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Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/02/05 Title: None

My name will tell you my favorite charcater. Apart from that, this story is funny and fun. Please update soon.

The Past The Present and The Future by kr1st1na

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The final battle has now come and its time for Harry to face Voldemort in the fight for surival
Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 07/18/05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How will you change this story now that Dumbledore cannot be in it? Will you edit him out. If you will, while your at it, edit the C.B. back in, (Im joking, dont take it seriously, I think).

Author's Response: I'm not changing it at all its just going to be one of many pre-HBP stories that is wrong

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/04/05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok, I finally found out how to send revies, so here goes... *sniff* I miss The Creevey Brothers. The poor things, they were so young, so naive. They battled for Hogwarts not knowing they'd die. There, I expressed myself, *sniff*

Author's Response: yeah that is sad, but its a fact so many people die young when war is involved and the loss of life is just horrible.


Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/02/05 Title: None

Nice Story. Wonderful, Absolutely Hilarious. Please update soon.


Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/16/05 Title: None

It's...ok. I liked the theme song and the episode you got the script from, I've seen it. lol

The Final Battle by lefty

Summary: "He knows the prophecy,Potter." Lucius' sneering voice traveled through the darkness. "The full prophecy, and he's waiting for you." After Hogwarts; Harry is about 29. Not really that dark at the beginning, but there will be a few character deaths by the end. Lots and lots of action and general but-kicking.
Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: Message

It's ok...Draco is a born fighter, but its a bit too OOC. Draco would NEVER marry Hermione and would NEVER kill his dad. If I'm right by reading summary's of other chapters, you killed Ron as well, didn't you? I think I'll give you a...uh...erm...6?

Author's Response: well... it might have helped if you had actually read the chapters and not just the summaries. no, i did not kill Ron and besides Draco being a good guy, i believe my story is very cannon. But, (sigh), thanks for the interest.

Spirits in the Future by JessicaH

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Voldemort attacks the Potters, James and Lily try to protect their beloved baby boy. Then suddenly they're in a house they do not know. Harry isn't with them and they don't know what happened. Where are they? And who are the redhead children running down the stairs? Why have they been sent? The story is placed in the future, years after Voldemort's death, but danger is still lurking. Features Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.

Joint winner in the genfic category of the Multifaceted Fanfiction Awards
Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 10/27/05 Title: Chapter 9: Double Potions

I also think Luna/Colin is a nice match. You're like me. I was thinking of that kind of relationship for ages, because they're both so weird, they kill the hell out of me when I laugh. "I don't think you should be an Auror Harry. They're part of the Rotfang Conspiracy, I thought everyone knew that. They're working to bring down the Ministry of Magic down from within using a combination of Dark Magic and Gum Disease."

Even harder to avoid than Gilderoy was Colin Creevey, who seemed to have memorized Harry's time table."

Colin is my favorite character and Colin/Luna is ONE of my favorite relationships. Anyway, must stop giving quotes, before it becomes a habit. I just couldn't resist telling you, nice idea.


Author's Response: I'm glad you agree. One day I might even post my Colin/Luna fic on here :D

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 10/27/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Burrow

hmmm, It's not like I hate the story, but has it ever crossed your mind to have one of Harry's children named after the man who sacrificed himself for the family. Why not name ONE of his children James? That's what I'd do. Oh well, never expecrt the best. 7/10

Author's Response: Actually, Harry did name one of his children after his father - Sirius middle name is James, which I bring up in the seventh chapter. The reason why I chose to only use it as his middle name was because 1) Lily and James shouldn't be brother and sister, and 2) Harry may love the image of his father, but he was closer to Sirius who also gave his life for him. As for Christopher - his second name is Arthur, after all Ginny had to have some say in the matter as well.


Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 07/02/05 Title: None

Ah...I merely got bored through the third chapter, who said I didn't like the summary?

I dont intend to be funny either, I'm just giving some advice.

