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I am one of many fan of JK Rowling writing. I like vacation time with my family, reading and listen to music. I also like spaguetti and pizza. I love to learn new things and to make new friends.
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The Moon Divides by Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 133]

Summary: COMPLETE!

(AU Fic) Two twins named Remus and Rachael Lupin have been inseperable for the eight years they've been on this Earth. But one fateful trip into the forest has changed all of that.

Excerpt from Chapter Twenty Three - A Second Chance

Professor Lupin walked over and sat down at the foot of his daughter’s bed.

“How are you?” he asked, watching his daughter carefully.

“Fine,” she answered, although she could have been better.

“How could you-,”

“Please dad,” Rachael cut him off. “Sirius already gave me the ‘how could you’ lecture.” Professor Lupin smiled.

“Did he now?”

“Yes and he got through to me pretty well.”

“Good, I just hope you know never to do something like that again.”

“I’m not going to, Mum’s not worth it.” Professor Lupin clicked his tongue.

“You can’t say that,” he said quietly, getting up and heading for the door. “Everyone deserves a chance to change. Just as you tried to prove that to your mother, one day she’s going to prove it to you. Everyone deserves a second chance.”


*Warning, some mental abuse and later a little physical, nothing terribly bad, just a warning*

Nominated for 2006, 2008, 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Dark/Angsty Fic

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 126939 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 09/02/06


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: That Fateful Day

good beginning I hope this is something the author was on her mind about what happen to "Moony" in his young age.

 
Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 4: Mail Call

this is something thst I like to see what will happen after the first year in the school.

 

Summary:

"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting with Dumbledore

something out of the ordinary, something the real author could wrote about (if one day she does I hope could be sdomthing about harry's parent in school>)

 

Summary:

In their seventh year at Hogwarts, Lily Evans and James Potter are made Head Girl and Head Boy. Lily is horribly dismayed by this, as she cannot stand James. As the year goes on, however, things begin to change between the two. Can James catch his flower, or is it hopeless for him to try?

“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 46601 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Published:
12/17/04 Updated: 08/31/05


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 7: Changing Strategies

i like it, let's hope if one day the real author read it she like it too.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!

 
Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 8: Friends

This is something that always happen and it is real funny to imagen that also happen in the magic world too.

Author's Response: Indeed! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 13: Always

I enjoy it, and this is something the Harry will say to his friends (remember he is like his parents acording to Lupin)

Author's Response: Haha, he is indeed. Thanks for reviewing!

 

Summary: No one understands how I feel. How could they? They hadn't known James for as long as I have, and they hadn't had him taken away from them by the redhead.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3303 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/15/05 Updated: 02/15/05


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Understanding the One Thing You Can't

I hope this is Siruis who is talking before it is pretty good.

 

'Yes' by nat089
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 113]

Summary: James Potter usually accepts dares without batting an eyelash. However, this time, while he’s on a dare, he's also on a personal mission. But first, he’s anxiously waiting for Lily to turn up. What does Lily have to do with this dare? And what will she say when she finds out?

(One shot)


[Author's Note]
Before you start commenting that the dare was unromantic, please please read the 2nd sentence of the 4th paragraph. I clearly state that "James was steeling himself to do SOMETHING HE WANTED TO DO VERY MUCH EVEN WITHOUT BEING DARED TO". In other words, the dare was the catalyst, not the cause. It only served to spur him into action; it didn't give him the intention of doing what he did (I'm trying not to give out spoilers here, so read to find out what - though you can probably guess ;)).

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1608 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/01/05 Updated: 10/01/05


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 07/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: 'Yes'

I hope this the way JK had in mind that James and Lily get together.

 

Summary: James has always had a thing for Lily, but she just brushes it off as his rising to a challenge, going for the one girl he can’t have. But as he does everything in his power to prove her wrong, will she finally realize that the one boy who can make her truly happy is the one who has always driven her completely insane?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1837 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
10/18/05 Updated: 10/18/05


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Thoroughly Confused, Completely Determined

good beginning continue and want to see how this end

 

Perfect Day (one-shot) by MrGibenz
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Lily tells of her perfect day that she just had.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 825 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/05 Updated: 11/07/05


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect Day

this is good i hope this is the way the real author seen how the par got together.

