This is a brilliant story! I cannot even put it into words. I have never read such a good romance story with James and Lily. I am just, amazed with how well it is written, no mitakes, no sappiness, and you even involve harry in the story. I think that you are doing a superb job, please keep posting! I started to cry when Lily said she was leaving and James got upset, then i cried again when Harry was in his room, and realised his mother had died on that very spot. Just to let you know, i never cry when i read stories. Honestly, i did not even cry when Sirius died (this is probably because my brother read ahead of me and told me, but still, i hould have cried and didn't:P)

Nicely done, please keep it up:)

Author's Response: Glad you like it!

Sirius is effing hilarious, this is how i imagine him and actually portray him in my stories! I Love you're work!

I am REALLY enjoying this story. I am sorry, but I found something wrong with it, this is probably just personal. I am thinking that many others may have enjoyed ch.11, but i found it, well, too dreamy and...phony i guess. I am not trying to say you did a bad job, I just don't think SOME of ch.11 didn't seem to fit in with the story, but I understand that it was essential to find out who James' new girlfriend was, but maybe it could have been done differently. I really do love you're story though, not to sappy, just enough romance, than humour and drama. I think you are doing a very good job and I hope you keep it up! I read all of the chapters so far in just one sitting, thought i'd let you know how good it is:P

Author's Response: the reason for the PMS was just because i found it funny. this fic is not really all that realistic, it's for my own (as well as others) entertainment. My other story is pretty dramatic and i get to have more fun with this one. i just thought sirius would make the perfect guinea pig. thanks!

OH MY GOD! I ahve been reading your story for such a long time, and I stopped for reasons of my own (computer problems) And i come back and this! I have never, well once cried over a story...Oh my god. That note, at first seemed unreal, like she wouldn't have done that! But the more i read, the more sense it made and i couldn't stop crying! POOR SIRIUS! Oh my god...Addys gone, MAim and MAc too... IMagine what Addy had to go through, writing that letter...and knowing she was going to die...OMG...K i've starting to cry again. I am sorry but your story is so good and sad, omg...cannot stop crying...I am goign to go and read the rest.

Fav Quotes:_____“Remus just sort of chuckled to himself when Sirius read that so called ‘novel’. I think we shouldn’t be so worried. It’s not as if Sirius hasn’t done weird things like this before,” Lily reflected. “We should let him carry on with it. It’s not as if it’s dangerous.” -------- “Sirius Black, that is dangerous!” Lily bellowed.____ ____“Now, don’t listen to her, young ones,” Sirius advised. “She’s just a mean girl who has no sense of mischief.” “She’s the Head Girl,” one of the first years pointed out. “And where has that taken her?” Sirius asked. “Anyone? Anyone know where it has taken her? She isn’t the one on the roof of Hogwarts, is she? No, she’s yelling at us. Now, if anyone wants to be the one yelling, leave now.”_____ I laughed so much on that part!!!

Very good story:) Please keep updating, gtg:P

Very Very funny, i laughed the hardest when voldie interupted with a grin, saying "it was fun", LMAO, good job:P

K, I like this story, but I think the way you make them speak is out of character. I am not trying to put you down, I really love you writing and how organized it is. For example, when Harry was answering Dumbledore, it was like he was alway answering with half of dumbledores previous quetion, not just saying "Yah" Or nodding his head quietly, you know. something like that. Just a suggetion.

AWWW! Nooooo! I thought James would hear! Then that last stinking line ruined it! Foiled again! P.S. P.O.ed fellings for Lily gone....James very hot...Love James. And I like how you write Remus...But I still think Siriu should be a little wild to add some fun, not now seeing as he likes *wink* someone, but perhaps laterz...