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Summary:

All's fair in love and war

Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 93408 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/04 Updated: 04/26/05


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 39: Unwell

“There was this was one program on Rudok the Magical Martial Arts Expert. He was inspired by some of those Muggle programs and he cast himself in the fireplace. I used to watch that program for hours. It was the only way my mum could shut me up,” Sirius explained.

James was nodding in agreement, clearly having watched the same program. Lily looked at her boyfriend, bewildered by his hidden sense of oddness.

.....and
“Did you guys whack him on the head with something this morning?” Lily accused.

“I’m not sure,” James said, scratching his head. “Was that today or yesterday that we did that?”

“Yesterday,” Remus answered.

“Then, no, we didn’t. We may have tripped him but we whacked him on the head yesterday,” James said, smiling innocently.

“No wonder he’s a nutcase,” Lily said, rolling her eyes.

ahhhhhh, god love comic relief

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 50: Good Riddance

get a move on.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1write a prequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 35: Groovy Guy

lovely story!- fav quote-drumroll please......da-da-DA:

“Wow, he speaks Squid?” Arielle asked. “I wish I could speak Squid.”

“All hail Sirius Black,” all the girls chanted. They were inside a small, broom closet with very little space for anything. They did however have a huge, blown up picture of Sirius Black. They had ordered huge Sirius blow up dolls but they didn’t fit in the closet.

“I envy you, Mackenzie,” Mary said. “Sirius Black is totally in love with you.”

“I know,” Mac said, forgetting her resentful feelings. “He talked to a squid for me!”

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 37: Slipped Away

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
how cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooould you do that to siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirius a-and
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemu-u-u-u-us?
and l- lily?
how could you kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiill a-a-a-ddy a-and maimeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?
*starts bawling*

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 37: Slipped Away

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
how cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooould you do that to siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirius a-and
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemu-u-u-u-us?
and l- lily?
how could you kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiill a-a-a-ddy a-and maimeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?
*starts bawling*

 

Summary:

In their seventh year at Hogwarts, Lily Evans and James Potter are made Head Girl and Head Boy. Lily is horribly dismayed by this, as she cannot stand James. As the year goes on, however, things begin to change between the two. Can James catch his flower, or is it hopeless for him to try?

“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 46601 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Published:
12/17/04 Updated: 08/31/05


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 3: Flea Be-Gone, Anyone?

well we wouldnt want to deprive you of the chance to use words like
'squee' would we?so here goes, i really like this fic,its got an originality to it, and you bring the characters to life,you laugh when they laugh and feel despair when they despair.awesome work!

Author's Response: Squee! We\'re so glad you find so much character in our character and origionality in our story! Thank you!

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/14/06 Title: Chapter 17: Prelude to a New Beginning

oh please oh please oh pleeeeeeeeease continue the series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: We might, but I\'m not sure right now. School is really difficult for both of us and we don\'t have time outside of homework for writing at the moment, unfortunately.

 

Loathing or Love? by Miss Radcliffe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 406]

Summary: Lily Evans loathes James Potter. She loathes him with a passion everyone in Hogwarts knows about. But during her 7th year, Lily begins to ask herself, is it loathing, or is it something else? Read as feelings and the lives of Lily, James, and their friends unfold.



SEE NOTE ON AUTHOR'S BIO REGARDING THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 37186 Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Published:
02/25/05 Updated: 06/16/07


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 13: And Girls Will Be Girls

james bought her the necklace, am i right?Am i right?

Author's Response: Read the next chapter to find out! Miss Radcliffe~

 

Summary: It’s Harry’s sixth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and once again there is a new Defence Against the Dark Arts Teacher, and Snape likes her almost as much as he likes The Boy Who Lived, but why is the new professor so interested in Harry? What dark secrets is she hiding? Is Harry the only survivor of Lord Voldemort’s wrath? Will things ever be simple for our beloved Trio? It’s going to be another interesting year for Harry and his friends, and he’s going to realise that he might not be as alone as he thought and in more ways than one..

This story is newly edited as of 25/3/2009!!

The sequel to this fic has been posted, it is titled Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power. The spin off stories One Life Owed and The Night That Started It All are also available.

This was written in the aftermath of OOTP. Events of HBP and DH not included.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 108403 Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/26/05 Updated: 10/14/05


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 35: Fallen

fabulous! amazing!spectacular! i shower glowing praises on you!*adds to favorites* its perfect...thouroughly satisfying

 

The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 650]

Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?


Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 27684 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/10/05 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 9: Dance Time! Or, A Mockery Of February

excellent! loved the references to monty python and to bare naked ladies.

Author's Response: Wait, I had Monty Python references in that chappie? *goes back to read own work*

 

Forever Yours by harry_potter_star
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 872]

Summary:
sigh.
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay


For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!


James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 40400 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Published:
08/29/05 Updated: 07/30/06


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 14: Realizations

well quite obviously id like to see jada paired w/ sirius or remus and id like thali to go w/ robert

Author's Response: yeah well some people might have had diff opinions is all :P good to be prepared!! wooo my bday tomoz so hyped!!

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: First Year: The beginning

well its only the firsst chapter and i usually wait til the end to review, but i definately think ill keep reading, so keep writing!

Author's Response: hey thanks for the review! well im glad you like it! :)

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 7: Christmas Day

ahhhhhhhh!*runs at calista with knife*

Author's Response: umm yay another calista hater! :P there shud b a forum on here devoted to that lol

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 20: Playing into Hands

you dare leave us hanging here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!arrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol sorry bout that! :P:P um yeah im a lazy bitch thats just won a bunch of money from the writing comp she entered :P:P i have excuses! :P

 

Summary: James finally asks Lily out. The problem is, he chose a roundabout way of getting to her. Plus, he stands a high risk of breaking his neck in the process. Told from Remus Lupin's POV. Rated 3rd-5th years for slight language and mild innuendo on James's part. One-shot.


A/N: Quick note to all: I am sorry, but there are no plans for a sequel for PC. I hate to disappoint you all, but I feel that the story is better standing alone, leaving the rest to your imaginations.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2497 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/22/05 Updated: 10/22/05


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

I loved it! It was original but made sense,with james climbing the wall,falling several times.I don't know if you intended this but its sort of a metaphor for James' chase of Lily through the years.I also like that you did it from Remus' POV, liked the dry humor, and loved the bit at the end with Lily at the window! I really think you should do a sequel about heir date, you can't just leave the two of them hanging after all their hard work! Great story though!

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

I just saw that you are refusing to create a prequel/sequel to this, so instead i beg you *gets down on knees* please at least write a different L/J fic.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

I just saw that you are refusing to create a prequel/sequel to this, so instead i beg you *gets down on knees* please at least write a different L/J fic.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

 

Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 28: Hogsmeade

yay for the princess bride! and yay for sirius the dread pirate roberts!

Author's Response: Hehe. NIce mental picture, eh? :=)

 
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 01/29/07 Title: Chapter 38: A Few Words, If You Please

argh! if you take as long updating this time as last time i will take away every brownie point youve ever had!

Author's Response: NO!!!! NOT MY BROWNIE POINTS!!!!!! *screams in anguish* Oh nO... they\'re gone! NOOOO!!!! Hheheh. Maybe I should be in drama club... but I\'m not good in front of people, so there\'s that. :-) But, i\'ll try to be better about the updating. The last one did take a long till. I\'m sorry.

 

Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 130989 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/01/05 Updated: 03/31/09


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up

a wonderful sequel in an amazing series!

 
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