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I am a teacher, musician, reader, and avid Harry Potter fan. I am originally from the Midwest and now live a bit farther south. I am thrilled to be a proud member of RAVENCLAW House and enjoyed being a site moderator for a time as well.

I hope you enjoy the many stories and poems I have written. I am proud of them all and appreciate any feedback you might care to leave (in other words, reviews are love!) I've listed them below with a short description since I know trolling through summaries can be tedious. Thanks for reading!

EDIT: Someday I will categorize my stories by genre. Today is not that day. ;)
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Summary: Now in his seventh year, Remus Lupin is a calm and responsible student. His friends know this and often take advantage, knowing that he never takes it to heart.

But sometimes, just sometimes, Moony longs for revenge, especially when Padfoot takes things one step too far.

But Padfoot is wise to Marauder pranks, so for April Fool's Day this year, Moony enlists the help of four girls who are also champing at the bit to humiliate the 'too damn adorable' Sirius Black.

I am Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the April Fool's Day Challenge set in the Great Hall.

Thank you to Alyssa (Harry4lif) and Wendy (Kiley) for their help in beta'ing this tale.

The song featured in this story is Hot Legs by Rod Stewart which was a huge hit in the early part of 1978 and seemed to lend itself very well to Sirius Black!

Disclaimer Sirius and Remus are not mine *sigh* but belong to JK Rowling as do James,Lily and Peter. The Harley-Queens however are my rather fluffy invention.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 6561 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/29/09 Updated: 03/29/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 04/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was such fun! What a great set-up, going all the way back to Remus and Carla getting stung one too many times by Sirius and then plotting to get him back. I thought the song was funny but then at the end when it turned his legs all hot, that was brilliant! I thought you did a fantastic job with all the characters - they all seemed very natural, and their dialogue was fantastic. And I was sort of cheering for Remus and Sarah, are they going to get together?? Wonderful job, good luck in the challenge! ~GIna :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Gina. I'm glad you enjoyed the story but am more pleased you liked my characterisation. I do love the Marauders. I want to write about that gang of girls again so Sarah may get her man ... they're well on the way I think. Your entry, by the way, was wonderful and a worthy winner. Carole xxx

 

Summary: Peter Pettigrew wasn't always a traitor. He was a Marauder, a prankster and a good friend.

Peter Pettigrew wasn't always called Wormtail.

Perhaps, one change led to the other?

Disclaimer: I'm not JK Rowling but I doubt you're surprised by that revelation.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4362 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/01/09 Updated: 04/01/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 10/20/09 Title: Chapter 1: Wormtail on the Hogwarts Express

Nice job! I really liked your other Peter story so when you mentioned this in your Dueling Thread I thought I'd read it too. I love what you do with Peter. You captured his voice very well. You made him way more than the snivelling character we meet later on. I liked his relationship with him mom, and I LOVED reading his transformation for the first time. Great reactions - his friends didn't bat an eye but he was disappointed. Perfect.
I liked the subtle switch to the nicknames after they could all transform. Nice touch.
Meeting Regulus was also a great touch - have you written anything else with him?
And have you written anything about how the Maruaders found out about Remus? Because I would read that in a second! :)
More than anything, though, this story leaves me wanting more, sort of like your other one. The ending does seem a bit abrupt - was losing the map the beginning of the end? It wasn't clear why it ended with that scene, which was part of the reason I wanted to keep reading. I really want to know what happens in between this story and the challenge entry you wrote!
You are very talented and I really enjoy reading your stories.
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Gina. Peter is a bit of a WIP for me, which is probably why it ended a bit abruptly. I was thinking that him losing the map wasn't just where it began to fall apart, but also started showing the differences between James and Sirius, because James is clearly more mature at this stage and less likely to blame Peter.

Oh stop giving me plot bunnies, Remus year two ... eek ... *shoves to back of mind*. Regulus, hmmm, actually I haven't thought of much about him - not sure why. Thanks again. ~Carole~

 

Summary: Harry reads a bedtime story to his children.

** Contains spoilers for The Tales of Beedle the Bard **

Warnings: Epilogue Regarded, Story Sweeter Than Treacle Tart Embedded

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2083 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/02/09 Updated: 04/02/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 04/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Mrs. Bloxam’s Fountain

Very cute! You did a great job twisting Beedle's tale into something so icky-wicky sweet even the kids couldn't stand it. And you make the family feel very natural with lots of nice little touches. And of course you had a tribute to Snape! I liked it, nice job. ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hi, Gina! Thanks! I had fun writing the icky-wicky story, and feel this is probably my most evil fic to date. I'm glad the family dynamic worked for you, as mostly I mother dogs and they don't care one way or the other on storytime. I do love Al. If there's something in a name, what a combination to be saddled with, eh? I predict brave, smart (possibly too much so for his own good) and extremely conflicted.

