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Oblivious by Pallas
Rated: [Reviews - 559]

Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 162508 Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 08/27/05


Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 02/04/05 Title: Chapter 15: Into the Woods

Excellant dialog between Rey and Kane. Both characters are well thought out. I like how you had Rey get angry at Kane and tell him off. Looking forward to more.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/04/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Marauder

good details on Lupin's back story. Especially liked Molly changing his Nappy.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/04/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Tribute

I thought the tribute was just fine. Not at all maudlin and in the spirit of Sirius and James.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 07/28/05 Title: Chapter 37: In From the Cold

going to echo someone elses' review, but when I was reading Half Blood Prince, there was a point when I was thinking how close this story was to it. Pretty neat

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/04/05 Title: Chapter 6: The Werewolf Lesson

excellant lesson plans even if they weren't quite what Lupin planned.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/04/05 Title: Chapter 8: A Little Time to Heal

I am quite thankful that you are not so concise. Reading your story is like the old cliche drinking fine wine - good enough to savor. This is a story that can be read over and over again.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/10/05 Title: Chapter 10: The Dream

I just read that itsy bitsy line about his mum falling out the Parisian window. We all know wizards are made of stronger stuff than that. (wink wink). I assume his mum is the one who created the wolfsbane potion he is taking now. I originally thought she found a cure and was killed before she wrote dowm the formula. Just rambling. Excellant story.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/10/05 Title: Chapter 11: Part 2: The Bite - A Challenging Case

Good detail on Rey. And here I was expecting a Rey's explanation to be over with in this chapter. But I can wait.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: Chapter 19: A Matter of Blame

I had no problem with Remus and his father expressing emotion with each other. In some respects Remus's reaction to his mothers death might border on cliche, but on the other hand it is in character for him to feel less malice towards Kane for what happen to him, yet feel burning anger for Kane hurting a loved one. As always a 10

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 06/12/05 Title: Chapter 28: Liber Emitto

It was very interesting how you described how the wolfsbane potion affected Remus after he turns to a werewolf. There was a part of me that said he should know how to walk but I suppose if all he previously did was sleep in front of the fire, it would be difficult. I suppose also he would have been afraid that the wolfsbane might not work and that there was still a risk he could hurt someone as a werewolf.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 06/12/05 Title: Chapter 29: The Alpha of Hogwarts

Being a Snape fan, I could protest Snape unheroic efforts in the Great Hall, but actually it makes sense. Snape's moment of glory probable won't happen until book 7 and I realise this is Remus' story. As I said in the last chapter I originally had problems with Remus not knowing how to walk. Although I think Remus shouldn't have had problems walking I can understand his fear of the wolf within even while under the influence of wolfsbane. His temptation to let the wolf attack Kane was completely understandable. What showed his maturity was that he rejected it. What I liked about the death scene (assuming he is dead) was that he didn't think of it as dying but only as a means to keep the wolf within from getting out. That attitude is the essence of the Remus we know and love.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 02/24/05 Title: Chapter 17: The Wall

Interesting as to why Rey had to Obliviate Remus. Nice ironic touch

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/03/05 Title: Chapter 2: The Pensieve

Clever use of the pensieve. As I was reading this a second time I realized the signifigance of Nov 2, 1981. It's when Sirius was arrested. I like the detail that goes with the story.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 01/03/05 Title: Chapter 3: Secrets

I like how you had Harry go to the Burrow instead of Grimmauld place.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 21: Caught Out

So glad you are still writing. Can't wait for Tonk's idea.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 05/01/05 Title: Chapter 24: Facing the Music

Poor Remus, All these people yelling at him. And being the type of person he is he feels bad.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 02/04/05 Title: Chapter 13: Family Ties Part 1

Still enjoying the story. Your so called lull in action makes the story suspenceful.

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 02/04/05 Title: Chapter 14: Family Ties Part 2

Kind of suspected that the boy Rey didn't adopt might have been Kane. but it didn't occur to me he would be his nephew. I like the Abel/Kane metaphor.

 

Fate by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 598]

Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 135024 Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 11/15/05


Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 09/22/06 Title: Chapter 23: Blast That Man

good conversation between Dumbledore and Snape. good suspence

 
Reviewer: rambkowalczyk Signed
Date: 09/20/06 Title: Chapter 17: The Missing Piece

compelling read. I like how in the last chapter you tied in Emily's abd Arianna's death with Peter's betrayal. It may be asking alot but I hope Peter can get a little more depth in character.

 
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