Author's Response: It was just the use of "lol", I figured you didn't intend to be funny. And I thought you meant the summary needed to be more exciting, with quotes and the like? That's why I mentioned the summary, because I thought you didn't like it.

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/30/05 Title: None

Er...I haven't exactly read this chapter. I got bored very soon, lol.

Sorry, but you need to make it a bit more entertaining. Put quotes on your summary. Quotes that might catch readers attention.

Author's Response: Why'd you bother to read this story if you didn't like the summary? And I don't think the fact that you got bored very soon is funny. Nonetheless, thank you for reviewing.

The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?

Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.
Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 8: Anyone Who Thinks Fights Have Rules Is Delusional

AWESOME! That was the funniest story I've ever read on MNFF. Please update soon. Not once have I read a completed Humor fiction. It was so damn funny. I nearly died laughing, espeically when you killed Malfoy!

1,000,000/10. (Too bad that doesn't ake sense. Just call it a 10/10.

Author's Response: If you've learned one thing from my story, it's that I don't care if it makes sense! I'll take the million out of ten, thanks. And then I shall rule the world!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 7: Weekend At Draco's

Snape is so suspicious... he must suspect I'm... If you finished that sentence, would it by any chance give something of the ending away? Like Snape, I am also suspicious. Arbitare is not as dumb as we think. He's a Death Eater. I realized this after reading this for a second time.

Author's Response: I'm going to spoil something. SPOILER! Ok, now that we can talk, Arbitrare isn't a Death Eaer. Sorry. But you're right, what was missing in that sentence would spoil the ending. END SPOILERS!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 8: Anyone Who Thinks Fights Have Rules Is Delusional

Ok, I just need to say that even though you hinted Snape isn't dead, I wouldn't be surprised if he is. I have read enough to realize that no matter how much an author likes a charater, that character can still die. It doesn't make him/her safe.

Author's Response: Have you been watching a bit much 24 lately? There's a review earlier where I told somebody I would never tell Snape to drop dead. This is code for Snape will not die in this fanfic. In fact, he can do stuff that will amaze and astound!

Harry Potter and the Darkest Hour by Stormy

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry is entering his 6th year at Hogwarts. NEWT classes, Quidditch and a new DADA teacher all add up to a seemingly normal year. But what is Voldemort up to now? Where are his Death Eaters? Tortures and killings have started, but how much of it is all just a decoy in the great scheme of things? This time, Harry must leave the comfort of his friends and face his darkest fear.

Featured story April, May and June 2006 and nominated for the Quill Awards!

The final chapter is now up! The sequel has been submitted! Please R/R!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/26/05 Title: Chapter 17: A Second Departure

You just got yourself another 10! How you do this, I have no idea. This is just like how JKR would write. I do think however, that Dumbledore is not being very nice to Snape. After everything Snape has done, Dumbledore lies to him. It's not nice.

I also see that you happen to like Euan Abercrombie, otherwise, you wouldn't have put him in the story so much. He's in my story too!

As usual, your several steps ahead. How do you get so many readers?

Author's Response: Thank you! That's a hell of a compliment *blushing*, and I'm really happy you seem to be enjoying it!

Euan isn't really a favorite character of mine, he was just a named character JK mentioned and I thought he'd be ok as the replacement Chaser, that's all. As for Snape and Dumbledore, Dumbledore's not lying really, he's just not telling Snape the whole truth which, incidentally, Snape isn't doing either.

As for how I get so many readers; I've got around 1500 reads for the first chapter and generally, people do seem to be reviewing. Maybe add a footnote at the end of each chappie saying thanks to those who review...?Hope that helps a bit!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/27/05 Title: Chapter 18: The Darkest Hour

Very nice, another 10.

We now know where Snape's loyalties lie...with DUMBLEDORE. Are you going to have a sequel ot this story? It's a shame for this story to end.

It was a very good story and I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: How do you know that 'rescuing' Harry isn't just a cover up...?

