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Moonlight and Shadow by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Tonks' world has fallen into shadow. Voldemort has returned, the Order of the Phoenix has risen, and Sirius is slowly drowning in memories and Firewhisky. Tonks needs more than determination to fight the darkness. She needs Remus.

Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: House of Shadow

I like this story a lot, your characterizations are great, I especially love Sirius.

All I really wanted to say was that I love the way you describe Harry through Nymphadora's point of view. I know he's not mentioned very much, but still, it made me see Harry in a different light. I don't know if this makes any sense, but I like him more than I used to, I just felt so much more sympathetic towards him after reading your (Tonks') take on things.

Thanks for the great fics!

Author's Response: It makes perfect sense and all depends on the point of view, doesn\'t it? In my D/G stories, you wouldn\'t like Harry much, because Draco has about as objective a view of the Boy Wonder as The Chosen One has of him! :D

I\'m so happy you love Sirius. I think he deserves to have such an integral role that when he\'s gone, it leaves such a gaping hole, Shadow of Grief is the only way to describe it.

Alyssa Lies by Katty Wood

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Songfic based on the song Alyssa Lies by Jason Michael Carroll. Ron reflects on his relationship with his angel, Leah, and her new friend Aylssa.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 03/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Alyssa Lies


Just wanted to say that, even though I know the song and knew how it would end, I still had tears in my eyes when I was finished reading.

That was a great first fic! I enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much. My first review! I was so happy when I saw this I was jumping around. I\'m sorry you cried but sometimes its good to cry. Thanks again! ~Katty

The Last Laugh by KalHoNaaHo

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Behind her pretty face lies an even prettier tongue used carefully, charmingly, milked to the last drop.

Narcissa wears a mask of lies and dances through life. One-shot.

Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Laugh

What a beautiful, and at the same time sad story! I love it. Narcissa is one of the characters in the books that I really want to know more about, and I love the way you presented her. I really enjoyed the mention of Andromeda and her kindness, it was just, (how do I explain it?)...well, I just really liked it! Thanks for the great story.

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for the wonderful review!

Too Much is Never Enough by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Severus wasn't a white knight content to be ennobled by the purity of his affection. He felt more like a black knight, greedy to possess his lady fair. Although he was willing to terrorise peasants and burn villages to complete his quest, could he slay the dragon of pride to make a romantic gesture?

Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed reading this story, and the one that comes before it. I love your portrayal of Tonks, she's cool (I'm also reading Moonlight and Shadow) and believable.

While infrequent, the interactions between Snape and Tonks mentioned in the books has always made me wonder if there was something 'there' at some point. Whatever that 'something' could've been I have no idea, but I like reading about my two favorite characters in the same story.

Author's Response: In the R/T series, the something \'there\' is her grudging awareness that Snape has a sexy voice...and his reluctant amusement over it. They\'ll develop a friendship of sorts (snarky vs. smart mouthed) in the HBP story, but this will be the only dimension in which never-admitted admiration turns into a love affair.

Thank you for loving Tonks and enjoying the story! :)

Rat by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "If he really is a rat, it won't hurt him," said Remus in PoA. How did he know?

Written for the Peter one-shot challenge, prank prompt, by Vindictus Viridian of Ravenclaw House. Humor warning.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 04/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: In Student's Clothing

I really enjoyed the story. It's nice to see Peter presented as something other than an incompetant lackey.

It would be interesting to see what sort of reaction an oversized rat would get from unsuspecting Slytherins!

Author's Response: Thanks! I agree; that could be a mighty interesting moment coming on.

Vertigo by Lioness06

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily liked stability and security in her life. As Lily enters into her seventh year at Hogwarts, she’s eager to be surrounded once again by the same friends, students, classes, professors, and rules. Instead she finds her thoughts in disorder and feelings toward a particular Gryffindor student whirling dizzyingly around in her mind. It all started, and where this story begins, at the end of Lily’s sixth year where an unexpected conversation brings to light new information.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Per Aspera

I just wanted to say that I love the story! I like the way the realtionship between James and Lily is changing and developing. The characters are great, I think you portray them very realistically. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Yay, you finally had chance to read the other chapters :) I really tried to think it through before writing it all how I wanted the relationship between Lily and James to change and develop, so I\'m glad it transfers into my writing very realistically. Thank you for reviewing!

Her Broken Wings by Pepper Imp

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Carmen Isabella Reid has come back to school for her fifth year. But she finds that the school isn't as enjoyable as it used to be: Carmen's growing feelings for the resident Potions Master are getting harder to conceal...

Part 1 of my "See the Sky" Trilogy

Rated for later chapters.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 06/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Clipped Wings


Just wanted to stop by and say that I really enjoyed this chapter.

Carmen seems like a great character!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I hope that you\'ll stick around to read the rest!

To Make Stone Blush by coppercurls

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Selina, a third year Slytherin wakes up one day to discover she is bleeding. Convinced death is imminant, there is only one person she can talk to- her Head of House, Professor Snape.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: To Make Stone Blush

That was a great story! I pretty much echo what the other reviewers said! Selina is a cute character!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I did like Selina as a character. I started out with her being a little too innocent, but I think the way things turned out with Millicent helped her turn out as a much more satisfactory Slytherin. Thanks again.

Never Enough by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Albus Dumbledore lost everyone he loved, and he knows that, without them, nothing will ever be enough.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Never Enough

Wow! What a powerful story! I always thought that Dumbledore wasn't being completely honest when he told Harry what he saw in the mirror, but I never gave it much thought. Now that I've read your fic I can't imagine him seeing anything other than what you've written! It really makes sense! :)
(PS enjoy DH)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D Hehe. *goes to email you back*. Enjoy DH too!!! I think we *all* will, although I\'m feeling sick all the same.

Half Memories by rev02a

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Remus and Sirius share an awkward cup of tea.
One shot set during GOF.
Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 02/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Half Memories


[p]I really liked this story! I've never really thought of how Remus and Sirius' first meeting after all thoses years would have been like. I think the way you've portrayed it was excellent! I imagine it would've been incredibly uncomfortable and awkward at first.[/p]

Reviewer: Tallulah Signed
Date: 02/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Half Memories

Heh heh, sorry about my last post, I thought I had to use formatting.

Anyway, it really was an excellent story and I think it was very well written. I liked all the subtle little references and nuances to expressions, reactions, movements.

Author's Response: Thanks!