"Crawling slowly like a dying snail?" interesting comparison, but other than that, great story. I'm anxious to see what's gotten into Harry. Did Voldemort put an Imperius curse on him?
Author's Response: Thank you! Don\'t worry, chapter 4 is on the way. And to answer your question, you\'ll have to wait and see.
I know my poem was too deep, so I submitted a new, funnier one titled "A Day in the Sun". I have been waiting a while to get a response, so I don't know how long it will be before you can read it, or I can edit it. Please keep reviewing!
Awwwww, that was so romantic! It had me giggling anxiously throughout. I loved it!
Author's Response: :D Thank you!