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The Best Deceptions by Constellation_Of_God
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: With Voldemort finally gone, the next generation of Potters, Weasleys, Longbottoms, and Malfoys all find their way back to Hogwarts. And somehow, Isobel Fletcher finds herself in the midst of these people. Friendships will be made while the unlikeliest of relationships will blossom.



All the while, a new power is rising, and it seems to be mysteriously linked to Isobel. As new secrets arise, the bonds of friendship will be shaken. Will they make it through the trials? Will they even make it out alive?


(A/N) Chapter One Re-posted!!


Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2777 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
09/12/07 Updated: 09/20/07


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/20/07 Title: Chapter 0: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

a bit wordy, and confusing at the beginning, but i think you have a good story going.

Author's Response: Thanks for my first review! I absolutely love getting feedback. This is my first story I\'ve ever written, so it was hard getting used to the writing process. I agree that the beginning is a little wordy, and since this story has such a tangled plotline (you\'ll see soon!) it was difficult to make it not confusing. Thanks again for the review, and I hope you\'ll keep reading!

Author's Response: Thanks for my first review! I absolutely love getting feedback. This is my first story I\'ve ever written, so it was hard getting used to the writing process. I agree that the beginning is a little wordy, and since this story has such a tangled plotline (you\'ll see soon!) it was difficult to make it not confusing. Thanks again for the review, and I hope you\'ll keep reading!

 

Cinderella Was a Redhead by NeLLyRaE
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 67]

Summary: Lily Evans has problems. She sleepwalks, (and always ends up in strange places) she is disorganised, flunking Arithmancy, and, to her dismay, was made Head Girl. There is also the problem of James Potter, who refuses to stop asking her out. Will she ever pull herself together enough to give him a chance?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 12347 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 07/20/08


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 03/28/08 Title: Chapter 3: Dancing on the Roof

cliffhanger much? please update soon!!!!

 
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