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What Follows Betrayal by lunafish

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 9 Reviews
Summary: Having betrayed one of his masters, Severus Snape must now justify his actions to the other. References to character death and torture, but nothing explicit. HBP Spoilers.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: What Follows Betrayal

This was really great. I particularly liked the idea of Voldemort having Severus punish Draco. Punish them both in one shot, that seems so like him. Really, really well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do like to write Voldemort--I think because he\'s just such a classic baddy. :-D

Vengeance is Sweet by miss padfoot

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 10 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Tom Riddle has to deliver a package to the Malfoy Manor, but that isnít the only thing he has in mind. One Shot.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! This was almost eerie like. I really enjoyed it. I loved your evil Tom. It was really well done. Very impressed. :D

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Sly Severus! I enjoyed evil! Tom too. Thanks for reviewing :)

Death On Two Legs by MaiaMadness

Rated: Professors • 13 Reviews
Summary: "Death on two legs! You never had a heart of your own... Have you found a new toy to replace me? Can you face me? But now you can kiss my ass goodbye."

At a Death Eater meeting in 1979, Severus is forced to face Lucius again, after five years of silence.

First short in my A Night at the Opera series. Enjoy.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Death On Two Legs

Well written, and well executed. I never expected to find myself reading about a Lucius/Severus pairing and enjoying it, but this is the second time I have done that with your work. Really well done.

Author's Response: Thank you once again! I am glad that you enjoyed this story as well. Gives me a happy feeling. :D Thank you for taking the time to both read and review my work! And I know, sometimes one finds pairings one never thought one would like, and then one ends up loving them after all. Funny, isn\'t it?

Euthanasia by evanescence17

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 11 Reviews
Summary: It seemed that the young schoolboy with striking blonde hair had aged over thirty years in just a few hours. His silver hair was beyond recognition. It had turned into a strange murky brown, maybe due to the grime and blood. Who am I? This is not me. I've become a ghost with no hope of life. Merlin! Why couldn't things be the way they were before...

This is my version of what happens after the HBP. Also, this is my first FF, so please R/R!
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First of all, your opening paragraph was amazing. You immediately set the dark mood of the story. Even after reading the first sentence, I knew this was going to be a chilling story. Your description is remarkable.

You handled Dracoís character very well. He showed feelings towards his family, but remained IC at all times. You said it yourself, near the end of the story, he continued to think like a Malfoy.

'Your mother would have been proud, Draco. She'd have loved to see you return victorious...' the Dark Lord paused, 'as would your father.' This completely caught Draco off his guard, and he looked up into the scarlet eyes with cat-like slits for pupils. 'I'm afraid you are too late.' His hand left Draco's shoulder as he drifted behind the mysterious green fire.

This was eerie. I canít imagine this being the way Draco is told about his parentsí deaths. In this tiny paragraph the Dark Lordís cruelty shines through. I felt for Draco when reading this. His reaction was inevitable. Clearly, the Dark Lord had decided to kill him, rather or not he was successful in his mission. He must have known Draco could not continue to serve him, after his parentsí deaths.

Bellatrix, a woman known to have the grit of steel, was suddenly speechless as she looked at the innocence on her nephew's face. There was a lump in her throat that she couldn't gulp down.

I loved this. With this very brief statement, you have shown Bellaís human side. I have always believed that she truly loves her family. It would be very difficult for her to confirm for her nephew that his parents are dead. This paragraph showed her pain very well.

He glanced at his aunt. When everyone else had left him to die, she was the only one who came to him. She was crumpled in a heap, taking deep breaths. She's sleeping. Run Draco, run now and don't look back.

*cries* Bella clearly loves him and went to a lot of effort to find him. She is trying to keep him safe. If she wanted to hurt him, she would have turned him over to the Dark Lord right away. I donít understand why Draco would leave her like that. I know he is hurting and he wants out, but Bella is the only one he has left. Heís the only one she has left. It seems so wrong for him to just leave her like that. I canít imagine what she will feel when she wakes in the morning to find that he left and was killed.

