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Voice of Truth by Ginny_W

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: *Complete* After years of living on the run for the murder of Albus Dumbledore, Severus Snape is captured by Aurors. Hermione must now try to convince Harry of Snape's innocence.

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/26/06 Title: Chapter 8: Tell A Different Story

Ohhhh lovely! I really liked Hermione and Snape's relationship. I'm so relieved it was a happy ending!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad that you liked it. I try to have happy endings... or at least semi-happy endings in my stories. :) ~Ginny

Masters and Servants by HogwartsHoney

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Several months after Dumbledore's death Harry tracks down Snape to even the score, but what transpires is far from expected, for either of them.

Winner of the 6th round of the Multifaceted Awards in category Desire
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/18/06 Title: Chapter 5: Unwinding

Oh i really liked it, I love Snape, it's time he had a bit of happiness!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I too adore Snape because he\'s such an enigma, and that just makes him much more fun to play around with. I think that both he and Harry deserve happiness, even in the midst of war.

Broken Enigma by Tygerlily

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: In a post war Hogwarts Hermione discovers a devastating secret that shakes her world and causes her to take a step back and re-evaluate everything within her life.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Shattered Stars

Oooh i really liked this. You know what, I accidently read the 2nd chapter first by mistake, then when i noticed the 1st chapter i read that, and it actually works really well when read in that order!!

Author's Response: lol, well I would hope so since the first chapter is supposed to come before the second. ^_^ I\'m glad you like the story!

Alive Once More by Nostalgic128

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione is lonely and sorrowful after the war has ended. Her closest friends died in battle and she is now alone. She has immersed herself in her work and studies.
At the War Anniversary, Severus Snapes decides to approach her, being an admirer of her achievements. And therefore, a great friendship begins to unfold...and maybe something more.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like it! great start, i especially like the way you describe what they are thinking.

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this. It would e great if you keep Snape quite stern and serious even though he's falling in love with Hermione, and not make him all lovey dovey

Colors by Orm Irian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: HG/SS romance—a bit dark. Addiction is a frightening thing, but it doesn’t have to be lonely…
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

Ooh this is great, I love the idea about their special bond. Have you read the fanfic called 'Master of Enchantment' by Subversa? It also concentrates on a special rare powerful bond between HG and SS, I think you'll like it.

Author's Response: Yes, Master of Enchantment is one of my favorites. Subversa\'s current WIP His draught of delicate poison is also excellent. Thanks for reviewing.

A Slip of the Tongue by Ginny_W

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Ron wonders why he and Hermione have yet to start a romantic relationship and he takes drastic measures to find out.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 09/10/06 Title: Chapter 3: To Tell the Truth

Ohhh I loved this bit:

'....and it left her curious how lonely it would be to always doubt the words of others'

Author's Response: :D I love reading what people liked the most. Thank yoU!

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 09/10/06 Title: Chapter 8: The Truth Without Veritaserum

Ooooh this is wonderful! I loved this bit:

"I would like to know what you think of me.”

This girl truly needs to learn something about Slytherin subtlety....


Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Dreams Can Come True...Even Unexpected Dreams by snapemylove

Rated: Professors •
Summary: It is Hermione and Severus' wedding day. They each wander down memory lane contemplating on how they've reached this day.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione

This was WONDERFUL!!! I absolutely loved it, so touching! Grrr now I've got to wait until my bloomin computer will let me read the next chapter!!

Umbrellas by Hidden Magril

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter was always facinated by umbrellas. Implied HD slash oneshot. Companion piece to Small Swift Birds.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 06/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhh so lovely. I felt so sad for wee Harry making all those umbrellas.

Unknown by RedheadedWeasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This a poem I wrote in payment for a banner. It was suppose to describe the grounds of Hogwarts, but it does so much more than that.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 08/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Unknown

Lovely words =) this bit is my favourite:

'Stopping to survey the once beautiful/

now disturbing grounds she conjured/

images of the former to her brain.'

Very evocative images, I imagine it to be Hermione =). Lovely poem! This is the best I can come up with:

My name is Harry Potter

I'd like to be an otter

I'd swim and splish

with all the fish

And then get stuck on the last line because I can't find anything that rhymes properly.

