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A Single Step by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: Harry muses about what kind of person he'd be if he wasn't the Boy-Who-Lived. Hermione and Luna think he wouldn't be any different. Harry wants to change the world. Hermione and Luna show him how.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1893 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/01/04 Updated: 11/01/04


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 07/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: N/A (One-Shot)

That was absolutely masterful. Words seem to just flow out of you! The imagery is so real and alive...I feel like I'm there.

Magnificent job. I really enjoyed this,

 

Consumation by Magical Maeve
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 7]

Summary: A little night music for Severus and Maeve. Another offshoot of Daughter of Light...sexual imagery but nothing graphic.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 978 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/13/05 Updated: 04/13/05


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Consumation

This is the first piece I've read by you, and I was in awe. You make the characters so connected with each other, and your way with words is perfect. This was beautiful. I can't wait to read the rest of your works.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the other stories. There are quiet a few with Maeve and Snape.

 

Love and Quidditch by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 59]

Summary:

"I'm no Ravenclaw, but I finally learnt to take no for an answer." When James stops asking Lily out, she tells him that's not Quidditch!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1325 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/05 Updated: 11/17/05


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Love and Quidditch

Lily and James are my OTP, so when I saw this I had to stop and read it. You did a wonderful job characterizing James. His change from being Prank!James to being Mature!James was smooth and natural. Most writers (including me) have a difficulty making the transition seem realistic. Yet, even though James has matured, he didn't lose his playful, teaser side. So I think you did a wonderful job with James and keeping him natural and balanced.


Lily was beautiful. I love how you showed her spunky, clever side but you kept her in character. Lily isn't one to go jumping James' bones in public but she is one to show her feelings and you did a wonderful job here! I'm glad you really showed her thoughts on James and her disapointment with him. She seemed really in tune and natural. Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'ve got a Marauder Era fic in the General cat, Semi Charmed Life that\'s a Sirius romance with a James and Lily subplot you might like, if you ever have a rainy day and want something new to read. Thanks again for reading this story! : )

 

Ariel and The Triwizard Cup by Purplemage
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 255]

Summary: Get inside Ariel Sachs' head as he tries to survive his last year at Hogwarts. The Triwizard Tournament is going to be hosted once again after twenty-three years and Ariel is going to find himself in the middle of it. He soon learns that in love and war anything goes and that things are not always what they appear. A story of jealousy, gossip, teenage hormones and first love. (Rated for later chapters)

QSQ Award for Best Male OC, Ariel Sachs

QSQ Nomination for best Same-Sex Pairing Fic

I can't thank enough my wonderful beta Lys. Without her this fic wouldn't be posible.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Slash

Word count: 40986 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
01/22/06 Updated: 01/04/07


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: September Morning

Okay, I have to leave a review. I stumbled upon this and when I read about Nessa talking about a Puerto Rican guy she met in Miami that did it for me. I'm hooked. *is a proud Puerto Rican*

Your characterization with Nessa is great! Hispanics are loud to the point of obnoxiousness and always speak their mind. I'm really glad you added this to your fics, it gives it a hint of uniqueness. Many authors are afraid to add different ethnicities to thiers, but I believe it just adds flavour!

Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning of a wonderful Year

Okay, I have to leave a review. I stumbled upon this and when I read about Nessa talking about a Puerto Rican guy she met in Miami that did it for me. I'm hooked. *is a proud Puerto Rican*

Your characterization with Nessa is great! Hispanics are loud to the point of obnoxiousness and always speak their mind. I'm really glad you added this to your fics, it gives it a hint of uniqueness. Many authors are afraid to add different ethnicities to thiers, but I believe it just adds flavour!

Great Job

Author's Response: Yay!!!! A fellow hispanic! *huggles* I\'m from Venezuela. I had to had a south American in my fic, at least one, and you\'re right about the being loud thing. hehe. Thank you for the review!!!

 

Amortentia by Cruciatus Love
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 160]

Summary: Merope Gaunt has what seems like a flawless plan to get Tom Riddle to love her. She has everything worked out to the very last drop of Amortentia in his glass each morning. Watch as a country called Romania and a celebration of love takes it's effect on this 'perfect love.'

Written as a Term Challenge: Holidays Abroad submission for Slytherin.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 10936 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/22/06 Updated: 05/16/06


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I love how you began this! The use of the onomatopoeas (sp?) has a great effect and makes the scene more realistic and tanglible. Great job!

Hee, I really like how you portray Tom. My favorite line is when Merope invites him in and he says, "NO!" Every time I read that I giggle. :D

Great job, little sister!

Author's Response: Thanks, big sis. I rather like the moments when Merope freaks out as well. *giggle*

 
Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Another wonderful addition to Amortentia.

Great touch with adding the Romanian in there. I really like the uniqueness it gave to this. You don't see many fics with Romanian in them!

You're description of Amortentia and its effects onnot only Tom but Merope as well are wonderful. Very good job!

Author's Response: Thanks, it took me forever to find a traslator for those lines. I\'m glad you liked them.

 

Barty's Story by Cruciatus Love
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 33]

Summary: Barty Crouch Jr. is willing to give up everything for his master. He would go to any great length do to His bidding.