You are a Malfoy. Malfoys can't just break down. He thought sternly. You are strong Draco, control yourself. But he couldn't help it; he slumped against the memorial and broke down into heavy tears.

This was amazing. It describes Dracoís character perfectly. It shows the things that Lucius would teach his son, and it shows that Draco took those things to heart. This was a wonderful summary of Dracoís entire character.

I do have a couple of nit-picks:

He swollen eyes suddenly jerked open. He should be His.

Unconscious, he could not fell being rolled down roughly in a dark corner, and being left there to die... Fell should be feel.

He tried getting up, ignoring the stinging pain in his back and stomach but his feet were wobbly, and he almost fell down again as got up on his feet. In this sentence you have used the word feet twice. I would consider revising to avoid this. Sentences get awkward and the flow is thrown off when a word is used twice in the same sentence.

Anyway, overall, I think this was a really good story. You showed Draco and Bella to be human, which they are, although it is often overlooked. Very well done.

Mistakes of an Old Man by blackhairedweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: A poem detailing Cornelius Fudge's thoughts after the battle in the Department of Mysteries.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really great. The flow was awesome! And I think you really captured Cornelius' feelings when he realized that he had totally screwed up. This was wonderful. One of the best poems I have ever read on here. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, hun! Knowing the company I hold, that\'s an exceptional compliment as a writer.

- Jacie the Cat

Electives by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 17 Reviews
Summary: At the beginning of third year all Hogwarts students choose the first steps on their career paths, whether ready for the decision or not. Some choose them with more noise and fanfare than others.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: -----

Very good way to choose courses. I think he should have taken Care of Magical Creatures, though. Just imagine the funny stories there could be involving Severus, Sirius, and something vicious and furry, other than werewolf Remus, of course!

Author's Response: And here I was pondering whether a story about Severus and something mad and hairy was coming on. He seems to be more in the mood for dark these days, so we\'ll see. *ponders* Thanks for reviewing!

Learning About Light And Dark by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: I don't usually write poetry, but I decided to give it a shot. This poem is about mistakes and regret. It is from Severus Snape's point of view, but could be read from a few character's perspectives.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Learning About Light And Dark

Cool take on Severus' thoughts. He is such a great character, my all time favorite! You do really interesting things with him. Good work!

Author's Response: Yes, Snape is the best. :) Thanks very much!

A Broken Heart by Bryant

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 25 Reviews
Summary: Severus Snape has secretly admired Lily Evans for a while now. He risks humiliation from the two people he hates most at Hogwarts (James and Sirius), to tell Lily how he feels. Only he finds himself with a broken heart.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Broken Heart

Poor Sevy. He just never wins. Good story. Very entertaining.

Teddy by hufflepuffgal

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: A poem about one thing that Harry and Voldemort both own: a teddy bear.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Teddy

That was really cute. I can't picture old Voldy with a teddy bear though. But it was still sad. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad you thought it was cute.

I'm In Love With My Car by MaiaMadness

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 15 Reviews
Summary: ďIím holding your wheel! All I hear is your gear! Iím cruising in overdrive. Donít have to listen to no one in the middle talk jive. Iím in love with my car. Got a feel for my AutomobileÖĒ The muggle car was beautiful and bright turquoise. It wasnít big or suave. It was not one of those fancy, big American cars. It was simply a cute little Ford Anglia. But Arthur Weasley loved it!

