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Just another canadian girl trying make sense of the insanity people happen to call university.

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 05/10/05 Title: None

very nice

 

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Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 02/07/05 Title: None

Lets all give one big, satisfied, romantic sigh shall we? That was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. And not to mention hilarious. Loved the bits concering Harry's reaction to the lollipop, justin (poor guy) and flying. I think I'm inspired, must write something, anything. Cheers.

Author's Response: Wow thanks so much Beth. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :0)

Author's Response: PS: To say I've inspired you is such a compliment. Makes me want to write even more. Thanks! *sniffle*

 

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Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 02/07/05 Title: None

This is oh so sweet and sad. Beautifully written too. You capture Hermione's thoughts perfectly, something that I find not many people can do. This piece is absolutely brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Beth! But don't be too sad. YOu'll see that Harry does have *ahem* "those" feelings for Hermione if you'll read the companion POV (Harry's POV, this time), "I Hate Fridays". I think you'll like it. Thanks again!

 

Love's Embrace by mspadfoot89
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 170]

Summary: The story takes place in the seventh year and Voldemort is not yet defeated. While times may get harder and the future darker, Harry and Hermione find comfort in each others arms and Harry finally realizes his love for her. But just how much will they have to endure? Another guy in the way, death, solitude--are these issues unsurpassable? As they both mature, they discover that in a world of destruction and depression it is not easy to survive, both physically and emotionally, that loving is not as simple as it seems. Will their love win above everything?

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 26294 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
02/22/05 Updated: 07/13/06


Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 07/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Indescribable Feelings

This was written rather beautifully. The beginning wasn't slow at all. Every story needs a set up and you've managed to accomplish this perfectly. Harry's inner turmoil isn't OoC at all and the conversation between them flows perfectly. The only negative feed back I can give you concerns the part that states "So thatís how they spent their night..." Starting this sentence with "So" makes it sound as if you're listing things. I think it takes the better part of the narrative out of the story. Other than that everything is absolutely perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you would take the time to leave a review. I'm happy you liked the narrative as that is sometimes one of my weaker points. And also thanks for the suggestion.

 
Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 07/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Indescribable Feelings

This was written rather beautifully. The beginning wasn't slow at all. Every story needs a set up and you've managed to accomplish this perfectly. Harry's inner turmoil isn't OoC at all and the conversation between them flows perfectly. The only negative feed back I can give you concerns the part that states "So thatís how they spent their night..." Starting this sentence with "So" makes it sound as if you're listing things. I think it takes the better part of the narrative out of the story. Other than that everything is absolutely perfect.

 

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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 05/08/05 Title: None

"The street, which had been bustling with human activity just ten minutes beforehand, lay barren, deserted, isolated from the rest of London." Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. This opening line completely had me hooked and I applaud that. Your use of imagery is fantastic. I could actually feel poor Jack's life being sucked away. The package gives that dash of mystery that has me thirsting for more. I guess the only critisism I can give you is the last line: "A fool's hope." I love Lord of the Rings, and I'm sure you may be a fan as well, but since this is more of a cliche, it's not very effective. Other than that, this piece was dark, mysterious and edgy; perfect ingrdients for an opening chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for that i really appreciate it. I am currently changing that line, and yes, i am a gr8 LOTR fan. Thanks again, james

 

E Deus Unum by king
Rated: [Reviews - 145]

Summary: There was once a goofy movie called Clue with a plot that was based on a board game. This movie had several possible endings that were all implausible but they were fun and entertaining. This little yarn is an alternative ending of the Harry Potter series and is offered in the same spirit of fun and entertainment. Of course with themes like love and death itís not all laughs. This story begins in the summer before Harryís sixth year. I began writing it months before reading HBP so youíll have to accept that just about everything in my version of the HP universe is different from JKRís HP universe. (Pretend HBP didnít happen.) In my story Hermione has loved Harry since her third year at Hogwarts. She is terrified by the war. If she doesnít grow up quickly, she might not grow up at all. Since Harry is over his infatuation with Cho Chang, Hermione makes her move and she pulls out all of the stops. Expect some extreme behavior from a girl who throws herself at a project and is under a lot of stress. She still cares deeply about S.P.E.W. OTHER POINTS - Having never heard of a Horcrux, I devised another source of Voldemortís immortality. - I donít like Professor Snape, but Iím not bold enough to make him a real Death Eater. - There is a war on and characters are killed, wounded and tortured, but not Dumbledore. - Iíve made Ron into a much more confident and serious character than the books. This is based on three ideas: war is like chess and Ron excels at that, contact with the brain in the DoM could make Ron more thoughtful, and hanging around with a manly man who works with dragons like Charlie Weasley could help any boy grow up.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 109770 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/23/05 Updated: 08/01/05


Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 07/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Crime and Punishment

Very interesting opening chapter. Your use of description is true to Rowling's style and you capture Harry's thoughts perfectly. The only thing I have a problem with is Percy's reaction to Ron and Ginny. Shouldn't Ginny and Ron be slightest bit uncomfortable around their older brother who's not only shunned their parents but their whole family as well? Other than that your story is awsome. I must read more.

Author's Response: Hi Beth, In my version of the story, which may not be quite the same as JKRís, there has been a real change in the wind. With Fudge having to admit that Voldemort is really back and Dumbledore being Hogwarts Headmaster again and reinstated to the Wizengamot, there is no reason for Percy to want to continue to distance himself from his family. Percy has had something of a change of heart but he is as ambitious as ever.

 

The Old, The New, and The Dead by Shortie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: The same old villain, a new teacher, and someone's going to die. As a new year at Hogwarts begins so does a relationship between friends.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15850 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
06/30/05 Updated: 05/04/06


Reviewer: Beth Brown Signed
Date: 09/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very, very nice. The prologue is very fast paced and exciting. Leaves me glued to the screen and such. Your use of dialogue is simply fantastic and flows effortlessly. I guess the only nogative comment I can give is the idea of Narcissa falling through the curtain. I dunnno, that just didn't click with me. But the writing makes me overlook this. Oh and kudos must be given for Hermione's letter to her parents. Now THAT was heart wrenching. One of the many things done very nicely.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It means alot coming from one of my favorite authors.

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