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06/09/06




Hello! I'm Danielle. I'm also a proud Ravenclaw and SBBC-ling (and newbie SPEW-er).

Also, almost all of my fics were written pre-DH so please check the date...I swear that I wasn't just ignoring canon :)


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A Hare-y Little Problem by spunkymuzicnote

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 94 Reviews
Summary: Harry has an opportunity to view a Pensieve memory of his parents—When Lily overhears James commenting on Remus’s “furry little problem” the Marauders must do some fast talking to get themselves out of a sticky situation.
Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WONDERFUL!



Return to Me by h3art0f1nk

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: This is Ginny's poem of when Harry left her after Dumbledore's funeral.
Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Return to Me

Aw! I love it, simple and sweet! I love the rhthym to it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I find poems that rhyme and have some sort of rhythm to it are easier to read... well for me, anyway.



My Love for You by h3art0f1nk

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 12 Reviews
Summary: Hermione watches Ron as he slowly dies in the Last Battle. This is her poem about it. . . .
Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: My Love for You

I love this one too!!! You should write more!

Author's Response: *Sniff, sniff* Thank you! I\'m touched!



Winter Holiday by h3art0f1nk

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 41 Reviews
Summary: It's winter vacation of the trio's sixth year at Hogwarts. Hermione and Ron start yet another row, this time about Ginny. But there's more to it than that. Will Hermione and Ron ever find the answers to their problems? Or will they keep bickering forever?

A/N: This is a two-chapter fic.

Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: In the Snow

Review I promised! I love the interaction between Harry and Ginny, especially the ending. And Hermione being so Hermione-ish at the end. My only critique is that is was a bit monotone at the beginning, and I suggest you use some synonyms (i.e- Instead of using words like "happy" replace it with something like "euphoric") and mix up your sentence structures a bit more (i.e.-Compoud sentences, semi-colons, ect. Just not simple sentences) to give it some more color.

Oh, I sound like my English teacher!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing... Did you really promise to review? Because I don\'t remember... Hm... well thanks, anyway! I agree with the different sentence structure thing... someone else had pointed that out to me as well, so now I pay more attention to that kind of thing. Thank you for the advice though! Hopefully I\'ll be even better at English now!

Author's Response: Oh, okay. I saw your response to my review for Never Forget. THAT\'S where you hinted at the reviews... Gotcha.



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 2: On the Ice

First of all, congrats on such an adorable idea! Ice skating, it's fantastic. I have to say, out of this chappie and the first one, this is my favorite. I love how you portrayed their romance, and I can't wait to read the rest of your fics! Oh, and I love how you kept Hermione and Ron in character very well. Good job!

PS: Then kiss me...

I

Author's Response: Aw... thank you! I\'m shaking with euphoria (ha ha ha!), making it hard for me to type properly... or maybe that\'s because I just got out of the shower and I\'m shivering because of the cold... Anyway, I\'m glad you liked the idea of ice skating. And I agree with you about this chapter. I like it much better than the first. :D



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/27/06 Title: Chapter 2: On the Ice

Erm...review continued. I was going to say that I'm in love that line.

:-)

Author's Response: Thank you! I kind of liked that part too! :)



Beyond the Prophecy by the_bartender713

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 287 Reviews
Summary: Oh, I'll tell you a tale of a sainted wizard, of his friends and their adventures in store. And I'll tell you a tale of an evil wizard, of the decimated world torn apart by his war.


But be warned, I say, think not far ahead. For where you might see gain, loss may be instead.


Heavily run the theories and conclusions dreamt out of whims, but know that what you hope lies most likely not within.


She's written the words, and told the lot of trials, tribulations, and soul-eating rot.


But I won't tell you how, and I won't tell you when. Just know your illustrious Bartender has done it yet again


What lies Beyond the Prophecy and Harry Potter's life- who knows? Only the exalted one, Merlin, and the one who writes.
Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 3: Prepare for Battle

***SQUEE!!!!***

Author's Response: *eeeeee!!!!!*



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue- What Lies Beyond

AH! LOVE IT! especially how you made the last word scar when that's supposed to be the last word in the books :-)

Author's Response: thanks@ glad u noticed!



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Fifth Altercation- No Greater Love

ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry, what was that? I didn\'t quite get it.



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 07/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Potter's Army

YES!!! AND FUNNY!!!

Author's Response: :-) Why, thanks!



A Different Reality by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 233 Reviews
Summary: Harry has just witnessed the death of Professor Dumbledore, and chases after the murderous Snape before he can escape the grounds. But the former potions master easily captures Harry, and takes him back to Spinner’s End along with Draco Malfoy. What happens to Harry at Spinner’s End? Will Snape cement his allegiance to the Dark Lord and turn Harry over to Voldemort? What happens to Draco Malfoy? Will Voldemort punish him for his failure on the Tower? And what about Severus Snape - will Harry learn the truth about the former Death Eater at last?

