I really like your style of writing, it flows so well and makes the story really enjoyable to read. I loved this bit:
'Everything — the way Potter shook his hair out of his eyes as he stood up, the way Potter walked with his hands shoved in his pockets and his shoulders slightly slumped forward, the way Potter scratched the back of his head as he debated what to purchase, even the items Potter bought off the cart (one cauldron cake, four chocolate frogs, and a pack of Bertie Bott’s Every Flavour Beans) — was perceived and memorised. It was as if Draco had lost the innate ability to filter out the unnecessary aspects of his surroundings.'
WOW! I just started reading this and it's brilliant! I love your writing style. The story seems to have so much depth to it and it's been a joy to read so far. I really like the way the HarryDraco storyline is being developed slowly, and they seem really in character which is great! Oooh I wonder how Draco is going to respond to Harry's deciding vote. I think he'll be angry, and feel as though he is somehow in debt to Harry now, just as Snape was when James saved his life. I can't wait to read more! Excellent start.
Oh I love Remus and Tonks! They're so lovely together! Ahhhhh, how sweet that her metamorphmagability (if that's even a word - i suspect it isn't) came back. So sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
Oh that was heartbreaking and sweet and hopeful and sad and beautiful all at the same time!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Good grief that was just amazing. My heart stopped when Draco held that last letter in his hand at the end. I thought nooooooooooooo! Thank you for not breaking my heart. This was so interesting and unusual. Great!