Hi! I'm Alice,
I am always kind of hyper with more caffeine then is good for me.... but thats not always a bad think.
Lately my friends and I got a little obsessed with HP fan. fics, and decided we'd write some.
I don't know why you're reading this..but whatever...you must be really bored!
Great story! Keep updating!
Ooh, this is a great story! keep writing and update soon!
whoa! awesome story! update soon!
fine, a normal review:
Even tho i know wut happens... write more anyways!!!!
I luv your story!!!
It's so good!!!
If i could write like you... :( sad!!
Author's Response: Ainsley, you can write like me! god! I'm working on writing more... For all of you, I'm submitting chapter 3 soon!
Hey! I resent that!
Ok: English, and I will translate into french as well for the benefit of all you French People out there.
English: This is a really good story, and I am sad that it is going to be short. You must write a sequel. (Are you going to use my idea?)
Francais: Ceci est une vraiment bonne histoire, et je suis triste qu'il va etre court. Vous devez ecrire une consequence. (Allez-vous utiliser mon idee ?)
Does this count as in English?
Ce compte il comme cet anglais ?
Author's Response: grrr. I spose it counts.............................. I am using ur idea for the sequel, though. But I stress that i will write it in English
Awww, awesome story, Molly! Can't wait for a sequel.
YAY MOLLY, ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! You know what? you have a lot of cliffies in your story... AND I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS SO HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE!!!(its ok, take your time, I understand) just so you know, the italics on your first chapter are kind of screwed up.
That's a really good start, keep writing!
YAY! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.
I luv your sory and am sad youre only writing one more chapter. Where will I take out my random energy now??!!! Anyways, I'm sorry I haven't been much of an editor lately, but I'm trying!
(i accidentally poured water on my keyboard, so iuts kinda screwed up)
Author's Response: ainsley,you know I'm writing a sequel (your random energy went into the idea, remember)!! and it'll be a fun sequel... so you can always use your energy on that... or on helping me with my writer's block!!!
No LeeAnn's right.
Tu as un espece du pamplemouse, et un espece du boisson!
I think you're mean to leave us all on a cliffhanger!
Must Find out what happens!!!
Author's Response: Ainsley, you know what happens! And I'm not a beverage or a grapefruit! I wish I took a language. grr! Next year I will call all of you guys really weir things in Spanish!!
Sorry to be reviewing again, and i will say (again) that this is an awesome story, and to all you out there who think it is lame/boring (LeeAnn!!!), that is really rude and not at all constructive! Anyways...i looove this story and am sad it is ending...but can't wait for a sequel!
Exciting! Yay! Keep writing! ~Ainsley
Im sorry, I know I dont do a great job..... My email thing is really bad for editing. I love it anyway, though!!!
YAY! I really really like this story and hope you write more really soon and am amazed that I am the first person to review this b/c it is an awesome story!
I think that whoever came up with the title is an absolute genius and everyone should worship him/her!
anyways...I can't wait to see what happens and hope that you update soon and that lots of interesting things happen and im sad that a lot of ppl die!
wow, i just wrote a lot, huh. Well, id give you a 100, but theres only a ten, so you'll have to deal with only getting a ten.
Author's Response: yes, yes, a lot of people die. and the person who came up with the title is an aboslute genius... :) we all wonder who it was, don't we?
if you didn't know... I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!! keep writing foreverandeverandeverandever!!!!!!! xox ...alice waters
love it love it love it love it!!!!!!!!
omg omg omg....PREQUEL!!!!! i luuuvvved the other story!!!! omg!!!!!!! update soon!
Author's Response: This story is going to differ slightly from "Too Far Gone" once I reach the seventh year, but the basic plot will stay the same, so no worries!