I like it, very interesting and well written. It's quite in character, too. I feel Ron's pain - whenever her and Ron are seperated I get very sad. I'll be looking forward to an update.
that was brilliant. Hysterical really - im still laughing...
Author's Response: you reviewed before...YAY! people actually come back- i must be doing something right
Very funny! At one point I stopped to imagine Spidey!Harry in the "Aragog" scene in CoS. I also loved the 'spidey signal. BTW: are you aware that dast ve danya is Russian, not German? and it means goodbye... other than that, which isn't really important at all - good job.
Author's Response: yeah- can't wait for that if we ever get there... yeah, I know it's russian. The person I write this with made a mistake- we figured, though, that Hagrid is just bad at languages...
Why is it that everything that doesn't make sense is always really funny? hehe. Anyway - your characters are very...consistent. ;) Okay - I'm going to be a downer again, but it was only in the SM movie that Peter was bitten by a genetically enginerred spider - it's actually supposed to be a radioactive spider. and since SS/PS takes place in 91-92, harry would only be familiar with Radioactive Spiderman, since genetically altering things probably isn't even a popular idea yet. Look at me, I'm an encyclopedia of completely useless information. don't you love it. BUT REALLY! GOOD JOB ON THE STORY! VERY ENTERTAINING. and ron is right, nothing matters but chocolate and sporky.
Author's Response: lol, thanks for the long review and useless information. Of course, I was basing this on the movie- but more made in present time...just pretend the comic books were made like the movie, and we're all good:D not like I actually am being lazy or anything..
yes! I was just checking, without hope, to see if you'd updated and then what do I see? The Game of Truth at the very top of R/Hr romance fics! Oh, yeah - the chapter... it was great. I loved it. So tense, so heartwarming, so funny. I was beaming madly at the computer. AND he told F & G he's 'in love' with Hermione... aaahhh! Loved it. And it's written nicely as well, a good plot is nothing without a good writer.
I'm dying here, waiting for you to get to the game. AHHH! you're worse than JK for making people wait! hehe - anyway, good job, this is very cute & I can tell it's going somewhere good!
Author's Response: lol so sorry about that! The game is coming next chappy, I promise! I'm going to try to update soon! Thanks for your review! They make me so happy!! :)
great! well worth the wait! I was trying to be quiet because my family's asleep and I'm in the living room - I had to hold my hands over my mouth to stifle my laughter at the part where Ron had his internal argument and then shouted "I WILL" outloud. I can't wait for the personal questions!
Author's Response: awww thank you! hehe I love Ron, and it just seemed like something that would happen to him! lol! I'm glad that you enjoyed that scene! I'm going to try to update soon! Thanks so much for your review! :)
umm..weird. i can't wait to see what the MM says to others ;)
I loved it! I melted right along with my pumpkin ice cream (yes, it exists - and it goes great with HP fan fic!). I loved the "You see, I have long adored you) - and the hand holding and the convo in the snow. You better write another story - you're good ;)
Really original - and I think you captured Crookshanks perfectly. I think the way he thinks of Hermione is totally adorable...
::Screams at self:: I've just realized - this is on my favorite stories list, and I haven't given you a review! So here you go: Wonderfully written, I really enjoyed the style and structure of the story. As for the subject matter - well I could read plots for Ron & Hermione's relationship turning point until my eyes fall out, I love them so much, but I did particularly enjoy this one. Very nice job, keep up the good work ;)
very cute, very sweet - well written. oh & PWP? hehe - good job. Perfect for a midnight RH fluff fix...
that was hilarious! good job. Why do ron & hermione always end up in closets in romance stories?
Funny! You seem to know an awful lot about dentistry though ::eyes you suspiciously::
Author's Response: I am not a dentist, nor do I play one on TV. ;)
that was sooo romantic. I LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Hahaha, I just wish guys were all gorgeous-plum-sugar-cakes and romantic like Ron! Hehehe! Thanks heaps for the review, everytime I get a new one it inspires me to write more!
I want to publicly state my anger at the MNFF mods for not letting chapter 4 through. "Arg!" There. I've stated it. Four is great, by the way.
Hold on a second... okay I'm back... from SCREAMING WITH DELIGHT! That was really good, the most well written and poetic piece of fluff EVER! really, the beginning was so detailed, a perfect description of Hermione through Ron's eyes, it was just written so well! I can't tell you enough how well that was written. So detailed, but not so elaborate that I wanted to skip a line or two, I held onto every word. And the way it all came about was great! The last line... the last line, the last line, the last line. Fantabulous. I don't mean to sound like one of those reviewers whose opinion can't be trusted because they'll rave any story, but that really was written fanstastically well. Flawless writing. Really. God, I could read R/Hr 'revealing of the feelings' scenarios over and over again, especially ones written so well - with a perfect amount of fluff that makes me want to cry with joy, but not so much fluff that it forces R & Hr out of character (did I mention yet how In Character I found this?) - yes, I could read plenty of this, scenario after scenario after scenario all ending in the same result. It wouldn't bother me at all. Hint. Hint. Hint.
Author's Response: Awww... shucks!!!!!!!! *Turns pink like Ron with a grin that is absolutely enormous!* I have plenty more coming, and I also have a Lily and James fluff set that is also getting bigger and bigger. Oh you've given my ego a feed that's grand enough to last me for several years! Thanks so much! :)
that was very good - i loved the very last bit. "you have my permission" i must admit DD/Mc fics seem a little weird to me - not because they're 60+ but because JK said that DD is 150 and Mc is 70. Meaning DD was 60 when Mc was born - talk about cradlerobbing - ::slaps Dumbledore's wrist:: But anyway - yes, very nicely done.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
That was beautiful. Really original, and I love socks. I don't know why. But I know now that I'l probably love socks even more ;)
Author's Response: Thank you again!
I loved it! I felt my heart stop when ron asked "could I get the girl in the end?" I was like OMG! hehe, super sweet...
Author's Response: Thank you!!! This is my favorite line, so I'm happy you liked it, too.