If you don't know who Jim McGuffin is...you should be ashamed to call yourself a Harry Potter fan. I'm sorry. Oh, and all you Hufflepuffs/Hufflepuff fans, I'm sorry to tell you that you're in the loser house. Hufflepuff is where Hogwarts tosses all the students who are not particularly intelligent, brave, or prone to becoming Death Eaters. But I can't talk...I got put in Hufflepuff on the Mugglenet forums.
Okay, so I'd just like to tell you that I don't read fanfictions all too much. My best friend does and she emailed me the link to your story and titled her email "tear-jerker" so I was like, what the hey, I'll read it. I didn't expect to cry though. I never do. People always tell me "Oh, read this, you'll cry!" and I never do. Well, your story made me cry. And now the spray-on tan on my face for prom in 2 days is probably all streaky. Gaah.
I love this story. I'm extremely impressed. You've come a long way as a writer I think. However, I too caught that mistake that hogwartsduchess caught. ; )
Author's Response: I Heart you, Mrs Jim McGuffin. You make me feel so good about my life. Liz didn\'t really like this stroy, but I\'m glad some people do! Congrats on noticing the mistakes that I didn\'t. Thanks for the reviews!
You've inspired me to write a songfic so now I'm writing one. = D
Author's Response: Aww! I can\'t wait to read that one! Shoddy on Beta-ing it!
This story smells like an elderly lady's dentures that haven't been brushed in 49 days.
But I LOVE IT!!!!!!
You are an amazing writer! You are my idol! BFFE!!11!!!1
Author's Response: Enthusiasm much??!!
You smell like the scum at the back of the freezer. I love your story!!!!
Peace, Love, and Happiness to you.
Author's Response: Ya, well your face smells like the scum at the back of the freezer...
(How d'ya like that one-word review?)
Author's Response: Because, Shut up! That\'s why!
Snape Rape! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!
No really, its a good story.
But it's a bit dark for you. I'm worried about your psychological well-being. Are you sad? How does that make you feel? Do you ever contemplate suicide? How do you get along with your parents? Your friends?
No really, I like it. Not one of your best stories, but very good.
Author's Response: No. I feel happy. No again. Fine. Brilliantly. *not one of my best stories, eh?!* That\'s just because you\'d rather read a cliché and fluffy story where, before Snae gets her, Sirius randomly pops up and saves the day then makes out with Nell, and NO! That was absolutely NOT the original plotline!
Author's Response: Oh yes, thanks for the review... *smiles*