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Muahaha, my friends make fun of me for being the biggest Harry Potter dork but what can I say? I have good taste. ^.^

My absolute favorite couple in the whole world is Sirius/Remus. I love dark fics and romance, fluffy or non-fluffy. I adore reading fics about characters behind the scenes, particularly evil ones.

I write myself, although I'm not even worthy of being posted alongside some of the authors on this site. But I love writing, especially HP fanfiction so I shall continue to post my stories as long as I can concoct new ones in this whirlwind brain of mine.

Sirius and Remus forever!~
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We Can't by RupertsPheonix
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: During a late night Order discussion between the two, Tonks and Remus get sidetracked, but Remus pulls things to a stop when he thinks of the possible consequences. Will an argument arise? And if one does, what will come of it?

Missing-Moment Scene.

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 899 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/01/07 Updated: 02/08/07


Reviewer: Elphin Signed
Date: 02/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: We Can't

I really liked that. It was cute and realistic and you kept Remus and Tonks pretty well in character. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love reviews like this! =) --RP

 

I Love You This Much by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 162]

Summary: This is the story of a boy and a girl. And a boy. This is the story of love returned and unreturned, of friendship gone dry, and of the things people will do for love. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans and Severus Snape. *two-shot*

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14077 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/06/07 Updated: 09/02/07


Reviewer: Elphin Signed
Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hands down, the best HP fic I've read in a long time. It is very well-written and your portrayal of Snape is exactly how I imagined him to be after reading Deathly Hallows.

I'll definitely be rereading this one. Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you though I portrayed Snape well. He was never among my favorite characters -- and he still isn't -- so I'm never sure if I'm doing his character justice when I write him. It's good to know you think I am! :)

 

Corrupt Sanctity by MikePhoenixLament
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 162]

Summary: Harry Potter and his best friends return for their seventh and final year of school. The Wizarding world begins to rebuild itself after the events of the Battle of Hogwarts and the Ministry of Magic and the Order of the Phoenix work together to round up the remaining Death Eaters, still at large.


Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 42034 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
12/07/07 Updated: 04/27/08


Reviewer: Elphin Signed
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Birthdays

This is a very interesting story. I like how Harry goes to Grimmauld Place after the battle. It's a very realistic touch because it shows that it's going to take time for him to get over all that has happened to him.

I do have a few suggestions. First of all, Harry and Ginny are very out of character and I don't think they would change that much because of their experience. You need to work on capturing who they are as people a little better. Also, it gets very confusing when you randomly insert Harry's thoughts in the middle of paragraphs without indicating that it is a thought. You should put his thoughts in italics or somehow distinguish it from the rest of the text.

All in all, it's a good story and I enjoy reading it.

 
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