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Catching a Flower by Messrs Fuzzbutt and Fantail

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
In their seventh year at Hogwarts, Lily Evans and James Potter are made Head Girl and Head Boy. Lily is horribly dismayed by this, as she cannot stand James. As the year goes on, however, things begin to change between the two. Can James catch his flower, or is it hopeless for him to try?

“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 3: Flea Be-Gone, Anyone?

well we wouldnt want to deprive you of the chance to use words like
'squee' would we?so here goes, i really like this fic,its got an originality to it, and you bring the characters to life,you laugh when they laugh and feel despair when they despair.awesome work!

Author's Response: Squee! We\'re so glad you find so much character in our character and origionality in our story! Thank you!

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/14/06 Title: Chapter 17: Prelude to a New Beginning

oh please oh please oh pleeeeeeeeease continue the series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: We might, but I\'m not sure right now. School is really difficult for both of us and we don\'t have time outside of homework for writing at the moment, unfortunately.

Loathing or Love? by Miss Radcliffe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans loathes James Potter. She loathes him with a passion everyone in Hogwarts knows about. But during her 7th year, Lily begins to ask herself, is it loathing, or is it something else? Read as feelings and the lives of Lily, James, and their friends unfold.

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 13: And Girls Will Be Girls

james bought her the necklace, am i right?Am i right?

Author's Response: Read the next chapter to find out! Miss Radcliffe~

Harry Potter and the Girl Who Lived by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It’s Harry’s sixth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and once again there is a new Defence Against the Dark Arts Teacher, and Snape likes her almost as much as he likes The Boy Who Lived, but why is the new professor so interested in Harry? What dark secrets is she hiding? Is Harry the only survivor of Lord Voldemort’s wrath? Will things ever be simple for our beloved Trio? It’s going to be another interesting year for Harry and his friends, and he’s going to realise that he might not be as alone as he thought and in more ways than one..

This story is newly edited as of 25/3/2009!!

The sequel to this fic has been posted, it is titled Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power. The spin off stories One Life Owed and The Night That Started It All are also available.

This was written in the aftermath of OOTP. Events of HBP and DH not included.

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 35: Fallen

fabulous! amazing!spectacular! i shower glowing praises on you!*adds to favorites* its perfect...thouroughly satisfying

The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?

Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 9: Dance Time! Or, A Mockery Of February

excellent! loved the references to monty python and to bare naked ladies.

Author's Response: Wait, I had Monty Python references in that chappie? *goes back to read own work*

Forever Yours by harry_potter_star

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay

For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!

James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 14: Realizations

well quite obviously id like to see jada paired w/ sirius or remus and id like thali to go w/ robert

Author's Response: yeah well some people might have had diff opinions is all :P good to be prepared!! wooo my bday tomoz so hyped!!

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: First Year: The beginning

well its only the firsst chapter and i usually wait til the end to review, but i definately think ill keep reading, so keep writing!

Author's Response: hey thanks for the review! well im glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 7: Christmas Day

ahhhhhhhh!*runs at calista with knife*

Author's Response: umm yay another calista hater! :P there shud b a forum on here devoted to that lol

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 20: Playing into Hands

you dare leave us hanging here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!arrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol sorry bout that! :P:P um yeah im a lazy bitch thats just won a bunch of money from the writing comp she entered :P:P i have excuses! :P

The Prongs Complex by Cherry and Phoenix Feather

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James finally asks Lily out. The problem is, he chose a roundabout way of getting to her. Plus, he stands a high risk of breaking his neck in the process. Told from Remus Lupin's POV. Rated 3rd-5th years for slight language and mild innuendo on James's part. One-shot.

A/N: Quick note to all: I am sorry, but there are no plans for a sequel for PC. I hate to disappoint you all, but I feel that the story is better standing alone, leaving the rest to your imaginations.
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

I loved it! It was original but made sense,with james climbing the wall,falling several times.I don't know if you intended this but its sort of a metaphor for James' chase of Lily through the years.I also like that you did it from Remus' POV, liked the dry humor, and loved the bit at the end with Lily at the window! I really think you should do a sequel about heir date, you can't just leave the two of them hanging after all their hard work! Great story though!