 

Crouching Father, Hidden Terror by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary:

It's official. Malfoy has murdered sleep.

*A Ron pov outtake to Our Little Secret.*



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 1213 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/09/09 Updated: 04/09/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 04/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

That was very sweet! You write Ron and Hermione very well, and make Rose/Scorpius sound intriguing. Nice job! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Gina! I definitely think Ron and Hermione complement each other and as a couple will always be sexy, no matter how that thought grosses their kids (or some readers, lol) out.

 

Choosing Remus by LadyLupin827
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Why did Dumbledore decide to allow a werewolf to attend school, and why did he select Remus Lupin? Oneshot from Dumbledore's perspective.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2558 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/12/09 Updated: 04/27/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 04/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely story! I really liked how you wrote young Remus and his family, it was very good. I thought Dumbledore was very in character as well. I had never thought about him going out to seek a werewolf child, but assumed that he already knew the Lupins and their situation and accepted Remus anyway. But your reasoning was good, and this line: "Dumbledore firmly believed in the practise of telling people only what they needed to know. Nothing more. Nothing less." was great! Very nice job, I enjoyed reading it and would really enjoy reading another chapter - perhaps Dumbledore's meeting with the Lupins and Remus's reaction? ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Most people figure that Dumbledore knew of the Lupin's situation first, but my thoughts are obviously different, and I'm glad that they made sense. I'm happy that you thought Dumbledore was in character. :) Thanks, but the story is supposed to stand on its own. It's about "why Dumbledore chose Remus," and not about what happened afterwards.

 

Prefects Imperfect by ProfPosky
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 22]

Summary: There were things Lily wondered about. There was another prefect spending the Christmas holidays in Gryffindor Tower. How far will her curiosity take her?

Remus was minding his own business. Suddenly, Lily Evans was his buisness. How long would it stay that way?

Written as something of a gift to a mod who has had to read a mountain of marauder era in recent years.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Slash

Word count: 9668 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
04/16/09 Updated: 06/29/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 04/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lily Goes Lightly

Very nice! Lily and Remus is really a good pairing, in some ways more real given the little we know about her. Are you continuing this? Are they going to sneak around behind James back? Because I'd love to see the reaction when James finds out!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am planning maybe 4-5 chapters at this point, with perhaps a few surprises. I like Remus a great deal. Nothing against Tonks, mind you, but she wasn't a Marauder and I wanted a Marauder era fic, so... There will be sneakery a-go-go. The question is more which backs it will be behind...

 
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I told you I'd come by for a review - sorry it took me so long! Good chapter, and I love cliffhangers! I think the dialogue here is really good - very natural and snappy, teasing and fun. You've given Lily a really nice, warm character and paired her with Lupin very naturally (which I think I might have said before.) I like reading stories like this because it makes me wonder and anticipate all sorts of things: will Remus tell her about being a werewolf? Or will she find out some other way? How will she react? And what about James?? You obviously don't have to answer those questions but a good story gets the readers asking them. :) Good luck as you continue with these two lusty lovebirds! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad it has got you asking questions! I'm not letting them get bedsores though - there's going to be a mix of types of fun and angst in their future...And James...too bad I can't do what I'd like and just eviscerate him in the courtyard...but he's going to have a decent moment here and there... Thanks for the good wishes!

 

Queen of My Heart by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary:

"When Karis was just seventeen years of age,
She left Hogwarts for a life on the stage."


A poem about a canon character's very famous mother!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 371 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/02/09 Updated: 05/02/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 02/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love a good ballad! What an original way to develop this character, both the storyline and the form you chose. I like how the poem you sent me goes with this (I assume?) Very nicely done! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Mmm, the other poem does fit with this one, but that's more to do with the fact that I got a bit fixated on Blaise's mum when I was writing another story. This was a fun poem to write, based on the Flanders and Allen songs. I have to thank VV for those prompts in herbology. Thanks for the review ~Carole~

 

Forever Yours by coolh5000
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 51]

Summary: A year after the battle, Ron decides that he is ready to propose, and does everything he can to ensure his proposal is just right.

After Hermione says yes however, the happy couple quickly discover that planning the perfect wedding is not always easy, and there are plenty of problems to be overcome before they can finally make it down the aisle.



Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 23543 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/04/09 Updated: 02/06/12


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 01/10/12 Title: Chapter 5: Four Weeks

That was so sweet and romantic, I'm grinning broadly! And I'd like a hot, good-listening Australian surfer of my own, please. ;) Seriously, when he appeared I though "OH NO" but he was lovely. I felt bad for him by the time Hermione was telling him everything about Ron! What a nice guy-good job not making him unlikeable. And lovely job with the ending. I could not only feel Ron's nervousness, but I could totally picture them running toward one another, stopping, and then that kiss. YAYAYAY! So, so nice. I'm glad they've resolved things. Can't wait to see how it wraps up. Nice job!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you :) I realise the Australian surfer was a bit of a cliche, but I needed someone a little bit too good to be true to make Hermione realise exactly what she wanted (and you know, he was totally fun to write). I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter - hopefully the last one will be up within a week. ~Hannah

 
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 11/14/11 Title: Chapter 4: Awkward Conversations

Aww, that is really quite sad! I really feel for Ron here. What rotten timing on those accelerated exams, right in the middle of planning a wedding. But Hermione's trip couldn't have come at a better time, really--as long as he can concentrate and not just be miserable.
You (via Hermione) make a very good point: that they've been together since the were eleven. Merlin, that's a long time. It probably would be good for them to spend some time apart. I could wax on about my own personal life here, but I won't, since that has nothing to do with this review, lol - I just hadn't thought about that with them before.
I did notice a typo that sort of made me giggle:" trainee author " - I imagine you meant "trainee auror" but the idea of a trainee author is rather amusing, esp. for Ron. :)
Finally, I wonder if you've thought about using more descriptive narrative in your writing, especially during dialogue. It may be a personal preference, but I wonder if things might feel a bit less rushed if we had a bit more of something like that--descriptive dialogue tags here and there, a bit of action while talking (sounds cliche but people gesture, make faces, pause and sigh and smile and such), some more internal thoughts. It may not be what you were going for with this story, but it was something I've noticed and I hope you don't mind me mentioning it.
All right--be nice to these two. Good luck with the next chapter, I hope it's coming along and Ron and Hermione are cooperating!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Yay, Gina! Thanks so much for all the reviews - it's lovely to hear from you :). I'm glad you've been enjoying the story - the next chapter is planned but has stalled a little due to me being unable to write happy endings :p And yes, I think I probably did mean auror lol - whoops!

Thanks for the comment about the dialogue/narrative balance - Kara mentioned it to me too when she betaed and I think it's something I need to work on. I tend to worry that I'm waffling/being unnecessary when I narrate and so I get bogged down in dialogue instead - I'll try and work on a better balance for the last two chapters.

~Bob

 
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 11/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Question

Hi Hannah! Lovely start. I could totally see Ron going to Harry for advice and proposing at the castle totally makes sense. Way to go, Ron! This was very sweet and I look forward to reading more, even if it takes me a few days to catch up. I'm glad you've come back to it - writing is fun, isn't it? Good luck! ~Gina :)

 
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 11/07/11 Title: Chapter 2: Making Plans

Hi Hannah,
This is really fascinating, because I never really thought about how Hermione would handle a wedding in both worlds. This solution made a lot of sense. And of course Hermione must have other family, so I thought it was neat to see them finally tell her grandmother about her magic.
It felt a bit rushed at times, yet by the end I could see see perfectly why Hermione would be so stressed out and upset with Ron. You totally nailed the feeling of trying to please everyone but yourself (and I speak from experience!) so I feel for them.
Looking forward to the newest chapters soon!
~Gina :)

 
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 3: A Change of Course

Awww, that's very sad for Ron! You write him very well, and I particularly liked his talk with George. The bit with Hermione at work was also really clever and a good twist on the trio coasting through life rather easily after the war. Nice job, Hannah!
~Gina :)

 

The First Drop Of Rain by Rikku
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Lily is sitting alone out on the grounds, pondering her bravery and thinking about the war, when James finds her.


