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Lost Innocence by Sly Severus
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: No one is born a killer. This is the story of the night Lucius Malfoy became one.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3823 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/24/06 Updated: 07/06/06


Reviewer: deathstar Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lucius' Assignment

No offence but I thnk the story could have been a little longer. And I think that you should put the part where Mowfoy does the deed that voldemort has him do.

Author's Response: The story is longer. It\'s a chaptered story. It will have three parts, and the chapter where Malfoy does the task in the quere now. Sorry, you didn\'t realize there was more to come.

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