This is a brilliant story! I cannot even put it into words. I have never read such a good romance story with James and Lily. I am just, amazed with how well it is written, no mitakes, no sappiness, and you even involve harry in the story. I think that you are doing a superb job, please keep posting! I started to cry when Lily said she was leaving and James got upset, then i cried again when Harry was in his room, and realised his mother had died on that very spot. Just to let you know, i never cry when i read stories. Honestly, i did not even cry when Sirius died (this is probably because my brother read ahead of me and told me, but still, i hould have cried and didn't:P)
Very nicely done, once again! PLEASE update soon, I love the reality of your story, all the thought e.t.c
Nicely done, please keep it up:)
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
Pleae keep poting!
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
Sirius is effing hilarious, this is how i imagine him and actually portray him in my stories! I Love you're work!
AHHH!!! I can't wait for the next Chap! Please update, i wanna see how the plan turn out!!!:P
I am REALLY enjoying this story. I am sorry, but I found something wrong with it, this is probably just personal. I am thinking that many others may have enjoyed ch.11, but i found it, well, too dreamy and...phony i guess. I am not trying to say you did a bad job, I just don't think SOME of ch.11 didn't seem to fit in with the story, but I understand that it was essential to find out who James' new girlfriend was, but maybe it could have been done differently. I really do love you're story though, not to sappy, just enough romance, than humour and drama. I think you are doing a very good job and I hope you keep it up! I read all of the chapters so far in just one sitting, thought i'd let you know how good it is:P
Author's Response: the reason for the PMS was just because i found it funny. this fic is not really all that realistic, it's for my own (as well as others) entertainment. My other story is pretty dramatic and i get to have more fun with this one. i just thought sirius would make the perfect guinea pig. thanks!
OMG! I hate this chap! I love you're writing, i just hate that James doesn't want her, we all know the end but what happens in the middle is exciting.I guess it goes to show how Loyal he i, but why is Lily like this? I am really Loving this story~ 10/10, great job:)
OH MY GOD! I ahve been reading your story for such a long time, and I stopped for reasons of my own (computer problems) And i come back and this! I have never, well once cried over a story...Oh my god. That note, at first seemed unreal, like she wouldn't have done that! But the more i read, the more sense it made and i couldn't stop crying! POOR SIRIUS! Oh my god...Addys gone, MAim and MAc too... IMagine what Addy had to go through, writing that letter...and knowing she was going to die...OMG...K i've starting to cry again. I am sorry but your story is so good and sad, omg...cannot stop crying...I am goign to go and read the rest.
I love Sirius...Sirus-ly...But I think, well there is more to his behavior. Likey cuz you KILLED ADDY OFF! YOU EVIL AUTHOR YOU! But anyways, I love your story:) Sorry, I just had to get that off my shoulders... Whooo
Fav Quotes:_____“Remus just sort of chuckled to himself when Sirius read that so called ‘novel’. I think we shouldn’t be so worried. It’s not as if Sirius hasn’t done weird things like this before,” Lily reflected. “We should let him carry on with it. It’s not as if it’s dangerous.” -------- “Sirius Black, that is dangerous!” Lily bellowed.____ ____“Now, don’t listen to her, young ones,” Sirius advised. “She’s just a mean girl who has no sense of mischief.” “She’s the Head Girl,” one of the first years pointed out. “And where has that taken her?” Sirius asked. “Anyone? Anyone know where it has taken her? She isn’t the one on the roof of Hogwarts, is she? No, she’s yelling at us. Now, if anyone wants to be the one yelling, leave now.”_____ I laughed so much on that part!!!
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
I am really enjoying this story1 I like it a lot! Especialy how Lily still doesn't like James in full, but h keeps trying, I don't like it when they move to fast:P Good Job! I thought i'd just point out that Malfoy was before the Marauders time:) Unless, it really has to do with the plotline and such...Shutting up:P
Author's Response: i hate it when stories move too fats. i see lily and james kissing in the first chapter and i get really pissed off and never read that story again.
Author's Response: anyway, slytherin isn't slytherin without a Malfoy in it. heehee
Summary: Every story written about the Marauders has always been the same. Pranks, love, mischeif...But, what if there was another side to all of it? Another side to the fun? James Potter finds out sooner then expected that reality isn't just a bedtime story. It's real. And it's haunting him. How can he live out his days in Hogwarts as a regualar teenager when things start happeing that are beyond his control? Not to mention, the love he possess is slowly being taken from him...
CHAPTER 10 IS UP!!!!
Very good story:) Please keep updating, gtg:P
I love how you write! I can totally see a young James and Sirius Pranking and teasing! LMAO
Summary: The final battle against the Dark Lord has come. Harry is just about to take revenge on Peter Pettigrew, when suddenly Dumbledore reminds him of the big plan - the magnificent plan! ::all Harry Potter conspiracy theories ever compromised in one hilarious story!::
Very Very funny, i laughed the hardest when voldie interupted with a grin, saying "it was fun", LMAO, good job:P
Very Well Done! *clap* *Tear*
K, I like this story, but I think the way you make them speak is out of character. I am not trying to put you down, I really love you writing and how organized it is. For example, when Harry was answering Dumbledore, it was like he was alway answering with half of dumbledores previous quetion, not just saying "Yah" Or nodding his head quietly, you know. something like that. Just a suggetion.
Lily Evans has always pushed guys away, keeping her distance away from heartbreak. If she never got too attatched, she would never get hurt.
Yet, James Potter refuses to be pushed away. Will he be the one to actually tear down Lily's walls that separate them?
OMG! I ahve to stop reading! HOw dare...OMG! I love James! What is wrong with Lily... I knwo they end up together, that much is obvious, but what happens in between is so exciting! I love your style of writing by the way! But, OMG! Imagine how JAmes felt after all that work!
AWWW! Nooooo! I thought James would hear! Then that last stinking line ruined it! Foiled again! P.S. P.O.ed fellings for Lily gone....James very hot...Love James. And I like how you write Remus...But I still think Siriu should be a little wild to add some fun, not now seeing as he likes *wink* someone, but perhaps laterz...
Summary: It's our favorite couple-to-be's 6th year! Lily is outside studying, and James is playing with that darn snitch again, distracting her. Irritated, she goes to confront him and 'politely' (cough) ask him to stop. Madness ensues, and the two have a civil conversation (gasp!). James ends up giving Lily something to think about, though it may not be exactly what he intended.... [One-shot L/J - fluffy]
I love it! The fact that she still had his snitch in the end, and he probably noticed and did not tell her! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it :)