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Summary: What happens when a Ravenclaw catches Sirius Black's attention? He has a riddle to solve, to find out.
All you have to do is read this story.
That was so cute! I really liked Victoria. She seems like the type of girl who could actually get Sirius. I can see him being intruged by someone like her (which he was). The idea was very cute. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think Sirius needs someone he can talk to like Victoria.
Summary: Lily Evans, Head Girl, has never been reckless. She has been reliable and careful, thinking through everything before making decisions. But when she recklessly takes on a challenge by Amelia Lance to see who can make James Potter fall for her by the Easter holidays, her life goes from orderly to complicated. However, Lily thinks she's got it under control. After all, this is James Potter, the boy who, at least, used to like her and ask her out. Winning this challenge should be child’s play, right?
It's amazing how wrong a girl can be...
This is a really good start! I can't wait to see where you take this. The writing had a nice flow and I love the characterization of Lily and James, I also like how you've managed to make their relationship more complex than Lily-hates-James/James-drools-over-Lily. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi! I\'m glad you want to continue reading this fanfiction. And I hope you\'ll continue to want to read the next chapter, and the one after the next. Thank you for the review!
Summary: It's the Marauders' Seventh Year, and Remus, Peter, and Sirius are getting tired of James mooning over Lily. Their solution? Write an anonymous love letter, and leave it a classroom!
I'm sorry, but this fic is going on semi-permanent hiatus. I ran out of ideas
This is an interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it. I like the idea of a letter trail, but I do hope that James takes over the letters and it isn't Remus and Sirius the whole time.
I'll definitely keep an eye out for the next chapter!
I found one mistake:
"Much better then mine!”
'Then' should be 'than'.
Author's Response: James will take over the letters soon, I promise. Thanks so much for reading my story! Kate
Summary: Lily's infamous preference for the Giant Squid over James Potter leads to a promise she just might regret. Be careful what you say, otherwise your friends may make you eat your words!
That was cute! I loved how Sirius knew where she was. It was very Sirius, and I laughed out loud. It was unique for an Lily/James fic and I enjoyed it very much! Thanks!
Author's Response: You\'re very welcome! =] I figured Lily had to get busted somehow or another, and it just seemed like something Sirius would be able to figure out... that\'s just how he is =]
Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.
Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.
Oh gosh, I just read the whole thing, and I enjoyed it immensely. My sentimental heart is beating wildly. I really like the character you've given Scorpius and I love his relationship with Rose. You've managed to give depth to both Scorpius and Rose, two characters we have basically no background on, and that's impressive. I can't wait to find out what happens.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad I made your heart beat wildly, lol. This was such a lovely review, and I really admire your writing, so it made me smile. Thanks again, love. :]
Summary: Lily Evans comes across a beautiful green book. She decides to use it as a diary and records the funniest, saddest, most exciting events inside of it.
(starts in the summer before her second year)
I never really understood why people wrote in dairies. I still don't and I write in one. I named mine White Lilies. I can't explain now though, I think Petunia's about to blow.
Five, Four, Three, Two ....
"What do you mean Lily has a friend from school coming over! I don't want any more Freaks in this house then we already do! Make them leave!" My sister, everyone. Boy, this is going to be one long day.
This is an interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it. I really like your description of the diary and where Lily got it. There are a lot of diary stories, but this one seems unique. I'll keep an eye out for it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've read a few of those diary stories and it's kind of clichéd now, but I thought that maybe, hopefully, I could make a unique one. I've also thought about not doing it in diary form/ part diary form but it wouldn't work with my plot. I'm so glad that you think that it's one of the unique ones!
Summary: There were three things Lily Potter and Rose Weasley knew they had in common. They both shared their names with rather popular flowers, they had both inherited the Weasley red hair and freckles gene, and they both had fairly famous fathers.
But there was still one unfortunate similarity that Rose and Lily were ignorant to: they had both grown a strong interest in the enemy. And the fact that both Rose and Lily shared a common ‘enemy’ only increased the undesirability of the circumstance. Oh, and by ‘enemy’ they meant Scorpius Malfoy.
‘I don’t understand you, Malfoy.’
