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The Moon Divides by Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 133]

Summary: COMPLETE!

(AU Fic) Two twins named Remus and Rachael Lupin have been inseperable for the eight years they've been on this Earth. But one fateful trip into the forest has changed all of that.

Excerpt from Chapter Twenty Three - A Second Chance

Professor Lupin walked over and sat down at the foot of his daughter’s bed.

“How are you?” he asked, watching his daughter carefully.

“Fine,” she answered, although she could have been better.

“How could you-,”

“Please dad,” Rachael cut him off. “Sirius already gave me the ‘how could you’ lecture.” Professor Lupin smiled.

“Did he now?”

“Yes and he got through to me pretty well.”

“Good, I just hope you know never to do something like that again.”

“I’m not going to, Mum’s not worth it.” Professor Lupin clicked his tongue.

“You can’t say that,” he said quietly, getting up and heading for the door. “Everyone deserves a chance to change. Just as you tried to prove that to your mother, one day she’s going to prove it to you. Everyone deserves a second chance.”


*Warning, some mental abuse and later a little physical, nothing terribly bad, just a warning*

Nominated for 2006, 2008, 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Dark/Angsty Fic

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 126939 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 09/02/06


Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 09/04/06 Title: Chapter 33: My Daughter

*waiiillll sniff, sniff* I loved it!! Evrey thing make's sence now!! whyed Remes have to die?? Well any way I loved how you ended it!! This last chapter was written so good!! I can't belive the story is over...i'm going to miss it! So you are righting a seagle?? I hope so!


Author's Response: Yep, the sequel will be up eventually. I\'m glad everything makes sense now and you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/31/06 Title: Chapter 32: The Bite

O.K. i was doing some re-reading and I think that mabey Remus proubley would have been alot more upset that he bit someone. It just did not seem like he cared that much, and in the books he expresed his fear of harming a student, or any one else. I can't wait for the next chappie. This chapter was cofussting but good because it macks readers want to come back and read more so that they can see how it all end up, therefor clearing the confussion.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/28/06 Title: Chapter 32: The Bite

Wow...confussing...so Lily is Racheals daughter?? And Siruises daughter?? And some how they lost her? Well i cant wait for the next capeter!! (is it the last one?? I really enjoyed reading this story!)


Author's Response: Yep the next chapter is the last one *tear*

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 07/06/06 Title: Chapter 25: Abuse of a Different Kind

oh wow. that was.....very good, you wrote with such emotion that I could feel it running through me and I personitly wanted to use the crucies curse on Mrs. Lupin. One thing though, what exactly did Rachael write to her mom?

Author's Response: Something just really nasty, a little of its explained in the next chapter, but not too much. Let\'s just say that the part not mentioned contained some profanity.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 07/06/06 Title: Chapter 26: There's No Bright Side

this.....chapter.....must.....get....vailed.........and im still wondering about the dream.....THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: The dream sequence is explained in the final chapter so there are three more chapters before you find out what happened.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 30: The Past and Present

I liked it!! I hope that Sirius and Rachael get back together...i cant wait for the next update!!

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 30: The Past and Present

I liked it!! I hope that Sirius and Rachael get back together...i cant wait for the next update!!

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 06/24/06 Title: Chapter 21: A Punch for an Insult

ERR stpiud James, get over your self. Any ways I wanted to say that i have not been revieing cuzz the last review i sent on the chappie Siruius Speaks Out, well i did not read that chappie, i was on chappie 12 but i reviewed on the most recent chapter because i thought people woud see it better. Any ways ive barly been able to keep up with you cause uv been updateing so fast, witch is one of the many things i like about you. I wonder what Rachael is wanting/ going to do. And poor Remus i hope that the next chapter is in his point of view. Any ways UPDATE PLZ!!

Author's Response: Yeah James get over yourself! And I only update fast because this has been done for so long. Anyway, I\'m glad you still like my fic:)

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 30: The Past and Present

YEA!! The next chappie is almost here!! I cant wait!