Thanks for the review though, (and the 10!) and there is a sequel coming very soon which I hope you'll enjoy!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/18/05 Title: Chapter 15: A Difficult Decision

Come on, would Harry really want Snape dead? Snape is one of my favorite teachers and I'm happy Voldemort doesn't believe Lucius. Will we find out about Snape in the next chapter then?

Author's Response: Well, Harry was angry with him but no, he doesn't really want Snape dead - it was more just saying it out of anger; he didn't really mean it. He was just repeating what Ron said earlier when he was joking with Harry. And what do you mean by find out about Snape in the next chapter? Which side he's on? If that's what you mean then the answer's no, sorry.

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/14/05 Title: Chapter 5: Going Home

That was a wonderful song. I rarely hear excellent rhymes like that. Where did you get that, I was amazed. Very nice, another 10.

Author's Response: Thanks for the 10! And I didn't get it anywhere, I made it up! I've also written one for the sequel too - I hope you will like that as muchwhen it's posted as well!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/28/05 Title: Chapter 19: Truth, Lies and Curses

WONDERFUL... I hope you know though, that Harry would never tell Snape about the prohecy. I am sad about McGonagall, who'd be headmistress now. Will the sequel take place in seventh year.

That was a wonderful story and I am giving you a 10. If this doesn't raise your rating to 5 stars, I dont know what will, but to me, from 1-10, this is 100, (even though there would be no such thing.)

This is one of the most greatest stories I have ever read. Very Nice.

Author's Response: Why wouldn't Harry tell Snape the Prophecy? Snape just saved his life (for the second time) and he was planning to try and kill Voldemort himself, which cannot work. Harry's not stupid; it's often much easier telling something like that to someone who you trust but you're less freindly with than close friends and family. Maybe you're right, but I felt that, in the circumstances, Snape was the best person for Harry to tell.

Anyway, I really pleased you like it and I hope you enjoy the sequel as much!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/29/05 Title: Chapter 20: The End of the Beginning

Now that was good. A good bye kiss was a very nice time to put it. Well done indeed.

I notice Dumbledore's speech was simular to his speech in Goblet of Fire though.

I am also planning to make a FF version of Book 6, you have inspired me so much. Any advice?

I think you did very nicely and I am giving you yet another 10. This will mean that for every chapter I reviewed for, I gave you a 10, except for the chapter when I complained about too much kissing though, when I gave a 9. This is a 10 and will always be a 10.

Your Fan,

-Colin Creevey-

Author's Response: I'm pleased I got the kiss right this time!

I know that Dumbledore's speech was similar to the one in GOF but he is the same character and his speech about Cedric would, in essence, be very similar to the one in he would do later for Prfoessor McGonagall. I hope you thought it was good overall though.

Tips for writing a book 6. Umm...

Try and make the story as original as you can and do your best not to copy anyone else's ideas / use overused plotlines.

I try and write for me first and foremost but do your best to keep in mind the readers as well. Although you can picture a place or whatever really well, make sure your readers can as well by using enough descriprion. Saying that though, don't do overkill on description or the story will slow down too much.

Use twists when it's suitable to but make sure you give a reason for it:ie, by all means have Hermione suddenly getting a 'P' on all her work but give a decent reason for it.

Those are just a few suggestions and good luck with writing your own book 6!

Thanks for all the 10s (and the 9s!) and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it;
~ Stormy x

Reviewer: Colin Creevey Signed
Date: 06/13/05 Title: Chapter 2: Trials and Suffering

Poor Alex, he was just a small boy. Dont you have feeling for small people who have their whole lives ahead of them? I mean, that was so cruel of Voldy to do something like that. I put all the blame on him and the rest goes to me for giving you a rating of 10 FOR ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ. Honestly, nice plot development, haven't sees much stories better than this except the ones in my favorites.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! And I used Alex purely to show just quite what levels Voldemort would sink to. I'm so pleased you're enjoying it and *blushing* thanks for your really great compliment! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! And I used Alex purely to show just quite what levels Voldemort would sink to. I'm so pleased you're enjoying it and *blushing* thanks for your really great compliment! :)