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This is really amazin, please please (pwease?) update soon because I don't know if I can stand the tension ^^ It's really good and I hope you post more really soon!
Author's Response: Wow, i'm being showered with compliments here. I'm starting to blush...thanks alot! Keep reading and reviewing!
Heh! I luffs it! *glomps* I think the characters are portrayed really well and you'd better update soon *growls* There's some really funny bits in there too, like the 'killing of the broom!' Keep it up m'dear!
Author's Response: -snuggles- Aw... Thanks me dear ^^ That means a lot to meh -clingys-
Brilliant, just read the whole thing and I must say that it is very well written, the characters are very clear as well. I laughed out loud during the sixth chapter (which caused several weird looks in my direction) Please update soon, this is my favourite story at the moment and I seriously need more! xD Well done!
Author's Response: aww thanks! ahh i know how it feels to get those weird looks. my family thinks i'm nuts. but that's alright, as long as it's a good laugh, it's all worth it.
Yesh! I am first to review! I have never been first at anything! Anyway, I'd just like to say that I really like this story, especially the added comments like 'Oh I bet he did.' Ect. Anyways, I really liked James' characters and I think it was good because you showed Lily's vicious side, which many leave out and think hse'd just yell at the boys, when I don't think she would, because otherwise she wouldn't have threatened Sirius and James at the lakeside with her wand....Anyways, I'm going off the point. I really hope you update this, and update soon! Also I hope the next chapter is a little longer, I know it's a lot to ask, but please? As an...an easter present to me? As your first reviewer? Well Anyways, keep up the good writing! xD Cheers for listening to me ramble on, brillo story 10!
Author's Response: Yes ma'am, the next chapter is longer...just for you! And I did like Lily's vicious side too, reminds me of well...me! I put a little bit of me into her, I tought it be a nice touch. And James? Well, I just made him give up. But he'll regret that, don't you think?!
Chapter 6 is 40% complete
I've already reviewed once but I am here to tell you that if you do not update soon I will personally eat your face! xD Heh. But please update!!
Author's Response: actually I did sent a chapter up. I dunno why isn't not being validated though... if nothing works out by tomorrow I'll email one of the moderators. Don't eat my face just yet... I know it's yummy... but I like to leave that for Draco... Mmmm... and maybe James too.
I luffs it! *huggles fanfic* Aheh....yesh. Well update soon, pretty please because I want to know more! The suspense will kill me!
*Squee!* Absolutely loved it! And thank you for updating! Heh. I guess you can keep your face now. Anyways, brilliant story, I thought the way Potter looks after the kiss was amazingly well described! Thank you so much for this brill fic! ^^
So ultimately random that I absolutely loved it! *huggles* I actually had to put my hand in my mouth 'cause I read it in class and I coudn't stop laughing. This is such a funny fic and it's soooo my sense of humour! I was actually crying from laughing so much! xD Very funny, well executed humour with brilliant characters! ^^
Author's Response: Haha, I can't get my fist in my mouth. I just tried. It hurt. Thanks for cool review!
Brilliant! I love this story, please update soon! Great long chapter, characters were really in depth and you stayed in character really well. I really enjoyed it, so please, udate soon, please? 10/10
OMG! I sooo totally love it! ^^ That bit with Lily and the ribes was so funny, priceless! xD Please update soon, pweety, pwease?
I'm loving this story, seriously. I love the different spin you've given Lily and James' relationship, about James being powerful. And I think that you've hit the spot with Lily being innocent and cute! Bless. The characters are brillaintly written, and I'm dying for the next chapter to come out. I sense a little bit of a fight coming along, but that's just me, you're story really is fan-tabby and I hope you update soon. I especially liked the scene in the common room when Lily came down and the way you described James' feelings over Lily in the dance was brilliant, I really felt like I was there watching them. Anyway, I have probably written a really long review, but I just wanted to tell you how good I thought it was! So please, please, please update soon, pwease? xD Cheers for listening! 10!
Author's Response: omg! thank you soo much for the wonderful review!!! i just sent in my next chapter and it will be out soon...i loved reading your review it was so precise!