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Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1147]

Summary:

Hermione gets a visitor at night that delights in her pain. Before she used to dread the nights but lately... she has begun to look forward to meet her nocturnal vistor... and rapist?

Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.

Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.

~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!



Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 35830 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/12/04 Updated: 05/13/06


Reviewer: Houlestar Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

A few mistakes I should point out:
"Merlin Granger," he breathed into her ear. (Should be Merlin, Granger) same thing in: "Crying again Hermione?" should be: Crying again, Hermione.

It hardly matters now, but those are direct addresses so, before the name there must be a comma.

Other than that, it's really great.

 
Reviewer: Houlestar Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 2: No Escape

You made the same mistake in this chapter as in the last one.

Also you have American mesurements as opposed to metric.

 
Reviewer: Houlestar Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: Chapter 5: Regrets

hate to be such a pain but: egging should be edging. I know, I have this thing that when I read a fic mistakes pop out at me.

Sorry, it's great, but Draco isn't really in character.

 
Reviewer: Houlestar Signed
Date: 06/09/06 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

It wasn't as bad as you put it up to be. In fact, rather tame.

 

Lost In Time by Orlaith
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Severus Snape sets out on a journey to ancient Ireland after his wife, former DADA Professor Sorcha Zandantius (now Snape), loses her Time Turner and cannot return. When Sorcha is mortally wounded Severus rushes to her aid, but it's not as easy as it seems. Can Severus save her in time?



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 26754 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 12/03/06


Reviewer: Houlestar Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Effect of Losing Time

interesting, must read on.

 

I Will Find You by I Am Lady Voldemort
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 92]

Summary: Severus Snape, dangerously embroiled in his duties as Dumbledore's spy, encounters yet further obstacles when he begins to harbor feelings for a sixth year Gryffindor student. Succumbing to his desires sets in motion a chain of events that could very well destroy all that he and the opposition of Lord Voldemort have striven so hard to accomplish. Please keep in mind that this is written from the angle that Snape is no longer a follower of Voldemort, and that its events coincide with books 4, 5, and 6, with a slight continuation beyond HBP. (Chapters 1-15 need some fixing to work with Book 7.)

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 97368 Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Published:
04/07/06 Updated: 11/27/10


Reviewer: Houlestar Signed
Date: 06/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: To Dear Minerva!

Good start. I really think that this is intersting.

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