ummmm... I really only have a few words to say... and here they are.. nitwit, blubber, oddment, TWEAK!
OH MY GOD I love your story its so perfect and fits so well love how you didnt come up with some ludicrus idea like mpreg or have them having sex as soon as they met i swere some of these slash storys make the harry potters (charicters) seem like horney shits on wayyyy to much cocain please keep going your language arts teacher must prepose to you five times aday (love you) THANYOU i may find that i like this story better then the half blood prince (im willing to ignore the fact that i orderd a copy before it was evin written and have the pop tent redy so i can wait in line for it to come out *yay harthside books my home away from home and my 2nd family* peace out dude) THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU (i will never forgive you if i dont get the next chapter soon *so says the girl who chews out of the leather strapps everymorning to go to the lybrary and bow down to the harry potter books * wee)
the whole series is GREAT so far love it but why is alice/ginny so slutty towards harry shes acting like a total whore wich is so unlike a weasly (unless you count percy i swear that boy is gay) cant wait for an update and i just hope the next one is as good as all of themi give it a ten
omg i would have never thought snape could act like that evin if he was in harrys body i cant wait for the next chapter PLEASE write quickly im offically hooked gonna read your other storys if you have them your great at this I give it a ten
loved this chapter nice touch having "harry" win you MUST update sooner i was dieing without it oh and by the way MY USUALL TEN!
wow i only read the rest of the series last night and i hope the next chapter will come as fast as this one did once again funny i think im hooked and i recomended this to a friend only to find that she was subscribed to a different fanfiction site the blood trader over and out-Mrs.Radcliffe (snot my username but i can dream right)
yay another quick review im so happy oh god i thought i was going to die laughing when harry(snape) finnally had a class with snape(harry) i am well pleased NEW CHAPTER SOON PLEASE
wow dark sinister i wish you hadent put such a quick end on it i usually save those kinds of endings for hopeless storys that are impossable to continue (i havent posted any storys yet i am trying to get atleast 20 chapters before i post to keep people happy while i write the next ones) great story and congradulations on makeing your first story its better then allot Ive read *no offence intended to anybody*
Author's Response: thx... I guess I just didn't know where to go with it, so I ended it quickly... I always figgered he'd be the suicidal type, tho... I hope you do well with your story, but 20 chapters is alot to have done before you post... of course, I shouldn't be talking, as I try to have it all written by the time I post, but then again, most of my stuff is like one or two chapters... first stories are hard... Lurve, Cassandra
great story love how you place them in muggle england instead of random made up places (no offence to jks imagenary world SHE IS THE NICEST WOMAN ON EARTH much nicer then my mom) plz keep it going and dont skimp on the details it gets boring if you dont thankyou
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I may rewrite some of the earlier chapters to add more detail.
its great actually explains how the hell you get lucius malfoy preg. most of these mps give you absolutely nothing on how the fuck you get a guy preg keep up the good work
ps. love the "do i need to tell you about the birds and the bees again remous" line rotfl
Author's Response: Ah yes, I've been questioned plenty times before about how you get a man pregnant, so I thought I should put some explanation in a story. Glad you like the banter between Sirius and Remus!
update update DAMN YOU UPDATE *remains hooked on the first story about draco and hermiones shes read that hasent put hermione as a sluty whore or draco as a flithy rapist* HUGS YOU FOR WRITING GREAT FANFICTION!!!! *gives you a cookie*
Author's Response: thank you very much! I will have another chapter added hopefully by the end of the week! :)
i love your story. i have read allot of all the other h/g storys and allot of them paste harry as a horny shit and ginny as a whore please update soon! I GIVE IT A TEN!
Author's Response: I've really tried to keep Harry and Ginny in character. Thanks for noticing!
Greetings from your new biggest fan! loving your story and hopeing youll update soon! heres betting that the little raven haird fiveyearold is harrys in fact ill bet five hundred dollars that little girl is harrys !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry to all youguys that didnt guess that alredy but i beleve in trees and the obvious so i tend to do that allot avoids fists) love youall byeses!
EEEEE! love it loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit
but (hates to correct)
if harry and ron were twenty three then hermione would be twenty four unless it was between july31 and september fifteenth as hermione was too young to go to hogwarts even though it was like two weeks before she turned eleven she had to wait till she was almost twelve therefor she is a year older than harry and ron
her being twenty four in this story
loves it anyway
but is full of scorn for all of the world
Author's Response: I was thinking more along the lines of April. Thanks, I'm glad you like it! And HArry is ALMOST 23... not 23.
Omg to people who are thinking "it must be ginny who wrote the letter" lets think shall we? this fic is listed under HARRY GINNY not harry other charicter+ this is seriously captian obvious to the rescue!
love the story thought
just a query...
was this story written pre hbp or is it an alter reality story
gives a ten
Author's Response: Yeah, when people keep wondering who it is I get a little worried about them. But hey, they left a review, so they get major brownie points in my book!!! And, no I didn't write this before HBP, I'm actually not quite finished with it. It's an AU fic that just popped into my head one day, my first one actually, so every review is so helpful. Thanks for giving me some feedback!!!