Hello! I'm Danielle. I'm also a proud Ravenclaw and SBBC-ling (and newbie SPEW-er).
Also, almost all of my fics were written pre-DH so please check the date...I swear that I wasn't just ignoring canon :)
Aw! I love it, simple and sweet! I love the rhthym to it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I find poems that rhyme and have some sort of rhythm to it are easier to read... well for me, anyway.
I love this one too!!! You should write more!
Author's Response: *Sniff, sniff* Thank you! I\'m touched!
Review I promised! I love the interaction between Harry and Ginny, especially the ending. And Hermione being so Hermione-ish at the end. My only critique is that is was a bit monotone at the beginning, and I suggest you use some synonyms (i.e- Instead of using words like "happy" replace it with something like "euphoric") and mix up your sentence structures a bit more (i.e.-Compoud sentences, semi-colons, ect. Just not simple sentences) to give it some more color.
Oh, I sound like my English teacher!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing... Did you really promise to review? Because I don\'t remember... Hm... well thanks, anyway! I agree with the different sentence structure thing... someone else had pointed that out to me as well, so now I pay more attention to that kind of thing. Thank you for the advice though! Hopefully I\'ll be even better at English now!
Author's Response: Oh, okay. I saw your response to my review for Never Forget. THAT\'S where you hinted at the reviews... Gotcha.
First of all, congrats on such an adorable idea! Ice skating, it's fantastic. I have to say, out of this chappie and the first one, this is my favorite. I love how you portrayed their romance, and I can't wait to read the rest of your fics! Oh, and I love how you kept Hermione and Ron in character very well. Good job!
PS: Then kiss me...
Author's Response: Aw... thank you! I\'m shaking with euphoria (ha ha ha!), making it hard for me to type properly... or maybe that\'s because I just got out of the shower and I\'m shivering because of the cold... Anyway, I\'m glad you liked the idea of ice skating. And I agree with you about this chapter. I like it much better than the first. :D
Erm...review continued. I was going to say that I'm in love that line.
Author's Response: Thank you! I kind of liked that part too! :)
Author's Response: *eeeeee!!!!!*
AH! LOVE IT! especially how you made the last word scar when that's supposed to be the last word in the books :-)
Author's Response: thanks@ glad u noticed!
Author's Response: Sorry, what was that? I didn\'t quite get it.
YES!!! AND FUNNY!!!
Author's Response: :-) Why, thanks!
Yippee! First review!
Wonderful, I've actually been pondering the same question myself. Well written, and all that jazz. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review! I\'m glad you liked the story. I wonder if it will follow your own thoughts? :) Thanks again for the positive comments - more chapters are on the way. ~Gina :)
Awww!!! I love the idea of Ginny being a horocrux, it's so original! I've never seen it before! You have great ideas, and your imagery and descriptions are simply wonderful!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it!! thanks for the review!
ACK! I'm just now reading chappie 2, adored chapter 1, but I had no idea you updated! Imagine my surprise when I'm strolling along, then, BAM, FOUR CHAPTERS! Sorry,
Author's Response: Yay for reviews! Glad you like it!
Erm, review continued. Anyway, I was going to say sorry I hadn't read the rest of it yet...
Author's Response: No worries. Thanks for reading!
Oh wow, even better than the first!chapter *finally reviewing for real*
I love Nell's new outlook and how it affected her, and how the little things will set her off, like black hair or holding hands. You conveyed her emotions wonderfully. I also love Addie's character, and her all chattering :-). I actually have a friend just like her.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it so much! Thanks for all the reviews!
Whoa, amazing twist with Addie's mystery guy. Still loving Addie, I must say :-)
Very dark, LOVE how you build up the tension!
Author's Response: I beleive that after four reviews, a simple \'thank you\' is a sufficient Author\'s reply. :D
MAN I LOVE IT! Just keeps getting better and better :-)
I'm actually kinda hoping it turns out as a Remus/Nell romance, I don't know why lol. I guess I'm just an obsessive shipper: I must have a ship for every story, even if it's not a romance.
Again, great, but did you notice you changed Nell's last name? Or at least I think you did. In an earlier chapter it was Thomas, and in this chapter it's Taylor.
Author's Response: Zut! Maybe I did change her last name... I\'ll have to go and fix that... thanks for letting me know! *hugs*
Your writing is so eloquent, so beautiful...it flows so nicely...ah! Bliss. :-)
*runs off to read next chappie*
Don't worry, I'll leave a more concrit review next chapter!
Author's Response: Thankee!
Oh nice. Very lovely. Well not lovely, what happened to Nell is awful, but you know what I mean :-)
My only complaint is that you could showed a bit more emotion from Nell. True, you did have some dialogue that expressed her feelings, but what's really going on inside her head?
What I liked: I really thought you did a great job capturing how vile the boy was.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I either show a lot of emotion or not enough. With me, there\'s no happy medium. I have to work on showing more emotion in the second chapter. I have it written, but my sources tell me it\'s lacking *goes to fix* Thanks for the review!!
The emotions in the story...its so touching. Again, your writing style is lovely. The only problem I have is with that friend of Nell's...well, first I thought it all moved a bit too quickly after Nell told Addie what happened, Addie moved on too quickly and ignored Nell for Sirius.
And Addie seems like a good friend at times, and a bad friend at others...kind of an odd complaint, but...
Still love it,
Author's Response: Addie is like a friend I have. She\'s one of my best, yet sometimes a bit clueless and all that Jazz. I guess maybe she seems a bit unrealistic, but I\'ve based her off a real person, so I guess I did the best I could. In any case... I\'m glad you like my story. Thanks for the review!