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

I just saw that you are refusing to create a prequel/sequel to this, so instead i beg you *gets down on knees* please at least write a different L/J fic.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prongs Complex

I just saw that you are refusing to create a prequel/sequel to this, so instead i beg you *gets down on knees* please at least write a different L/J fic.Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)

Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 28: Hogsmeade

yay for the princess bride! and yay for sirius the dread pirate roberts!

Author's Response: Hehe. NIce mental picture, eh? :=)

Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 01/29/07 Title: Chapter 38: A Few Words, If You Please

argh! if you take as long updating this time as last time i will take away every brownie point youve ever had!

Author's Response: NO!!!! NOT MY BROWNIE POINTS!!!!!! *screams in anguish* Oh nO... they\'re gone! NOOOO!!!! Hheheh. Maybe I should be in drama club... but I\'m not good in front of people, so there\'s that. :-) But, i\'ll try to be better about the updating. The last one did take a long till. I\'m sorry.

Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up

a wonderful sequel in an amazing series!

Always and Forever by jamesnlilyforever

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: As Lily and James enter their last year at Hogwarts, many hidden feelings emerge. But when tragedy strikes, will Lily ever be able to tell James her true feelings? Or will it be too late?

Reviews are greatly appreciated. There's an e-cookie in it for you. ;D
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 01/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Moving On

to James: hugshugshugshugshugshugshugshugshughugshugs!

Author's Response: Hug away! He needs the love! =P Thanks! =D

A Tale of Two Matchmakers by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Romance for three couples when Blaise and Luna use Shakespearean styled matchmaking to hook up Ginny and Draco. There's Much Ado about...something!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance-Non Canon 2007, 2008, and 2009. In 2010 mods changed the rules (they got tired of the same fics being nominated ^_~) so no more QQ hopes, but that's okay. No proof is needed that Draco/Ginny = love.  

* Written before the HBP, this tale presents an alternate sixth year in which Dumbledore lives, Draco is more than a foil to Harry, and Blaise Zabini is a girl. I hope readers who ship Draco/Ginny will enjoy the story which includes dancing with faeries, Celtic and Norse mythology, school holidays in London and Spain, and loads of fantasy and romance. "Is this a kissing book?" (to quote the Princess Bride) Yes, it is. *

(Warnings were added for safety, due to brief allusions in later chapters, not graphic content.)


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Protesting Too Much and Testing Potions

im loving it so far, and i appreciate the "keeping up appearences" allusion...

Author's Response: Seemed silly not to throw it in. I was already inspired by The Princess Bride and Absolutely Fabulous...and Tarzan...and Historical romance novels...and, well, you get the point, heh.


Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 02/23/07 Title: None

i thought the song was really good, and the story is even better. the whole shebang is fantastic, its very believable as are the characters.

You are insulting my delicate feelings again. by coppercurls

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Warnings: the following poems may contain sarcasm, witty repartee, little black dresses, and Inter-Office Unity events.
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!I love it! and i don't even ship Hermione/Draco!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad it works for people who don\'t usually ship my OTP... I appreciate the review!

That's All There Is To It by EmeraldShadows

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: *I have revised my decision to delete this story due to the apparent reader interest. Thanks, everyone!*


Lily Evans prides herself in being able to plan ahead. Which is why she is completely ready to face The Toerag when she goes back to Hogwarts for her final year. Soon enough, however, her life takes a sharp turn, and by the time she is seated once again in the Great Hall, there's a void inside her that she feels could never be filled. Enter James Potter, who has sworn on Quidditch Through The Ages to change his ways. Will he buckle under this terrible pressure? Will Lily see past her fog of convincement? All hangs in the balance...
Reviewer: tonksosme Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Summer

come on! its been forever since you updated, you're not just gonna quit? you've got a good idea keep going with it!