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Summary:

"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 07/22/06 Title: Chapter 22: Twice Defied

Before I finish the rest of the story, I have to say: WHY DIDN'T THEY JUST GET A PORTKEY BACK TO HOGWARTS?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY'RE SUCH IDIOTS!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 07/22/06 Title: Chapter 60: Moving On

OMG!!! I love this story! I laughed, I came close to tears, and I can't wait to read the sequel!!! Here's the answers:

Quote: "Well you see, our dear old professor was wandering down the hall as we saw. And I asumed he was drunk and I think I assumed correct. So, I just told him that the starving children at Durmstrang needed the cake and he said, 'Well that doesn't surprise me.' So I got this," James explained.

Favorite JKR created Character: Too hard to chose. Remus I guess. Or Sirius.

Favorite OC: Grace. She had a small bit, but she was a really powerful character, sacrificing herself for Katy.

Least Favorite Villain: Not sure. Peter I suppose because he's such an idiot. Just because his friends have girlfriends and he doesn't he becomes a DE??? I know he felt bad for it, but he's way too weak. My favorite villain though, was Venus because she's such a phsyco.

Favorite Part: Chapter 28: More Drunken Tides. I love that chapter!

Next Fic Advice: Halle should die. I have nothing against Halle, but that way it'll fit into the HP series.

Favorite Couple: This one's REALLY hard. Of course I love Lily and James, and Sirius and Halle are awesome, but I think I really love Remus and Katy. Remus is so cute!!!

Didn't Like: I don't know. That's really hard. I thought James & co. were idiots for not making a Portkey once they had Lily and Sybll in the first battle. By the way, Sybll has an I in it(Sybill).

Write more fics, because you're a REALLY great writer. I'm recommending this to all my friends.

 

Through the Fire by Croyez
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 250]

Summary: It all starts out with a meeting. Little do Harry and Hermione know what problems and dilemmas will surface along with their secret relationship. Hearts are shattered, prophecies are spoken, disappearances occur, dark plans are schemed, and discoveries beyond their understanding are made. Can their relationship withstand the perils it is subject to? Will their fate and worries stand in the way of true love? They can only hope not…



The air was suddenly filled with Hermione’s screams. They reverberated off the walls, echoed in the space…in Harry’s head…he felt as if he were sharing her pain, as if he were the one under the curse. He couldn’t take it. He couldn’t see her in such pain, maybe even wishing, like he had earlier, to die…for it to end…

He didn’t notice it when his hand began loosening its grip on the edge. He didn’t notice it until he began to fall to the ground, but as soon as he did, he pointed his wand at Voldemort. He felt seventeen years of suffering, seventeen years of mystery and trials…he felt hatred like he had never experienced before, pouring out of him. He felt every single thing that had happened to him on Voldemort’s account, rising to the surface, almost drowning him in a mix of emotions.

And then, he yelled, with all his might, “Avada Kedavra!”

He wished for it all to end…for it to be over…



The Last Chapter (Twenty) is up on [July/12] Thank you so much, Stephanie!


H/Hr, and Book 1-5!Hermione! will only sink when there are none loyal to them. So there.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 120337 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 08/04/05


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 01/18/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Masked Ball

They are like 17 and they are getting married? ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!?!?!? Aside from that it's agreat story. I feel so bad for Ron

Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, I guess so. I never really found that odd...they're in love. And besides, they are just engaged. It could be a long time before they marry, you know. =)
Ron is a very miserable character in my fic. I feel sorry for him, too when I write, but I favor H/Hr, so, Ron will just have to take all that for the sake of my fic. =D
Thanks, and I hope you continue reading.

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 01/19/05 Title: Chapter 6: Bliss...

Great Story! Great Banner!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like this next chaper. =)

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/22/05 Title: None

It's good, but I get bored with a story if it isn't updated *stares pointedly at author*

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/22/05 Title: None

It's good, but I get bored with a story if it isn't updated *stares pointedly at author*

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/22/05 Title: None

It's good, but I get bored with a story if it isn't updated *stares pointedly at author*

 

Summary: Slash- One Shot-Remus/Sirius. When Remus and Sirius are forced into yet another detention together a heartfelt conversation takes place between the two of the them.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 2174 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Detention for Two

*twitch* Regulus! Why is everyone so prejudiced against Sirius and Remus? What's wrong with true love? Anyway, I loved the fic. It was cute and I love seeing Remus and Sirius interact together. They're so cute!