He smirked. ‘You don’t have to.’
I really like this story! I love Rose/Scorpius and this is a unique way to present their relationship. I can't wait to see what happens with Lily! I'll definitely keep reading!
Author's Response: Thanks kask! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) Next chapter should be up shortly! ~ Cassie
It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.
*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*
I really like this story! I'm a crazy Rose/Scorpius fan, so any fic, I'm there! But this has a bit of a twist and I love it! I'm really curious about Rose. Is she just awful at Potions, so awful that Albus has to help her? Or is it something more? I dabbed in the theory that maybe Rose couldn't read, but that seemed kind of ridiculous even to me. Haha. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! Love the story! :)
Thank you for liking the story! Rose isn't awful at Potions, she's just a different type of learner, who learns by experiencing/doing. I had her explain it in the second chapter:
His footsteps were eerily quiet. "How do you do it?" Malfoy asked when he returned. "Make top marks."
If he'd been patronising, implying she had a learning disability or must cheat, she wouldn't have answered. She used a drying spell on the cauldron. "What I write down, I remember. A new potion's tricky, but once I go through the steps, have the directions down, I can brew it perfectly every time."
So yes, absolutely, it's something more, and your theory just shows you have a good imagination that explores all posibilities. :)
Summary: Five Reasons to Hate James Potter II:
1. He's arrogant (thinks he's the best thing to come into Quidditch... ha! Being a five time winner of Witch Weekly's most charming smile does not make you a Quidditch star)
2. He's a womanizer (there's only so many fans you can please, James)
3. He calls me a bad Seeker (oh, I'm sorry, I must have gotten the wrong impression when I caught the Snitch in front of your face twenty times)
4. On a broader note, he insults me in his interviews (honestly, my jabs aren't nearly as horrible)
5. He has this nagging little thing where he criticizes everything I do (next he's going to be telling me that I shouldn't start dating Felix Lupin)
If you ever ask Libby MacFarlan about James Potter II, prepare yourself for a long speech. She hates him. End of story. But when Quidditch rivalries get personal, egos start clashing and they soon find themselves in the midst of a scandal, involving nosy paparazzi, insulting news articles, obsessive fans, and one very jealous Felix Lupin. This could get complicated....
Excerpt from Chapter 7: The Kiss:
There had been the after party with her friends. Her parents had decided not to attend, Hamish feeling that he was too old for such parties. Nevertheless, the rest of the Montrose Magpies attended… and there had been drinks. Oh, Merlin. She must have gotten drunk again. That explained the hangover. And where in the world was her shirt?
Libby pulled herself up in a seated position, rubbing her temples. She found her shirt lying on a vase on the coffee table, carelessly thrown aside. She shivered and covered herself with a blanket. Felix suddenly jumped awake and averted his eyes when he saw Libby.
“Oh, you’re awake,” he said. Slowly, he got up and walked across the room, headed towards the kitchen area. “Would you like some juice?” he asked, turning to look at her.
She turned around. “Y-y-y-yes,” she yawned. “Felix, what happened last night?”
I like this a lot, but I'm a little confused. How old is James Potter compared to Libby? He must be between thirty-two and fifty. And he's related to Libby by blood? You said you were considering putting them together, yet the age difference and relation makes the pair kind of odd. And you said that he was like her uncle? Why does he act that way toward her? I can't see any Potter treating a family member (niece) like that, not even James Potter I.
I do like the story! I'm just confused. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and replying! Okay, so (I should really put up the relations) James is not related by blood to Libby. He is related to Cecelia and Bernadette through their grandparents (his parents) and Bernadette is related to Libby from her father's side of the family. Oh, boy. I should really put something up. He is seventeen years older (making the age gap bigger than the one Remus and Tonks had) and when the children were younger (and he was in his earlier years), he treated all the children like family (since Libby was so close to the other ones). Then the Quidditch teams hit and the rivalries sparked (mainly started because of Libby, but she doesn't like to admit it). James wouldn't have acted so much this way, but Libby was so insistent upon the whole idea that it just started getting on his nerves. That's how the Quidditch rivalry started. I hope that clears things up. Again, I'm glad you liked the story and thank you for reviewing.