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This is a brilliant story! I cannot even put it into words. I have never read such a good romance story with James and Lily. I am just, amazed with how well it is written, no mitakes, no sappiness, and you even involve harry in the story. I think that you are doing a superb job, please keep posting! I started to cry when Lily said she was leaving and James got upset, then i cried again when Harry was in his room, and realised his mother had died on that very spot. Just to let you know, i never cry when i read stories. Honestly, i did not even cry when Sirius died (this is probably because my brother read ahead of me and told me, but still, i hould have cried and didn't:P)
Very nicely done, once again! PLEASE update soon, I love the reality of your story, all the thought e.t.c
Nicely done, please keep it up:)
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Pleae keep poting!
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
I am really enjoying this story1 I like it a lot! Especialy how Lily still doesn't like James in full, but h keeps trying, I don't like it when they move to fast:P Good Job! I thought i'd just point out that Malfoy was before the Marauders time:) Unless, it really has to do with the plotline and such...Shutting up:P
Author's Response: i hate it when stories move too fats. i see lily and james kissing in the first chapter and i get really pissed off and never read that story again.
Author's Response: anyway, slytherin isn't slytherin without a Malfoy in it. heehee
Very good story:) Please keep updating, gtg:P
I love how you write! I can totally see a young James and Sirius Pranking and teasing! LMAO
Very Very funny, i laughed the hardest when voldie interupted with a grin, saying "it was fun", LMAO, good job:P
Very Well Done! *clap* *Tear*
K, I like this story, but I think the way you make them speak is out of character. I am not trying to put you down, I really love you writing and how organized it is. For example, when Harry was answering Dumbledore, it was like he was alway answering with half of dumbledores previous quetion, not just saying "Yah" Or nodding his head quietly, you know. something like that. Just a suggetion.
I love it! The fact that she still had his snitch in the end, and he probably noticed and did not tell her! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it :)