Follow Barty as he takes his steps through the Quidditch World Cup in GoF. What parts of the story did you miss while reading from Harry's point of view? This is the side of the story that you really care about.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2229 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/23/06 Updated: 05/10/06


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Quidditch World Cup

You've done it again! You always see the most in events, and you see them from a new perspective. This is one of those time, and you did a brilliant job!

Your characterization with Barty Jr. was great! I never imagined him like that but it clicked.

Spectacular!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mari. I rather like Barty Crouch Jr\'s character as well, and I wish that he was written more often. Thanks for the review!

 

The Thoughts of Tabitha by mugglegurl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 334]

Summary: Meet Tabitha, the fourteen year-old daughter of Harry and Ginny Potter. What happens when she finds herself attracted to the son of her father's worst enemy? Along with a set of new characters, and the return of some old ones, this teen will find the meaning of friendship and family.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 28993 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
03/02/06 Updated: 08/07/07


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: New Developments

Just showing some support!
You know how much I love this story!
Keep up the good work; you always do!

-- Mari

Author's Response: -attackles teh Mari- Thank you, darling!

 

It Matches Your Eyes by bittersweet_lullaby
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: I met her on the train ride to Hogwarts. We both got sorted into Hufflepuff, we take all the same classes, and we're best friends. But I've started to feel a little more for Hannah Abbott.



Two friends, both female. One life-changing infatuation that quickly turns to the greatest thing in the world: love. Susan Bones reflects on her life and explores the what-ifs of her relationship with Hannah Abbott.

Categories: Femmeslash Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 1270 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/07/06 Updated: 06/08/06


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 07/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Hey TF! Okay, let me say one thing before I do anything else...I don't read slash at all, but this was beautiful. Everything was so sweet and flowing; it felt natural. Kudos on your wonderful style! This is a unique pairing and I'm glad you're not a afraid to write it! Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Ooh, thanks, Mari! That\'s so sweet. I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. :)

 

Goodbye by Sarakime
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: On the last Hogwarts Express ride home, a certain Slytherin has very regretful thoughts.



Book 6 Disregarded



One-shot.

Check out the banner for this story on my author's page!!!♥

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1377 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/04/06 Updated: 07/07/06


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 08/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Train Ride

That was so emotional; I really liked it! I'm not really a sad ending girl, but I think you pulled this one off masterfully. Wonderful job, and don't write anymore! It's perfect as is! :] *dodges pointy objects being thrown from other reviewers*

Author's Response: Thanks Mari! That really means a lot. :D! Thanks!

 

Summary: The House of Black may look beautifully decorated and filled with life through the eyes of someone who had never lived there, but when two boys have spent their entire childhood suffering the pain their family gave them, this same house looks only melancholy and depressing.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1383 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/21/06 Updated: 07/23/06


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: That Fateful Night

I really enjoyed this piece. You know that Sirius is my favorite character and you did a very good job of portraying his relationship with Regulus (whom I also love).

There just some small spelling errors, but they weren't big. Just thought I'd mention it, but I'm just being nit-picky.
Great! I loved it.

Author's Response: hehe, thanks. I\'m glad to hear that I didn\'t butcher your favourite character for you.

 

A Life Worth Living by lily_evans34
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: On the eve of her wedding, Angelina Johnson is filled with looming regrets, before finally accepting her fate. But when old friends come back, Angelina is faced with a descision that could alter the course of her life. It's only then that she realises that she doesn't have time to be afraid, or live with regrets—after all, she had a life to live.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3397 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/03/06 Updated: 12/11/06


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Life Worth Living


I am not worthy! Rachel, you are spectacular! This piece is beautiful, touching, lovely, better than I could have ever imagined...perfect.



I think this is the first fic I've read of yours. You have an amazing writing style, it's beautiful and flowing. Keep it up!



Thank you so much.
--Mari

Author's Response: Of course you\'re worthy, Mari! If you weren\'t, I would have said \'to hell with this project!\' and gone and watched Gilmore Girls reruns instead of working frantically to turn it in on time! *giggles* I really can\'t tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed it! Did I fulfill the prompt okay? Because, basically, I thought of a plot, wrote it, then chose which one of the possible prompts it best seemed to fit! *dies laughing* Shows how organized I am. Thanks for the praise and review! *endless ♥ s*

 

Summary: Everything is going great for sixth year Ginny Weasley. She has new friends, a long awaited boyfriend, and classes are tolerable. Everything wonderful comes crashing down when she witnesses something that was never suppose to be seen. Now the wrong person is being blamed. Will Ginny confess what she knows and endanger her friends or will she let the wrong person go to blame?







Professors rating is strictly because of chapter 10.



Chapter fourteen is validated and waiting for you to read!

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 20797 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
08/13/07 Updated: 01/09/10


Reviewer: butterflykisses Signed
Date: 09/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Night to Remember

So I'm not usually a big mystery fan (or a big fan of OC's for that matter) but since you're writing this and so far it's acutally really good, I'll keep reading. =)

I really enjoyed how Ginny's surroundings and the murderer. I felt like it was me who was being held and threatened.

Oh and sadness that Parvati had to die, but truly that girl annoyed me just as much as Lavender. >.< Gah.

So great job. You've got me hooked. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad I got you hooked on a fic that you normally wouldn\'t read! I agree, Parvati was very annoying just like Lavender! ~Lexi~

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