This story is now complete, and presents an alternate ending to Harry Potter and The Half Blood Prince, in which Harry learns more than he could have ever imagined about Professor Snape and Professor Dumbledore. He must abandon many of his old convictions and come to an understanding of a new and different reality before setting out on his final journey to vanquish Lord Voldemort in Book Seven.

Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Flight

Yippee! First review!

Wonderful, I've actually been pondering the same question myself. Well written, and all that jazz. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review! I\'m glad you liked the story. I wonder if it will follow your own thoughts? :) Thanks again for the positive comments - more chapters are on the way. ~Gina :)



Beauty From Pain by BeautyInTheBreakdown

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 23 Reviews
Summary: Ginny mourns the death of Harry by looking back to her past, thinking on memory. Character death Post HBP H/G
Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 08/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: Living a Memory

Awww!!! I love the idea of Ginny being a horocrux, it's so original! I've never seen it before! You have great ideas, and your imagery and descriptions are simply wonderful!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it!! thanks for the review!



Alone by BeautyInTheBreakdown

Rated: Professors • 184 Reviews
Summary: How could one night change a life so drastically? Something as simple as choosing to take a walk could ruin a life forever.

Nell is a fifth year at Hogwarts, but she's not like the rest. She's been through more than most could even dream up.
Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 2: Alone in a Crowd

ACK! I'm just now reading chappie 2, adored chapter 1, but I had no idea you updated! Imagine my surprise when I'm strolling along, then, BAM, FOUR CHAPTERS! Sorry,

Author's Response: Yay for reviews! Glad you like it!



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 2: Alone in a Crowd

Erm, review continued. Anyway, I was going to say sorry I hadn't read the rest of it yet...

Author's Response: No worries. Thanks for reading!



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 2: Alone in a Crowd

Oh wow, even better than the first!chapter *finally reviewing for real*
I love Nell's new outlook and how it affected her, and how the little things will set her off, like black hair or holding hands. You conveyed her emotions wonderfully. I also love Addie's character, and her all chattering :-). I actually have a friend just like her.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it so much! Thanks for all the reviews!



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 3: Déja-vu

Whoa, amazing twist with Addie's mystery guy. Still loving Addie, I must say :-)

Very dark, LOVE how you build up the tension!

Author's Response: I beleive that after four reviews, a simple \'thank you\' is a sufficient Author\'s reply. :D



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 4: Hidden Scars

MAN I LOVE IT! Just keeps getting better and better :-)

I'm actually kinda hoping it turns out as a Remus/Nell romance, I don't know why lol. I guess I'm just an obsessive shipper: I must have a ship for every story, even if it's not a romance.

Again, great, but did you notice you changed Nell's last name? Or at least I think you did. In an earlier chapter it was Thomas, and in this chapter it's Taylor.

Author's Response: Zut! Maybe I did change her last name... I\'ll have to go and fix that... thanks for letting me know! *hugs*



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Stand By Me

Your writing is so eloquent, so beautiful...it flows so nicely...ah! Bliss. :-)

*runs off to read next chappie*

Don't worry, I'll leave a more concrit review next chapter!



Author's Response: Thankee!



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 09/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Wind's Whisper

Oh nice. Very lovely. Well not lovely, what happened to Nell is awful, but you know what I mean :-)
My only complaint is that you could showed a bit more emotion from Nell. True, you did have some dialogue that expressed her feelings, but what's really going on inside her head?

What I liked: I really thought you did a great job capturing how vile the boy was.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I either show a lot of emotion or not enough. With me, there\'s no happy medium. I have to work on showing more emotion in the second chapter. I have it written, but my sources tell me it\'s lacking *goes to fix* Thanks for the review!!



Reviewer: Simply Being Signed
Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Meaning in the Meetings

The emotions in the story...its so touching. Again, your writing style is lovely. The only problem I have is with that friend of Nell's...well, first I thought it all moved a bit too quickly after Nell told Addie what happened, Addie moved on too quickly and ignored Nell for Sirius.

And Addie seems like a good friend at times, and a bad friend at others...kind of an odd complaint, but...

Still love it,

Danielle

Author's Response: Addie is like a friend I have. She\'s one of my best, yet sometimes a bit clueless and all that Jazz. I guess maybe she seems a bit unrealistic, but I\'ve based her off a real person, so I guess I did the best I could. In any case... I\'m glad you like my story. Thanks for the review!