 

Summary: Consumed by her thoughts, Lily pours them out to a friend, only to find the wrong person hear them. Or is it the right one? One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1027 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/05 Updated: 02/26/06


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 05/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

good story if you are making into a series or chapters it is a good beginning.

 

The Broken Soul by silverfox
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 278]

Summary: Dumbledore is dead and Harry is left alone… or is he? An unexpected ally appears to help Harry in his quest to defeat Voldemort. But Harry is running out of time and Voldemort is pressing down hard. He’s determined to get rid of his last remaining obstacle, Harry Potter. Can Harry find all the Horcruxes before it is too late, even with a new ally? The story will include romance, adventure, mystery, murder, betrayal and much more. There will be also some unexpected twists. This story has been abandoned. See the finished version at HPFF!

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 117859 Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Published:
03/29/06 Updated: 07/16/07


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/24/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Locket

i hope he did not trust snape, but you never know. something i could tell he is brave

Author's Response: We\'ll see. Thanks for your review. :)

 

Solace by Secret Lily
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 459]

Summary: Lily Evans remained shadowed and distant from the world she loved so dearly. Control was Michael's weakness; temptation hers. Yet, when James Potter enters her life, without so much as a warning or brief hesitation, Lily finds truth. For James Potter refused to give up on her.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 20627 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
04/17/06 Updated: 05/16/10


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 05/17/07 Title: Chapter 8: One To Mend

let us hope that Lily can fix this (right) or something bad it is going to happen and soon.

Author's Response: http://unknowableroom.org/459/1

 

How He Knew by A House Elf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 52]

Summary: Lily makes a slip-of-the-tongue that causes James to wonder.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2096 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/22/06 Updated: 07/30/06


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

James knew from the beginning that he like Lily, why it took so long for her to find out? Maybe she did not want to admit it or something. Now I can said "woman, you have to be."

 

Mistaken Confession by A House Elf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 39]

Summary: When Lily confesses about her love for a man, James doesn't get it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2994 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/07/06 Updated: 08/14/06


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Wherein James is Dense

all this story is true if how mrs rowling make is happen. I only hope that she will make a recount of the story of harry's parents before she could write somthing else.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/10/07 Title: None

good a very good poem in how a person feel after do something wrong to the person its love

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the review!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/10/07 Title: None

when people is in trouble they feel the same way. even I feel sometimes like this Can you hear me now? please

Author's Response: Yeah. Sometimes I feel like I\'m screaming and no one can hear. So sad . . . thanks for the review!

 

Summary: Lily Evans is finally entering her 7th year at Hogwarts. This is year is going to be amazing. She was chosen as Head Girl! But, when she gets on the train and finds out whom the Head Boy is, her life is torn to pieces.

Love, friendships, danger, discrimination, and many other things make the 7th year indeed an interesting one for Lily, her friends, and the Marauders.

And they might not all come out alive.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10355 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
10/22/06 Updated: 04/04/07


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 03/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

may i have the honor of doing it? better not if i did that no harry any thing else.

 

Never Alone by ckwright51
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 426]

Summary: Dumbledore’s gone and Harry, Ron and Hermione have returned to Privet Drive to start their search for the Horcruxes. Their plan not to return to Hogwarts is changed with the reading of Dumbledore’s will. Harry must discover that his friends are a greater help then he can imagine and how to use the “Power the Dark Lord knows not.” With a little romance, action, mystery and even Quidditch along the way, Harry will find out if he and his friends can defeat the greatest Dark Wizard of the age.



This story was completely written before the release of DH or the Order of the Phoenix movie. Any similarities are entirely coincidental.



All reviews will recieve a response!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 158268 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/24/06 Updated: 11/28/07


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Cupboards and Brothers

remember the headmaster is really daeth so something it is a mist

Author's Response: Ah, but who could the mysterious A. Dumbledore be. Have to keep reading to find out. Hope you like the story. Thanks for the review.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: truelight Signed
Date: 04/10/07 Title: None

like any one who is in love, but do not want to say it allow

Author's Response: Exactly! Thanks for the review!

 
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