Note: rated 3rd-5th years as a precaution because of a swear word and the mention of murders.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3645 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/04/09 Updated: 05/07/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 09/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: The First Drop Of Rain

Very sweet! I like the idea of something like this bringing them together, in this subtle way. It had a touch of the dark times, but was hopeful as well. Nicely done! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to make a one-shot where there wasn't any drama over the pair of them getting together, so I'm glad you liked it :D

 

Forced To Love by HogwartsDuchess
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 3]

Summary: There is a crisis in the Wizarding Community. In order to stop it, the Ministry must take drastic action. Minister Scrimgouer passes a legislation to preserve the Magical World, but what will the effects be on the witches and wizards of Britain. And what will happen to Ginny Weasley, forced to marry a man she's sworn to hate?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Non-Consensual Sex, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 1294 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
05/12/09 Updated: 05/18/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 05/19/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Vote Is In

Nice start, very original! I like that it's not a pureblood marriage law, like most fics seem to be (although I have never read a marriage law fic myself) You made this very plausible with a great explanation. And I already wonder what Percy's secret is and who will be matched with who if they are deemed acceptable. Good luck as you continue! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Oh, Gina! *hugs* I haven't touched this account in ages and I see I missed lots of reviews in the process. Actually, this story was written and completed in 2006, my first year here and I just haven't finished reposting. I guess I miss my VA status! LOL!

 

Friends in Unlikely Places by Equinox Chick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Hermione Weasley (nee Granger) was always top of the class. Everything she needed to know she found out from books.

But no book can help her bond with her child. Will a chance encounter with a stranger will put her back on the right path?

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1645 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/14/09 Updated: 05/14/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 05/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Natural Mother.

That was wonderful!! First of all, I can totally relate so you nailed the first-time mother shock and panic. And you picked the *perfect* character to write, because I absolutely believe this is how it would have gone for Hermione. But I *loved* how you brought Astoria Malfoy into the story - and set them up on a playdate as well! Great job working with canon by expanding it and making it real. This was just so well written, well paced, and the characters were perfect. Wonderful job, I really liked reading it!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the glowing review, Gina. I don't write a lot of the Trio so I'm particularly pleased that you liked my characterisation of Hermione and the others. The credit for Astoria's appearance really has to go to the wonderful Prof Laura, because she set the prompt.

Carole xxx

 
Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 05/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Natural Mother.

Oh, and I think the idea of continuing it could really work. It doesn't have to be a long chaptered story, just a bit more. Maybe we could see Astoria and Hermione meet up for a few playdates and swap stories, and then when their husbands find out it falls apart. Just an idea! But I totally understand keeping it as a one shot too, it's a nice look into the future. ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Mmm, actually I do like the idea of 'playdates' and the like. I think Hermione would relish the freedom of not being a 'Weasley'. They're a lovely family but must be overwhelming at times.

Thank you for your comments, Gina. It is appreciated. Carole xxx

 

Common Bond by RTTLupin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: I wrote this for the Ravenclaw Almost-Gauntlet prompt:

"Love is the only force capable of transforming an enemy into friend."

Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.


At what point do you look past your differences and begin looking at your similarities? Teddy Lupin is about to find out.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2925 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/24/09 Updated: 05/25/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 06/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Common Bond

Aw, that was very cute! What a great idea, to play Teddy and Victoire against each until the very end. You built both of their characters well and made it believable that they would both hate and like each other. I love how you connected the last bit to the scene from the epilogue; I only would have liked a bit more at the end. Fantastic job with the prompt and really bringing out it's meaning, and in canon! Kudos and good luck in the AG! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Fears - and Hope by luinrina
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: ‘Hope shall die last, Minerva.’

A bright morning, but will it be bright for everyone? Or is the rising sun painting an illusion only?



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 813 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/12/09 Updated: 06/12/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 06/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fears... and Hope: Prologue

That was really well-done! Congrats on first place. You've done a great job with Dumbledore's character, and wrote a perfect interaction between him and McGonagall. What was really neat was that I was trying to figure out what it might be a prologue for, and then at the end when McGonagall says "Just get the Potters to safety." it clicked - how original! I was thinking it was after OotP and yet it was really set long before that - which goes to show how similar the two wars with Voldemort were. Nice writing to be able to throw that twist at the end. This would be a great prologue to a story about getting the Potters to safety that year. Nice job! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Gina. What a lovely review. :)

 

Her War by thechocolatefrog
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Past Featured Story

A set of haiku telling of Molly Weasley's own war against Voldemort.

**Implied character death



Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 176 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/15/09 Updated: 06/15/09


Reviewer: Gmariam Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Her War

I like it! It's very unique - usually if someone tells a story like this through poetry, it would be a ballad. I really like what you've done with the haikus, it's very striking. Unfortunately, since I have no idea what the structure is of a haiku, I can't really comment on that aspect, other than to say I think you had some strong word choices and you did a good job carrying the story through each haiku. Congrats on being a featured story! ~Gina :)

 
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