Third short in my A Night at the Opera series!
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: I'm In Love With My Car

Cute. A very nice story about how the Ford Anglia came to be. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you infinitely! :)

Azkaban Memories by midnight_me

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 6 Reviews
Summary: After being accused of being a Death Eater, Severus Snape is sent to Azkaban. While there he meets a familiar prisoneróSirius Black. While in Azkaban, the two discuss an event from the past, and relive a horrible memory.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Azkaban Memories

This was really good. I liked your reason for why Sirius laughed. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =)

A Hogwarts Survival Guide by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 90 Reviews
Summary: During her fifth year, Lily Evans decides to write a guide to life at Hogwarts, and how to survive it. She covers all aspects of life, and gives helpful advice on how to deal with certain scenarios. For example, would you know what to do if you realised there was a kleptomaniac in your Dorm? What if you lost your beloved teddy bear, Mr Muffles? And do you know how to push, without any force? Read on, and find out the best way of living and surviving at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry ...
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Hogwarts Survival Guide

Very cute. Something always made me think that Lily and Hermione would have a lot in common. I like the idea of Hermione thinking of her as role model. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m really glad you liked it.

A Special Birthday Surpise by Gonz

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 19 Reviews
Summary: Second Place in the One-Shot Challenge - Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes for Hufflepuff House.

Tonks and Kingsley team up to give a certain someone a special Birthday surprise.

Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Hehe! This was really cute. It really sounds like something Tonks would do. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tonks is a troublemaker isn\'t she? I just wish there was a fic of her at Hogwarts...

Once Again, My Love by comewhatmay

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 15 Reviews
Summary: A poem by Ginny who is going to see her lost love again.

Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 03/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1

I really enjoyed this. I followed a link, so I didn't know it was Ginny until I went and checked your summary. Actually, I thought it was Harry.

Anyway, I liked the style. It was quick to read and left a feeling of peace. Well done.

Author's Response: oh im glad you think it so good, thanks!

My Lily-Flower by StellaSirius

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: A love note from James to Lily, during the Marauders' days. I like to think she kept it.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: My Lily-Flower: A Poem

Awww...that sounds so much like I would envision James writing poetry. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought of the idea, and it just kind of... spilled onto the computer screen. I thought it sounded like James, too. ;)

Better Off This Way? by NorskHeksen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: Sometimes people get involved with Dark Magic, not because they're evil, but because they haven't the intelligence or confidence to decide what they truly believe and stand up for it.

Narcissa Malfoy reflects on her life.

Songfic based on "Airport Song" by Guster. Warning is for a vague element, nothing graphic.

Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Better Off This Way?

Poor Narcissa. I totally agree that she is questioning her life now, and I don't think that she is very happy with it. I enjoyed reading this. I found it similar to my own Narcissa story. It's always nice to find someone with the same views. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it struck me how concerned Narcissa was with Draco -- that means she must be able to love, she must not have a cold heart. And so this appeared! *goes off to review your story, hehe*

His Eyes Were Black by SiriuslyMental

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 12 Reviews
Summary: Was he always evil? A little something I wrote in my spare time about Severus Snape.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 08/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! I loved it! It's nice to think that someone was watching over Severus from the very start.

The only thing that I noticed was you said they made Peter the secret keeper, but Dumbledore didn't make him the secret keeper. He didn't even know he had been the secret keeper until years later; he thought it was Sirius.

Anyway, I really did enjoy this. Good job!

November Tenth by GryffindorGoddess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: Neville Longbottom spends this day in mourning. He sits in solitude until a welcome friend helps ease his grief.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: November Tenth

Wonderful! I absolutly loved it.

Author's Response: thanks, Sly!

Corruption by Slian Martreb

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: Bellatrix is on a mission to convert another to the Dark Lord's cause.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Corruption

I really liked this. But I was confused at the end about which man she was seducing. I didn't figure it out until I read your response to the last review. Other than that, well done.

Author's Response: Is it really that unclear? *scratches head* Shall have to see about clarifying that, then. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading!

Fan Girl by Evilpersonified

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: Severus Snape has taken a teaching job at Hogwarts, and he intends to teach, not act as a confindent for silly little students, thank you very much. But while he tries to keep himself as isolated as possible, there is one particular student who can't help but fall for the grumpy potions' master.
Reviewer: Sly Severus Signed
Date: 07/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Awww...poor Tonks. This was really fun to read. But I really did feel bad for Tonks.