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For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
o god u have to continue this story!!!!!!
nobody cares that this doesn't go with the actual story!!!!!!
its a wonderful story
just continue :')
Summary: As Lily and James head into their final year at Hogwarts, some of Lily's feelings for James change. And will Voldemort, becoming ever stronger, change the fates of Lily and her friends? He will kill whoever gets in his way in his rise to power, and Lily and James could be their only hope for stopping him. Alternates POV of Lily/James. Has been edited a lot recently from its original posting.
this story is one of the best i have read
i love it!
keep up the good work and please
put up the next chapters quickly!!
i would love to see more of sirius and cassie as well.they are really cute:)
Author's Response: awesome! thank you! i will hopefully be putting the new chapter up soon. sirius/cassie are going to become a bigger deal, too. glad you like it!! :)
Summary: Everyone knows that Lily hates James and James likes Lily. James is usually trying his best to impress Lily while she's trying to avoid him at all costs. Neither is working and they always seem to be together through a series of crazy and weird events. . Read and review, this is my first story! For information about chapter 4 and 5, read my bio!
lol!what a great chapter! can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
do i need to mention that you are a brilliant writer?i think not!
i think hermione needs a little more mood swings..it gets interesting that way
besides snape's usually the one having them!its better if there is a change
keep up the good work
u have an impatient fan sitting on needles here!!
Author's Response: thank you so much!! and oh no! i hope they don\'t poke xD i will try to get the next chapter out soon -- thanks so much for reading!!
i was extremely impressed by this story!!!
at first i thought it was a little farfetched but then...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it became so brilliant!!!it improved so dramatically that i can ony say that u are an extremely talented author!i can't wait for ur next chapter.after all this action i hope for a lot more fluffiness(between sev and hermione8-))
cant wait for it!update soon!
Author's Response: aw thanks so much! and i\'m glad to hear that it improves because that means that i improved too :D and don\'t worry, the fluff is on the way...
"I want your30;to take your clothes off for me."
that line had me snickering to myself for more than an hour!
i frankly didn't think i would get so into the ss/hg fanfic
but u changed allll that!!
its amazing how almost life like you have made these characters
and i see that there is more action about to begin.. thank yew for that!i thought i would see another chapter describing "his eyes were like the midnight sky and were as bright as the stars" etc etc
thankfully its just the right amount of sappyness involved
one question:the potion hermione makes, allows you to avoid death completely?so you don't die but become very weak is it?i didn't undestand it clearly...hope u can point it out for me:)
i know it was about 2 chapters ago but i was really connfused about it!
great work as usual!
i cannot( i am very serious!) wait for the update!!
another chapter soon!please!:D
Author's Response: So glad to hear that you are enjoying the story!! And about the potion: yes, Hermione died, and then was brought back, kind of like a phoenix. Sounds COMPLETELY lame and cheesey when I write it out, but yeah, that's pretty much what happened xD
FINALLY!i was dying waitingfor the updates
its certainly is quite a frusrating chapter though!and hermione acting so angrily is a good thing!i am happy that she is finally the one to throw some mood swings and besides it has such wonderful results!maybe she should actually kick snape in the shins
hope you update soooooooooon
Author's Response: hahaha, i actually kind of debated whether or not i wanted her to just go for it and kick him...but i thought it might ruin the mood xD thanks so much for reading!!
Summary: After his failed attempt on Dumbledore's life, Draco seeks refuge at the Order of the Phoenix. Sent back to Hogwarts with suspicious title of Head Boy, he is forced to share a dormitory with none other than Hermione Granger. But with war looming on the horizon and another danger even closer to home, their seventh year of Hogwarts is anything but ordinary.
A story of compelling intrigue, hidden motives, dangerous secrets, and obvious passion. Animagi, Quidditch, the Order of the Phoenix. Masquerades and riddles. Hate and love. Pleasure and pain. A blend of contradictions that, for two people, makes a truly unforgettable final year. Slow moving D/Hr with plenty of plot.
finally at least a little action
even though its of the drunken kind
one question:draco was sooooooo very drunk at the beggining having no clue of his surroundings whatsoever.how could he have suddenly sobered up??
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I couldn\'t resist. \r\nEh, Draco wasn\'t so drunk that he didn\'t know where he was. And until he took the potion at the end, he didn\'t completely sober up - note the falling and stumbling. But when Hermione was talking to him, she was being really serious and those kinds of intense situations tend to drive the fun out of you quite quickly...\r\nThanks for reviewing!!
i have never read a more....well in one word..a more gripping story than this.its incredible and best of all its original.i thought it was going to be the same old love story,but the whole death eater scene at the ball and draco never finding out about his "mystery" companion is just wonderful.great work!best of luck with ur other chapters.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it, and I\'m happy I can keep you on your toes. I have to admit, it\'s a lot of fun thinking of things that\'ll throw you all for loops! :)\r\n\r\nThank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Summary: Seventh-year Lily Evans is ready for romance, but not any kind of romance--she desires the sappiest kind possible. She is not aware, however, that her knight in shining armor just might be the (until now) devilishly annoying James Potter.
great work!can't wait for the next chapter :)
Summary: When Hermione's whirlwind romance turns abusive, the other members of the Order are too preoccupied to pay much attention. Hermione finds an unexpected confidante in her Potions partner, and Severus finds a friend.
this is very interesting story line!
i couldn't think of hermione being in an abusive relationship.its a very new way to write a fan fic and because it is such an original theme(in my opinion) you have set my expectations really high!so no pressure:P and the first chapter was excellent....are you sure this is your first fic?:)
keep up the good work and good luck with your next chapter
Summary: The Marauders seventh year at Hogwarts is about to begin and everyone is excited, but for James, something—or rather someone—weighs heavily on his mind. All summer he had worked to change into a better person… all for Lily Evans. The only question now is if she’ll give him the second chance he needs to change her mind.
