I am a fifteen-year-old highschool sophomore who wastes her time on silly things like homework, homework, homework, sleep, and fanfiction. I'm also writing things outside of the realm of Harry Potter, but that involves doing my own character development, so I'm no good at it.
I have a lot of stories posted on here, so I would be much obliged if you checked them out and what I like to call "read" them. It's a crazy idea, but it just might work.
My favorite characters are Harry, Hermione, the entire Weasley family (except for Percy, I don't like him much), Snape, Buckbeak, and Sirius (RIP).
Now for some other random facts about me.
Eye Color: Green like Harry! Man, I'm obsessed.
Hair Color: Brown, like the actor who plays Harry!
Favorite Color: Pink, like nothing involving Harry.
Yeah, so now that you know a bunch about me, you should definitely read my fanfics. Some of them are pretty awesome, if I do say so myself.
I am the cousin of Isabella Rose, who still has nothing posted here. She is, however, working on her first fanfiction, which is being beta-ed by me. I am also the dear friend of Leah Preston, who does not intend to post anything, and The Second Snape, who has already posted something, the sly dog. Yes, for those of you who have read her fic and follow it banging your heads into your computers because she never updates, I'm working on it too. And yes, she has updated.
By the way, my website has absolutely nothing to do with my fanfiction, so until I get really bored with this site and switch over to a new one, it'll stay there and have nothing to do with Harry Potter.
And now, dear reader, I am off to write for you. Do not despair, for I will not abandon any fics. Ever. I hate it when people do that!
Here is the awesome banner for my story:
Your other reviewer hit the nail on the head. I love your portrayal of Hermione as well --- and I love one-shots. This is really good.
SQUEEEEE! Oh, the almighty fluffiness! Thank you, friend, I needed that! I love it, and give you a nice, shiny 10 to take along with you!
Author's Response: yay! shiny tens are the BEST! i appreciate your kind words!
pfc --- Sorry I still can't see it!!!
pfc --- Why is chapter four called chapter3? I'm confused. I loved the actual third chappie, though!
AAAHHH! Stupid computer won't let me see anything!
You said you wanted advice, keep in mind.
For starters, it's a bit stilted. You said Hermione's OOC, and I don't have a problem with that. Short fics don't bug me, but this was short and had very little character development.
For your first fic, though, very good. I'm impressed.
Keep writing, you'll get better.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice.
Good storyline. I don't like cliffhangers, but I don't usually give two reviews to the same person. :: I like it. Still a bit stilted, but first-time authors have excuses.
Author's Response: Thanks agian. Sorry about the cliffhanger.
Yes! I would like to submit a review! Spectacular, friend. This has Gred and Forge written all over it. Thanks for the laugh.
Good, so far. I like this take on it --- everyone always has to be so excited to go to Hogwarts! I like that Lily's not, and she's not going to be very friendly about it. Good work.
Good job. Really short, but enjoyable and light, just the same.
I like the idea in the works, but like they've said already, it is a bit rushed. Slow down, take the time to tell the story, and be descriptive. You've got Harry running around and everybody getting hexed, and then you've got Ron confessing his love, Hermione freaking out, and suddenly, years later, they're meeting up again. It's a good storyline, especially with Ron being an idiot as usual. "I don't know ...." That's great. Just slow down a bit ... a lot ... and everything will be okay.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. It will slow down a lot more in the next chapter. Some people may think its relevence is not important, but it will become more apparent why. Thanks for the advice!
Wow. This is a masterpiece. Continue writing, and you shall have someone who would fall at your feet wanting an autograph!
Author's Response: ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...... thanks! that was very intresting. im glad you like it!
Oh, you're one of them. Those H/Hr shippers. I'm disappointed ...
I am of the impression that a certain Mr. Potter is in VERY DEEP TROUBLE. I always like this sort of thing, though. Snape loves Lily, just so long as Lily doesn't love him back. It's a different light in which to put Snape, and I appreciate that. Marvelous.
Okay ... the Draco Malfoy list was okay (I repeat, OKAY) but Hermione's list was a little off. I don't know why, it just was. For inspiration, I suggest you the 101 Ways to Annoy Lord Voldemort, located somewhere on the site. Both funny and functional! Ideal ...
*tears pouring from eyes* So sad, and so happy, and so perfect all at once! Brilliance!
I'm not really a Ron/Luna fan, but this impressed me. I love that you gave Luna a little more personality than she has in the book ... if I might say, more normal?? I like it, on the whole.
Oh, this is so cute! I love it! Lots of new chapters to look at ... I'm excited. I hope this story is as good as I think it will be. :)
Awesome. I don't usually read stuff like that, but this was actually very funny. I love it when Fred and George play daft. Marvellous.
Oh, that's so sweet. He reminds me of my boyfriend's little brother! He's so cute, he can barely talk, and he says the darndest things! Haha ... Uncie Vermin ... tell me about it. This is adorable ... I love it! 10!
Author's Response: Thank-you so much!