville to teach the class! ______10 :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I felt it was high time Neville got a little bit of the glory... we will see more from Neville later on.

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 06/19/05 Title: None

I agree with Kikisstuff, she is a bit of a Mary Sue. Awesome story though! I only have one bit of critisim, in Quidditch Through the Ages, it says that in America they usually play Quodpot. I don't care that much, it's just a tip. Great story! 10/10 :-)

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 06/19/05 Title: None

Ouch. 10/10

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 06/19/05 Title: None

Actually, its 4. Great job with the whole quidditch thing. I'm not good with quiddich... :-) 10/10

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 06/19/05 Title: None

I hate that...person...beleive me, that's an insult...are you American? I didn't know people in England didn't know what dude ment...ramble, ramble...blahblahblah..10/10!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 02/09/05 Title: None

Nice chapter! ""But you still have those gorgeous brown eyes I love. And you still smell like peppermint," he leaned in to smell me. I laughed to myself at how we thought too much alike." Is there relly such thing as a guy who thinks like that??? Ginny's taking that for granted...10

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 04/17/05 Title: None

Take your time on writing the next chappie! lol I just moved too...101010!

 
Reviewer: LilyPotter Signed
Date: 02/09/05 Title: None

"You got me. I was out searching for you to tell you how much I want you. Oh Malfoy, I need you. Now please step aside," I said, my attitude dripping with sarcasm. The boy infront of me laughed. "Well, in that case, I'll let you go. But only if you call me Draco," he insisted, stepping closer to me. I scoffed in disgust and walked straight into him, knocking him aside. -hehe! Sounds like this story'll get interesting...nice chappie!10

 
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