this story (both of the chapters so far) is so entrancing, it has feelings and is impossible to stop reading. WriterInTraining, please email me at: firstname.lastname@example.org when you submit the next chapter, or if you could tell me where I can find the whole story (you said you had 16 chapters on this story on another site). please email!
see my "hurt" review. keep em coming! :)
wow. its really good...update soon! just as long as h/hr get togerther!
Summary: Just before his sixteenth birthday, Harry receives two letters - one from Hermione, and the other from Cho. Harry is then forced to make a big decision.
I really like it, you definitely have a talent for writing. keep up with this story, and, if you want, read my story and review "The Grief that Must Be Overcome" a H/Hr fic
I really like the length and detail, it's a very original and interesting story...but there is so much detail it kiind of seems like you are working more on the adjectives and adverbs more than the plot line. Well, I like it a lot though!
Author's Response: That's a fair point. One that's been brought up by others as well. On the other hand, some have asked for even more details! I guess its a balancing act. Thanks very much for the detailed review. I appreciate the feedback.
Summary: When they finally realize that they love each other, everything will change. What will happen? Find out as the infamous trio enters their 6th year at Hogwarts.
Are you sure this is your first fic? Because this story ROCKED!!!!! keep on writing, girl, and never stop!
I love your balance of humor and drama; that shows the marks of a very good author. It was very short, though, but that might be a good technique-keeps them waiting! Anyway, very, very good.
Author's Response: Thanks! It totally rocks my world when I get a kickass review like that! Merci! *wink*