 

The Summer Before 6th Year by Terri
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 109]

Summary: Summer after losing Sirius, with Voldemort growing stronger, how will Harry cope?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 58422 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/14/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Tat was the best story here! It is amazing! You should write more stories. Ever think of becoming a professional author?

 

The Mourning After by pluto
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Lupin returns to Grimmauld Place after the events of the night before at the Ministry of Magic. Sirius/Lupin romance, but not ridiculously so.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 826 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lupin Returns

Ohhh... Remus! This is so sad. This is really good. And I like the title. It struck me as much funnier than it probably is because I'm bloody tired. You should post moreof you fanficsd.

 

Summary: My very first fanfiction I've come to create after pining away the days to the coming sixth book...sigh...


Harry and his friends return to Hogwarts after a very intense fifth year, and find themselves once again amidst the harsh realitites of the coming Wizarding World war. Lots of action, danger and maybe even a little unexpected romance...(What else would it be for Harry?) Read and then review if you'd like! ^_^

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 96201 Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 01/13/05


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 12/23/04 Title: Chapter 27: 27 - A Day of Almosts and Broken Attempts

You are such a great writer! It's like this is a real JKR story! This is my favorite general fic. Please, PLEASE, write as much as you can. I NEED to read this. By the way, have you considered publishing a story? You coould definateley write one! And you should take this whole review as the biggest compliment you'll ever get in your life beacause a)I am the BIGGEST Harry Potter fan in the world and b)I read a lot so I know what makes a good story.

Author's Response: Oh wow, that's incredibly nice of you! Yes, I am considering publishing my own fantasy fic story, but it has only been started and I want to buy a new notebook so I can write whenever I need to. When I do publish a story, I am sure you will all be the first ones to know...for know I am just testing the waters here and seeing what I can do with the ideas in my head! ^_^ Thanks so much again!

 

Bloody Valentine by innocence_wasted
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 32]

Summary: His memories brought him back to the letter and her sobbing frame as it crumpled in his arms… “You don’t deserve her,” he whispered and then let fly the blade. *songfic*. One-shot.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1976 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 11/09/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Bloody Valentine

Note: This is my friend Kate speaking. She doesn't have her own account. I loved this fan fic mostly because that song is one of my faveorites! Good Charlotte is my life and i have been trying to find a GC and HP fan fic. I also have 1 more thing to say... Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji Benji

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 01/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: Bloody Valentine

what the-?That...is...seriously... messed... up. She forgives him? How could she forgive him. Harry: *kills Neville, Luna's boyfriend* Harry: I did it for us Luna Luna: Oh Harry, I love you! Now doesn't that sound messed up?

Author's Response: yes it does..the bad guy doesn't always lose you know..hehe..

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 12/08/04 Title: None

I must keep reading it!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: None

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Summary: Like the earlier fan fic 'As Hogwarts Turns' by fellow moderator Seren, " this has been written for the sole purpose of explaining exactly what NOT to do in a fiction. Odd chapters are the originally bad chapters." If this fan fic doesn't make any sense, it is doing its job right. You have been warned. Thankyou.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3530 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 11/09/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 08/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: One shot (thank goodness!)

I agree with winterdream. It was hilarious!!!But I don't advise EVERYONE to read this, like younger kids.

 

Wanton by painterchica
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: James tries to play matchmaker to the feuding canines. Remus/Sirius. Fun, fluffy ficlet.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1300 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/12/04 Updated: 11/12/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wanton

I love Sirius! This fic made me laaugh enough to partially wake me up form my stupor. It's nearly 3 in the mornifng, but this was funn yenough to half wake me up. Which is saying something. I loe you S/R fics!

 

Flatmates by pluto
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Different style. A glimpse into Sirius and Lupin's lives pre-Azkaban. Just one take on many speculations. There will be more...

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1996 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
11/13/04 Updated: 11/14/04


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 12/05/06 Title: Chapter 2: Mrs. McKinnon

I just read this again and I'm reviewing it now that I'm more awake. I really liked this! It was cute. There's nothing that really needs improving.

I also want to say that I was reading the other reviews for this and everyone seems really upset that you ended it there. I get it. I understand why you ended it there. But now that they bring it up, it would be nice if you added more chapters. Please?

 
Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 2: Mrs. McKinnon

I like the way it was told from another character's point of view. She's funny. I can't realy write a better reiew than that because I'm really tired. Good fic. You should write more

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Potter_freak0515 Signed
Date: 03/11/05 Title: None

Wonderful story! I give it a 10!!!!

 
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