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Wow! You’ve excelled yourself! (And in very short time too, might I add!) This was very enjoyable! I particularly liked how you worked in the alluded sniffing first year. He was extremely hilarious! And he made a comeback at the end too! You’re very good at working with challenges. I can foresee that I may need to make the next one even harder *evil grin*
You also placed the 3 rumbles/bangs/clashes of thunder or lightning in very nicely! It was like going on a ‘Where’s Wally’ quest trying to find them all. And that made your fic even more enjoyable!
Don’t forget to put the web address of this fabulous attempt on the MNFF forum under the FFFM challenge section! (Yikes! Lots of F’s!) This is really important. If you don’t, I can’t accept it. *Cowers as Fwooper challenger yells “I KNOW!”*
Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing you in future Fwooper challenges!
Author's Response: Thanks:) I hope to have the next chapter up by next wensday, and I think this will only be three chapters long:/
Hmmm... I say Harry requests for all the time in the world to spy on as many pools at any time his little heart desires. =^.^=
Oh! And extra pancakes of Tuesdays. He deserves them. Anyone would after slaving away in Aunt Petunia's garden for weeds. That’s all its good for.
Annnnd... (while I’m in request mode...) Harry should have the chance to tell Uncle Vernon off for his choice of sock color. Mustard yellow.. YUCK! Why would a business man such as himself wear them in the first place!? :P
Author's Response: Good idea. I might put in the sock thing for his request...
YAY! That was both friggen funny and excellente! I'm so happy! Harry has a pool and purple socls! (he deserves them).
I lubbed how Lupin brought Malfoy over then shoved him away and replaced him with Ron. Very hillarious!!!!! And this Ethan sounds like a good kinda guy. I hope you put more of him in there somewhere! :P
Author's Response: Thanks, I am very glad Harry has purple socks and a pool too. :)
Omigod! this is so good! You've developed your original characters soo sooo SO well! Please update immediatly! When are you going to update? lol
Oh wow! there is like a second chapter up... already! I be very pleased with your updating system. Please continue. I wish to see more of it occur in the future. Oh, and thanks for the cliffie at the end of this chapter. You now have me dying to findout what happens. My eyes are now glued to the screen and my brain is plugged into the internet awaiting your return :P