The sequel to The Beginning and Unexpected Hope.
i really like ur ideas and your writing is brilliant
however i get a feeling it may turn out to be like the usual james/lily love story
....but....its only ur first chapter and the chapter is great..you are doing well
i hope you add a little...hmmm...spice into ur next few
Author's Response: Thanks, tashy! It won\'t be like the usual J/L fics, I promise, because this story\'s a one-shot. The series is only meant to show how they first got together. If you haven\'t already, you can check out the two prequels. The links are on my author\'s page.
Summary: Sirius has been best friends with Bree since their first year. And when he feels as though she means a little more than that, he does all he can to deny it.
That is, until certain events unfold which make denial impossible.
Now, he not only has to worry about getting the girl, but getting the girl to see he is more than an inconsiderate prat, and still worth having as a friend.
i love the fact that u chose to write a story about sirius!i
Author's Response: haha, Sirius rules.
Summary: HG/SS, Harry's POV. Post-OoTP.
Harry finally resigns himself to the fact that his best friend and worst enemy were dating.
"Greasy hair," Ron squeaked, then shrank back into the common room sofa when Hermione's glare was turned on him. For a seventeen year old girl, Hermione can glare like a champion. She'll make a great mother someday, let me tell you that.
Thank you so much for all the great reviews guys!
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
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i can't stress enough on it
but i really don't understand why severus wants her to hate him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this story is amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter *nudge nudge*
Summary: During his 7th Year, James Potter is forced into a political marriage with a girl he can't stand. Her name is Arabelle de Champagne, she is part veela, and according to most people, the most beautiful witch anyone will ever lay eyes on. But not to James. To him, Arabelle is simply the most obnoxious and conceited person he has ever met, but he still has to at least pretend that he is in love with her, and pretend he is completely over Lily Evans. And how will Lily react to the news? Will she finally realize what she has been trying to deny for years?
but only one problem:" I stared resentfully out the window"
it sounds a bit weird,i can't explain it but i doubt he would know if he was resentful or not,it sounds like someone other than james is being the narrator
i am sorry i can't explain it any better
o and i didn't under stand
is james father is the minister of magic or is he just a minister?
i really like the james-point-of-view method you have approached!its really creative and has great results!good luck with the next chapters
Author's Response: Yes, James's father is the Minister of Magic. Thank you for pointing that out, I'll go back and fix it. Thanks for reviewing :]
Summary: It's been several years since the war, where some died... and some barely came out alive. Azkaban was destroyed, Dementors banished, and a New Azkaban erected in its place. Hermione is in her twenties now, a Guardian of New Azkaban, where she meets someone very unexpected in the dark.
i have never come across a storyline like this
it is well written so that even i feel my stomach clench when ron died
just one question.there are so many healing spells that would have cured hermiones burns like the potion madam pomfrey used on cedric there are concealment charms that would get rid of her scars as well.just mentioning it because u said there were no cures
your story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I really appreciate the stellar compliments, and I hope I can continue to deserve them! I\'ve really been beating myself up over this story, holding it to really high standards for myself. so I\'d love to hear what you think of the next chapter! Also, you bring up some good questions, like why Hermione doesn\'t use magic or other simple ... adjustments... to cover up her scars and her eye. Essentially, she doesn\'t want to cover it up. She\'s punishing herself because she blames herself for Ron\'s death and Ginny\'s grief. I\'ll explain it further in a future chapter, but I hope I\'ve answered your question for now!
Summary: Ginny lures Hermione to do some sneaking about late one night, straight into mischief. Little do they know, a sneaky Slytherin sees it all...
this story seemed so familiar that for a moment i thought somebody had stolen an older one and redone it!i remember reading this sometime back.glad u came back to finishing this since it is starting out to be a pretty interesting story!can't wait to see draco's up coming disaster towards hermione:)
Author's Response: I\'m glad you came back! I\'ve revived some other stories as well as a new one, so feel free to check them out! Thanks for leaving a note!
Summary: Through a series of flashbacks and real time passages, Hermione and Snape re-live their recently ended affair, but some sparks still fly...
it has a rather cofunsing start and at some points i go a little lost and had to re read it a few times to understand it.how ever it is ur first story and it actually has a good plot.i love the fact that snape and hermione are not to gether but have had a relationship before.it makes it so very dramatic and i love that!congrats on your very first chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks alot, Im really glad you liked it made and could be bothered to read it enough times till it made sense, \r\nplease keep reading more is coming soon.\r\nx
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?
After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!
Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.
what an intresting new twist!i have to congratulate you on the originality of the story!however,it seems very rushed as if you are trying to rush to the point.its ok if your story has alot of chapters :) i know i would love it.rushing wouldn't alllow the story to develop and that would be a waste of such original ideas.i really liked the first chapter and have high hopes about the next,so no pressure!
review soon :)
Author's Response: Yeah I'm a bit of a rusher in stories, I find it hard to flesh them out. The next chapter is a bit of a bridge chapter before the fun really starts. After that I am going to try really hard not to rush! I Promise!! Thanks for the constructive criticism.