Oh well.
It was nice while it lasted.
I'll leave the poetry to you!! xxxxxxxxx

Author's Response: And no one would ever bother. Eh, it doesn\'t exactly rhyme with Potter and otter but its close enough! Thank you very much for the kind words. That is one of my favorite verses too, because it is really the only place where we have any inkling of who the narrator could be. Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: Unknown

Hehee good one! I've changed the Harry Potter is an otter poem, tell me what you think hehehee

My name is Harry Potter

I wish I was an otter

I'd live, I think,

In Hagrid's sink

Because the lake's much hotter!

Oh dear.... I think I should really lie down....

Author's Response: Very nice. I\'ll get Madam Pomfrey to bring round a nice cold pack to put on your head while you lie down.

Rivalry by orange_balloon

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Rival or not, Draco knows what he really wants. After years of waiting and wanting in silence, he finally gets his chance.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Rivalry - one shot

Ohh that was great! I really liked your descriptions. In the sentence at the beginning, ("Keeping an eye on the competition" as his excuse), it might fit better if you put 'was' instead of 'as'. A wee typo a few lines from the end: 'Draco realized quite suddenly that they both wanted to same thing.'
I really enjoyed the dialogue, especially this bit: “I grew up years ago, Malfoy. You were there."
I loved the way you described Harry when he walked into the Trainer's room. I thought Phwoarrrr!
Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to point out the typos (whoops!). Not everyone thinks of that. I appreciate it!

I wanted to keep the dialogue quick and natural. Draco and Harry don\'t have deep conversations. They would hardly start that up just because they\'re both looking for a snog and a grope! I\'m glad you thought it worked. Hee, I\'m also glad you liked Harry\'s description. I wanted it to seem like the Harry we already know but grown up. He is a bit phwoarr sometimes, isn\'t he? :D

Making Up for Lost Time by athene

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It had been two years since the final battle.. two years since Hermione Granger was thought to be dead my the wizardng world.. Thus, being 'shocked' would be an understatement when Severus came across a Miss Hermy in a remote Welsh village, whose unmistakanable brown hair hasn't change one bit..
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Her Request

Ooooh i love this! I like your Snape - he's always a brilliant character to read when written well. I'd love to see him getting jealous of all Hermione's admirers! That would scare him to death!

A Year in the Life of a Charms Professor by madamsnape

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ten years after the defeat of Voldemort, Hermione Granger is a Charms Professor at Hogwarts. As the anniversary of the Final Battle approaches, she finds herself dealing with unresolved grief and the return of Severus Snape.

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my, how sad! Oh poor Hermione.

The bit about George was so sad. Poor him. I think you meant 'role' instead of 'roll' there.

I loved this bit:

The older woman took her cue and said nothing about the name. No matter how many years would pass, some things were still unspeakable, and Ron Weasley’s death at the hand of Bellatrix Lestrange was one of them.

It must be so difficult for Hermione to be constantly reminded of him.

That last sentence was so heartbreaking.

First Day of My Life by Slian Martreb

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The pressures of war can either bring lovers closer together through trust or force them apart through fear and suspicion. When it looks like it's starting to become the former, Remus takes matters into his own hands.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day of My Life

Ohhh I hope they manage to work it out!

I loved dome of your descriptions, like:

'weaving their intricate dance around one another in their attempts to get dressed'

'the movement of his hand through the air weighted down, as though he is trying to swim through water'


'they have already separated their bodies from one another and the tangle of sleep'

Really lovely!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad that you enjoyed it!

Mourning by Cadence Kismet

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Remus is sitting in Grimauld place after the veil, remembering his friends in all their glory. THIS IS REMUS/SIRIUS. If that bothers you, be warned now. Don't complain to me.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

Oh no poor poor Remus, I feel so sorry for him. How sad....

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

I just reviewed but I forgot to say I really liked the subtlety of the description of Remus and Sirius' relationship. Because although nothing overt was said, and there was no mention of them actually being together, it leaves you guessing.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!! I really appreciate your lovely response! Is there anything you think could do better?

Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

I just reviewed but I forgot to say I really liked the subtlety of the description of Remus and Sirius' relationship. Because although nothing overt was said, and there was no mention of them actually being together, it leaves you guessing.

Author's Response: This was a really nice positive review, and I want you to know that I liked it just as much the second time. ;) You can never have too many nice reviews.

Big Mistakes Lead to a Wonderful Christmas by Emily_the_Poet

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Maybe mistakes aren't so horrible after all. Hermione discovers this as Christina Warbeck sings over the radio, Sarah, her daughter, dances around the tree in excitement, and the man she loves arrives home after a long day's work.
Reviewer: qwerty83 Signed
Date: 12/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhh how sad but sweet. I hope Harry and Hermione are happy together!