ha! that's the funniest thing ever. I've been writing and reading sappy love stories, and this was an awesome break! Kepp it up! I completely LOVE the image of 'Rap Master Snape,' Hermione with bling, and James with his hoes! Hilarious!
This was wonderful! Keep writing! I can't say specifically which parts I liked because I loved the whole thing. Good job.
The characterization is awesome, the storyline is great, keep writing!