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thats so awesome, dude you gotta update!!!!!!!!! awesome! bravo! olay!
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
this story is so awesome, keep up the great work!
i liked this chapter alot, it showed the other side of Lily that isn't in alot of stories.
omg that was funny. I hope you post more soon!
jeez i wonder who she is, it's killing me inside! please update soon!
yipee! they are back together! awwww jeez i have tears in my eyes!
wowie, that chapter was so good! I can't wait for the next one!
please, we are all dieing here, new chapter ASAP!
OMG that chappie was awsome awsome awsome! i'll have you know that yesterday, I was so into ur story that i was late 4 school! but u can take that as a compliment! ; )
aww man, only three chapters left! can't wait 4 that sequel!
my reaction when i found ot you had posted another chapter was somewhat like my and my friend Nidale's reaction when our homeroom teacher said JKR finished the 6th book: jumping up and down, screaming with joy until the people in the room next to us had to close the door.
keep up the great work, and I'm sure Nidale is going to be extatic that you've written more, she is a big fan.
Author's Response: that review made my day! what is your friends pen name or does she just read along with you?
i loved this chapter, it kinda showed the other side of james. in a bunch of stories i've read (and written) it's kind of like james does absolutely nothing to upset Lily, but I like how you made him kind of brush her off. not many people do that.
awww man please update, dude! sry about the dude thing, my friend got me hooked on calling people that. (she even called the pizza guy 'dude'!) well, I'm off to make my lunch for band! i love playing the flute! but it's-- okay, you know what? i'm rambling again. c ya, and please update!
Author's Response: Never apologize for using the word Dude. Dude is the most majestic word in the English language besides pudding. Pudding is a good word too. Dude happen to be my favorite word. I think I even slipped it in my story. Oops a daisy.
EEEEEK PLEASE DUDE YOU MUST UPDATE *READER TWITCHES* THIS STORY ROCKS!
this story is amazing! this is the story that inspired me to write a James and Lily story of my own, which I hope you read. Keep up the great work and update soon!
BTW- I could actually feel tears coming to my eyes when Dumbledore said that Halle is going to be cured!
Author's Response: aw..i'm blushing. i'll update probably tonight if i get enough reviews. i did read your story and it was excellent so far.
this story is just so... so... awesome!
NOOO i can't believe she said yes! no! u have an awesome fic going right now. every morning i'll be at my computer, reading the latest chapter of this or potters charm and my mom will just be like "potter stories again?" pleease write more soon!
I'd just like to add that I loved this story so much that I tipped my friend off about it and now she loves it too. Keep up the great work!
this story is so great. hmm i wonder how they get out of here? magic mirrors?
oo yay, i'm first! i loved this chapter, it was really sweet. i hope you update really soon!