Author's Response: Yes it\'s coming, although it had to be chopped in half since it exceeded the word maximum by 35 words. So you\'ll get an extra chapter for this.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 07/12/06 Title: Chapter 26: There's No Bright Side

*sniff* poor Remes and and Racheal.....i really liked this chapter and now i have another quistion...how did evrey one find out about Raceas?? u proubly wont tell me but......its worth a try... :) this was diffently one of ur better chapters. update soon!!

Author's Response: Yeah, you\'re right, I\'m not going to tell. Okay I will... since its not really explained, something about stupid reporters and the Daily Prophet....

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 9: Forgotten

AWWWW poor Rachael and Rachael dad .

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/15/06 Title: Chapter 29: Betrayal and Memories

*sniff* *loud claping* i loved it!! Im so sorry that I have not been reveiwing for the last couple of chapters...but school is almost here, my competer brooke and we had a vaction...all sorts of things..and im sorry that I acitdently earesed your story form my favs. I was trying to earse a diffrent story that has not updated in a while...After you done writting this are you planning on writing more?? I hope you are..mabey a Lily and James...or some other maurders area story..keep up the good work!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Your computer broke? That stinks, but at least you got it working. Eww school, it\'s coming for me too. Well I do have another Marauder\'s fic up right now, and there\'s a sequel for this.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 07/01/06 Title: Chapter 24: A Chance to Explain

EEERRR i need to know what the next chappie "a diffrent kind of abuse" is about.....hmmm i think that it had somethig to do with Rachaels dream....hmm im trying to remember, does there mom have blue eyes, mabey she was seeing the future... PLEASE UPDATE SOON thanks!!!

Author's Response: Nope her mom has green eyes. All the Lupins have green eyes. And the dream sequence will be explained.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 06/17/06 Title: Chapter 11: Any Other Way

:) yea now all of the ather Mauders Know Remus's and Rachael secorts!! very good chapter.

poor Lily :) i wonder if she will ever be able to remember....

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 07/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: That Fateful Day

NOOO there is only three mored chapters left? i thought that u would write untain there 7th year!!!!! u must!!!!!!

Author's Response: Well there are four counting the one waiting to be validated. But don\'t worry, there\'s a sequel to it that involves what happens in the last chapter.

Author's Response: Wait no, scratch that, there are six chapters left counting the one waiting to be validated.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 23: A Second Chance

wOW YOU update fast!!! :) i cant wait for the next chappie, stpiud Rachael!!!! I wonder if Anna will finally get over her self just like James did. Wow i hope you update soooooooooonnnnnnn....weeee i feel really hyper, keep up the good work!!!

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 31: Three Small Words

Three small words...I love you...but how is going to say them?? Her mom...i dont think so...Suiris?? hum i wonder...

Author's Response: Yeah I made that title too obvious, but that was the intention. I wonder who\'s gonna say them....

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 31: Three Small Words

AAWWWW that was proubley my most favioret chappie!! Its was so nice and fluffy!!! I cant wait for the next chapeter!!

Author's Response: This is one of my favorite chapters too. And the next chapter was supposed to be the last chapter, but it somehow exceeded the word limit (even though on Word in was 200 words less) so you get two more chapters instead of one.

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 30: The Past and Present

*cry* why cant we read it yet?? I miss your story!!

 
Reviewer: padfootnflawks Signed
Date: 06/14/06 Title: Chapter 17: Sirius Speaks Out

Why isint anyone else re
veiwing??? This story is great and im suprised Potter has not given up own it because of your guyses lack of support!! This story is wonderfull and I think that Potter desevis a really good award so one last message IF YOU ARE READING THIS PLEASE REVIEW POTTER IS A WONDERFULL AUTHER AND IS ON MY LIST OF FAVIOREST AND I KNOW THAT IM NOT THE ONLY ONE READING SO REVIEW!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow I\'m flattered.

 
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