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A 6th Year at Hogwarts by SomberBallad
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 151]

Summary: It's Harry, Ron, and Hermione's 6th year at Hogwarts. With a little romance, a little bit of Voldemort, a lot of the Mauraders, and the best DADA teacher since Lupin(and he's in it too). There are a lot of changes and a lot of trouble. Harry discovers his increasing doubt in his talent, Hermione remains overworked and ever loyal, while Ron struggles to find out what he really means in the story.

(This is an AU!Sixth Year Fic)

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 45269 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 09/04/05


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth Year Begins

I like all the story and it seems that you are following J.K.Rowlings paces but I don`t like the fact that everybody keeps secrets from each other and I was waiting Snape to be more kind.Well,this is your story!

Author's Response: Well, thanks for the comment I appriciate the critisim as well. In my defense, Hermione's secret is a lot like her secret from the 3rd book...she can't tell anyone (enough about that)...and I'm just speculating that Harry and Snape will never get along...but don't get me wrong...I love Snape, he is an interesting and facinating character, but i just don't think he and Harry will ever see eye to eye. Thanks a lot for your opinion though, I like to hear honest thoughts.

 

Swapping with Snape by Loz
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 401]

Summary: Thanks to an ingenious plan of Dumbledore's, Severus Snape and Harry Potter swap bodies. They're doing this to fight Voldemort.

Dumbledore says it's the only way Harry can survive. But can Snape get over the trials and tribulations of being a teenager again, and can Harry battle unruly Potions students and greasy black hair?

In short - will either of them survive?

The latest chapter is shown from Snape's point of view.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 35656 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 06/29/05


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/14/05 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

I give you a 10 for that!Woah,please update soon!I like the fact that there are short chapters and it`s really funny!Go on like this.Good work!

 

Summary: What if, in the 1300s, Hogwarts was a kingdom? Follow the story of the young Prince of Hogwarts, a fair maiden, and one, not-so-orthodox fairy godmother. (AU)

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17118 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/04 Updated: 07/03/05


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Negotiations

I give you a 10!It`s just a great story and I like very much the part that Harry is friend with Drako.You did a very good job getting Harry`s world in 1300`s.And about the age,if anybody wants to clear up,I`m ready.I`n my country is was till late,I mean till 1920 and even later.Is a fenomen that still happens in some villages.It is a Muslim habit to marry children young,even 13 years old,thought they live in pair after they are 15.It even existed in other religions in 1300 and even later so it`s not strange.A Prince or King should marry really early if he wanted the kingdom. And please,update soon!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: None

Well,aren`t they too young to marry?Anyway,I like it,go on like this and let`s see what your fantasy will tell you to write.

 
Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: None

Well,I kind of like it but you are ruining everybody dremas for Harry to be the Head Boy.Well,it`s a nice story and it`s all your fantasy but there of course are big holes.And I don`t think Hermione and Draco are the pefect pair.How could you fall in love with someone that called you all your life a Mudblood?

 

A Christmas story by School owl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Christmas is a time for peace, cheer and love. Sadly, this isn't what Harry goes through for his Christmas at Hogwarts. This takes place in 7th year.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 800 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/18/04 Updated: 12/18/04


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 12/27/04 Title: Chapter 1: The last Christmas

Yes,you are right I believe,we are all so lucky for the life we have.We have things,food and clothes while there are people on this world that can`t even eat.Yes,your story has a moral.

Author's Response: Thank you for being the first real person (besides me) to review. I wanted this to be a powerful moral story. I hoped that this will change the way people think about Christmas. Thank you.

 
Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: The last Christmas

I was re-reading your story and I was thinking of the tragedy in Asia.Now,Harry`s life is nothing compared with it but we may have some kind of idea how these people feel.They have nothing left and they can`t even feast New Year and Christmas.Your story may be a good one to show us how mean people are sometimes and how much we should love each other.This may be a kind of philosophy but if you think harder,you will understand.

Author's Response: Thank you. Your words are true and kind. I am glad that you can read this and relate it to other things in life. Thank you.

 
Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: The last Christmas

I was re-reading your story and I was thinking of the tragedy in Asia.Now,Harry`s life is nothing compared with it but we may have some kind of idea how these people feel.They have nothing left and they can`t even feast New Year and Christmas.Your story may be a good one to show us how mean people are sometimes and how much we should love each other.This may be a kind of philosophy but if you think harder,you will understand.

Author's Response: You have sent this review in before, but I think that I need to say this again, my stroy is for you to read and know that there are some people who can't have a good holiday or a happy new year. Thank you for your words.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/15/05 Title: None

Well,this story of course is funny!Ha,ha!You should write something about this characters trying to confuse Voldemort and thinks like that.What I make out of this is that we shoulden`t be so obsesed about a book or a movie because they are not real.

 

Last Will and Testament by CLY
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 36]

Summary: First his death. Now his will. Later his letters. Can anyone be happy after all this?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14397 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/29/04 Updated: 01/15/05


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Reading of the Will

Great story.Painful one.Nothing at all compared with the tragedy in Asia but still great.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/08/05 Title: None

Yes,it is very good!I like Sirius`s ghost althought I would have liked Sirius`s alive.I`m a very big fan of him. Ok,keep on like this with better and better chapters.Let`s see the surprises!A very good story again!

Author's Response: Thankyou!!! i luv Sirius too and i couldnt kill him off...thanx again!

 

A Girl and a Boy by fireandice
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Two former enemies meet while trying to escape thier past. They learn that with a common bond, ever your worst enemy can be your best friend.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1070 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/18/05 Updated: 01/18/05


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 01/24/05 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

Well,it is very good,I should admit it.Is this the first and last chapter? It really is a lesson for us,it`s like what Dumbledore said in the third movie of HP:"Happines can be found even in the darkest of times;only that somebody should remember to turn the lights on".

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Grivenstayn Signed
Date: 02/03/05 Title: None

I thiink this is just great!I saw your exerpt(sorry If I write it wrong)and if you remember I asked you if this story was online.It is good to read Sirius`s story from the point of view of somebody who is just my age.I give you a 10 for it and keep working like this.

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